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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

Oh wow this story has taken a new shape since I read it last.. just wow dear! You are writing an awesome story as its just wonderful and my absolute honor to read such a fantastic piece of writing 😊 I love the way of your writing, esp the last two chapters, you wrote is brilliantly. I though NK evil thoughts will come out and thn Khushi will leave him but you left me surprised and it was actually a great surprise that she realized that she will be more than happy with Arnav. And our dear hero of the story, his actions clearly shows how much he loves her, took all blame on himself, wow! Eagerly waiting for the next.. lets see what you hold in your treasure box 😊 And that VM was fantastic too, great job done 👏

Apologies for the late comment, was quite busy in real life which was keeping me away from Arshi dreamland 😊

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koisk

@koisk

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

That was so emotional update, clearly shows how both of them need each other. And the vim was awesome, portrayed their emotions so aptly.. Wonder which way the story would go now.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

such an emotional updt...
bt glad dat khushi left nk nd realised dat he was nt da right person 4 her..she took da perfect decision..
bt itna kuch hone k bad v arnav still cared for her and warned NK to take care of her..
khushi's parents become shocked nd by dis new revelation..dey r also hurt as arshi break der trust..bt dey more hurt because dey consider arnav as der son nd cant digest da fact dat he do all dis 4 a property..wht a drastic twist in da story...
both arshi wanted 2 b with eachother
bt destiny played cruel game with these 2 poor souls...
bt glad dat finally arnav realised dat he love khushi..
i hope everything will b alright soon...
continue soon.

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

sry forgot 2 tell dat da VM was awsum..jst amazing...how beautifully u show der pain..der emotions..

loved it:)

Edited by arshi_sush - 12 years ago

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ILoveFF

@ILoveFF

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

awesome update... it was beautiful

i cried and felt the pain so much.

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CRAZY4CARTOON

@CRAZY4CARTOON

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

nyc
khushi made perfect decision by
leaving Nk

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starsarun

@starsarun

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

VM is very beautiful Di. It shows the feelings of Arnav and Khushi in this update. There Arnav realized that he loves Khushi and Khushi too realized may be Arnav loves her.
One thing I must say Di, Arnav too had never tried to do something to make Khushi realize his feelings. He had just always lashed out on her when ever possesiveness came over him seeing her with NK.

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aayt

@aayt

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

this update was expected n unexpected events happened between them

NK n khushi was not meant to be with eachother that was what we knew

n I'd be surprised if khushi left with NK after what happened n how cowardly he behaved

when u r in love madly with someone n that person's life in danger nothing matter more then to save the person to be with her no logic no rational thoughts n he behaved nothing matter more then himself n moreover audacity of that man no shame in his eyes when he came to her like nothing happened

arnav finely cum around what she is to him his ego is big but at that point it was justified he did what he feel like doing for his self respect

it was painful for him specially man like him who has no one he can called his the one he thought left him in front of his eyes in another man's arms but he still threatened that guy for her well being

for the first time our blinded in NK's love khushi try to find what is happening around her

she for the first time paid head y arnav behaved this way n gladly successful to find atleast something

realized he has feeling for her but confused soul didn't realize he guarded himself

took a wise decision first time to go back to him but luck was not in her favor

n unexpected part was shashi came to know the truth

n moreover arnav took blame for all that was worse part

shushi accused him for something that his daughter did n to that extent let the beast in him came out

he kicked them out of his house khushi was once again played coward here to keep herself mute

made the situation more complicated for both of them

can't wait what next store for us hope next update soon

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

That was super fantabulous update :D
Loved it

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Asrkkgsr

@Asrkkgsr

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#350

emotional part.feeling bad for arshi.shashi emotion being justified.i hope arshi will came out from this mess soon.what will be khushis next move?eill arshi unite soon?

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