3 Men & A Baby intro &ch 1up pg1 6/8

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"Please leave her we are here to take her" says the lady

She is wailing shhh princess hush don't cry sweetheart says shree and rocks her

"You can't just take her like this Khushi is ours "yells Sameer

She tries to take her again

"Don't you dare tiuch our daughter samhje ya samjao"yells arjun

"We are from social services don't tell us what we can and can't do. Without formal adoption or legally being the parent of this baby".

" Is against the law and your guys is track record is not very good".

"Looking at all 3 of you 'Your reckless behavior and character doesn't seem right for this baby to be brought up in such an environment'.

"Excuse me how dare you don't tech us the law we are ETF officer we know the law in and out samahje ya samjao. Barks Arjun

"And what do you mean our character huh?what hell do you even know about us' yells sam

"That you 3 are womanizers, you drink, stay out late and come homelate due to personal and professional reasons" . says the social service woman

"5 months back we were exactly that way but now we have changed , we don't drink only occasionally ,and we don't bring any woman home any more at night". Says arjun

"Yes and no one leaves Khushi alone she is either with Me,sam or ajun and durning work she is with Arjun's nani" says shree

" How can you 3 bring up a baby girl what will happen in future "?

"Will won't get married khushi is our number 1 priority and that's all that matters". Says arjun

Emotionally taking descions is not right men , ok fine even if you don't marry not now. "But in about 12 or 13 yrs khushi will need a woman to handle her once she herself becomes a woman during that young tender delicate time even the 3 of you won't be able to handle her then what?" Says the social service woman

"My nani's is there nothing to worry" says arjun

"How old is your nani Mr Rawte?"asks the social service lady

78 says arjun

"Well you think your ani will stay till she is 92? Really" asks the social service lady

" Wait that's not an issue my Di she is there" says Sameer

"And my mom as well" says shree

"Fine one mouth ill will see and keep an eye all you if you pass then I may consider but I can and will drop by occasionally to see how everything is " says the lady

And is about to leave

Khushi is crying arjun take her she is hungry I'll go and make her food till then

arjun takes her come here my angel

Suddenly she pee's on him

"Aww you feel better huh do you' he tickles her come lets go change you' papa ki jaan" says arjun

"Arjun the new diaper are to the right behnd the baby powder and put her the new frock its quite hot "says sam

She is lost and in awe

"Shall we" says sam and escorts the lady out


outside in her car

hello they are doing a fabulous job there is nothing to worry about your baby is in safe hands says the lady


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Their known for their amazing capability and sharp intelligence of catching the most cunning, cold blooded crafty criminals in India. As being Part Of ETF might seem strenuous due to the vigorous and crazy timing and state of affairs, they are faced with night and day.

They are Practical on call whenever needed just like a doctor is , one would think they life is boring and they would be dog tired after playing super cop all day. But that isn't at all what their personal life is . reality is this

"Yaar Rawte hot chick checking you out at your 2 o clock "says sam while sipping his whisky

"Oh please im not gonna turn and even look if she wants me let her come near the devil himself" said arjun while biting the lime after drinking his tequila shots

"Dude she is into you if not id go try my luck damn she is sexy "said sam

" I bet she is but what fun is it if there isn't alil tease huh let her get a lil restless then the game will be on" said arjun while gesturing the waiter to come near the table

Arjun brusted into laughter "god sam just look at are techno geek tonight he is pulling out his break dancing steps to impress that Ms. Micro mini "says arjun

Sam turned and looked and shook his head "well let's see hota kya hai let's see if he gets a chance to play and hit a home run or get strikes out in the first inning only" says sam

They see the girl dancing with shree and whispers something in his ear

Sree walks over to table and says

"Guys ill see you in morning and yeah don't bother to knock on door and wake me I'm probably sleep in late thank god for weekend "says shree

"O scored not bad geeky" says arjun

"Enjoy man just don't make too much noise yaar don't forget we 3 share a house "says sam

"Your are telling me this sam come on …are rooms are thankfull aways apart mine downstairs and your upstairs to left and arjun upstairs far right" says Shree

"That only if you not decide to use the guest room which is in middle of both r rooms" says arjun

"Yaar don't worry that was just once my room ac had broken now you guys go try your luck and woe your next shikar I'll head out tina is waiting" and with that he left

"Well my drink is done ill get one at bar what anything" asks arjun

" Nope ill just snack and enjoy the sexy view from here you go" says sam while snacking on some nachos

"One beer and cheese fries " arjun said

He was waiting for his order when he saw the girl who had checked him out went to sam and pulled him bu his jacket collar to dance floor he noticed sam wink at arjun .

arjun mouthed "she is all yours take her" and smiled

he noticed a girl sting next to him looking at the door and hen here watch

she dialed a number

" sona that bloody $%#@ stood me up that's reason I hate &*$# blind dates thanks for nothing"

she said and slammed her iPhone on the counter

"one caramel apple martini extra strong" she said running her hand through her hair in fruststran

"rule number 1 never go on blind dates 95% they are hell.

"According to our man code when there pretty girl like you is distressed we cant see her like that

seem lonely need company" asked arjun

"you say this to every girl you pick up in this club" she asked

I wont lie …usually yes any problem…says arjun

No not at all livin in mans world you have the mentally of man and not a emotional Bitch

My place or yours she said brazenly while savoring her martni

I like … Mine shall we …your name

She gulped her martini in one go and said Shakshi Anand

His cell rang excuse me just a second says arjun

Sure ill just run to ladies room an come she said

I see you heading home with lady in red have fun in ur lions den I'm heading home as well so don't disturb us in my chamber with Ms. Sugar lips damn she kissing good

He shook his head

Enjoy man don't worry no will bother you we all will be busy samjhe y samajo

She was in the ladies room and dialed a number

Hello yes don't worry birds have been caged by myself, tina and Radhika everything is going preplanned now just tommrow morning exactly and 9am make sure the its delivered at their place they will get a zor ka jhatka zor se says shakshi

"Good I'll handle that it will be there at 9 sharp and ill keep calling you from time to time make sure you change your sim card every few days and haan not one mistake they are ETF… if you can't do your job then I''l find someone else " says the voice

"Have faith when where done with them ,sleeping around forget even talking to girsl they wont have it in them. Pain, dhoka and emotional attactment they will realize what all that really is"

"Ok I'll go he is waiting and radika already left with Sameer Rathore

I'll talk to you tommrow" says shakshi

"Sorry line was long to many waisted females I tell you any way shall we she "said seductively

They reached his huge house

As they walked in they saw Sameer and radhika walk in at the same time

She looked at him like who are these people

"He is my best friend sam since college and his girl don't mind them we share this place there is one more shree "he is busy in his room

The guys hi-fived each other and took their ladies in their respective rooms which the called den and chamber

Next morning 9 am

he was up early due to the ringing of the bell

"God yaar har roz dood wala ki liye why do I have to open the door that hp can't come early he mumbled

shree opened the door his eye popped and then he read the letter

"AAGA(shit in Bengali) ….bi??ha uhu("oh crap" in Bengali)" said shree and ran upstairs and banged on arjun's and sameers door like a mad man

"Damn it who the hell" barked sam

"Teri tho" said arjun they both jump out of bed and opend the door

Arjun pinned shree to railing of stiars

"Damn it acha morning romance was going on and you what the hell happened" barked arjun

"I was trying get some sleep this better be important or else" yelled sam

He took the down stairs and open the door

There was a baby in a basket

Left at the door step

with a note written: "Jo galti main kare that night that galti tumahre bhi hai jo bhi hua us raat ko im not alone responsible for it.

" I did my duty I kept your baby, didn't abort it, I went through 9 months of morning sickness,taunts from the world ,and hell and not to mention 21hrs of excruciating labor pains". "Now you handel it! PAPA JI…daddy dear here are all her things"

the men are flabbergasted shakshi who seeing all this from stairs smirks and goes inside room

and msgs a number "now the fun will start"

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Edited by Fiza28 - 12 years ago
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unishaz thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey fiza, loved ur new writing.. Nice intro n first update too.. Nice to see u back after long time in writings..
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Lol...hay baby in ETF style...

Good job jiji...

How r u...

New story is awesome...kushi welcome to world of ..ETF..



Lol...shree sam and arjun ...womenizers...im dead...

But they improve hmmm good...

But who is that girls...yes girls...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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De fab ,outstanding intro
Sound extremely interesting
Update soon
Mishti
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kis ka baby hai??? prob arjun ka na???
fab update yaar ...pls update the other FFs
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awsum concept...
introduction was quite interesting...
awww their atitude with the baby was too cute... ❤️
the update was superb...
arjun shree and sameer a big time flirty wow... interesting...
lol love the way they both were teasing shree...
hmmm so finally baby arrived...
but whose kid is it and whose baby's mom??
continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey baby...oops, fiza...loved it.


pls update this and crime of love soon...
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OMG...
Hey Baby in ETF style...
Ekdum mast hai.
Intro and ch1 was amazing.
Arjun,Sameer bhai and Shree,big time womanizers,eh???
Btw,baby kiska hai????
Aww...
Loved the baby...
Continue soon and hanks for the pm,Di.

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