ARSHI SS: Between the Lines-CHP 9-PG 133/Link 2 Th2!

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Leena

@LeenaRocks

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#691

Ohh that was short!! real short! :)

Nevertheless a much needed one wrt the content!

Enjoyed it .. and got a lill emotional too ... being reminded of my childhood days...

Anyways ... thanks for the update ... and i hope to get the next update before weekend as promised! :)

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Farha Naz

@farha_ipkknd

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#692

it's an emotional update ..if khushi's childhood makes you feel warm & nostalgic, arnav's past will surely make you feel bad..two strangers under one roof sharing their memories...I so want khushi to go & comfort that poor soul...waiting for the next update :)

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.ButterCup.

@.ButterCup.

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#693

Superb update..

arshi's conversation in kitchen was awesome..

and arnav's teasing comment on khushi that if he was dressed or not..lol😆...khushi refresh her childhood memories..and shared her memories with arnav...and poor arnav consider himself unlucky, that he didn't get love from his parents..

hmm waiting for some arshi's moments in rain..😳..

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sb1234

@sb1234

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#694

lovely update .. cant wait for the next part .. the rains .. wow !!!

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bhoomigowda

@bhoomigowda

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#695

Good one. I love the carefree banter between arnav & khushi, it really brings out a smile and I can go on reading it without you telling the actual story. Both arnav & khushi are very comfortable with each other and it was evident with the easy conversation they have,sharing their personal life even though they have hardly known each other. I loved the way you have sketched arnav's character, he might seem to be indifferent towards his parents but still there is a kid inside him carving for his parents love & warmth.

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pravallika

@pravallika

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#696

Wow!!!!!nice update..
Loved kushi nd arnav convo before food.
But why did arnav choke when she said her father is a navyman and his name?????
Waiting for the interesting plot in rain... 😉

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SHALINI

@valeyrie

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#697

loved the update... Arnav and Khushi's convo was really good..
Arnav saying that 'not all parents love their children' is some what i feel a matter of perspectives. Parents always want good for their children and it sometimes doesn't seem to them that children can make a living out of some unconventional (in our society that is) methods also, like writing or arts.

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ara_000

@ara_000

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#698

mindblowing chappy 👍🏼

finally arnav cums to knw abt khushi's family nd she also got to knw abt his family nd now she can guess very well dat arnav does not share a good rltnship wit his family..!

I loved it how he hold khushi's hands as if to give her support silently..!

D way she said dat he was sleeping like a baby nd arnav smirked saying how can she knw nd den his teasing nd her blush,awww uber cute ❤️

nice chappy 👏

waiting for d nxt one now 😳

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Arshi16

@sushmapatil

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#699

hey.this is the first time am commenting on ur ff...i have read all of them all r just too good...what i like most is the arnav character in all your stories..i have read so many ff but in most of them they show so much of negativity in them which i am not a big fan...coming to this ss it is just superb...i liked it very much...will be waiting for the next update.

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Addicted87

@Addicted87

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#700

When you have wanted something your entire life and still yearn for it and then you meet a person who has exactly that, how do u possibly react to that?!?! I guess the way Arnav did... Felt even worse for him after all this. The man is unbelievably successful doing what he loves , yet he has to hide himself from the rest of the world...😡

Anyways Im looking forward to the next one... Its raining and VK isnt around, that sure makes an interesting situation...!😊