KriYansh os: The last surprize

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It was a fine morning and a beautiful girl was sleeping peacefully on her large bed… Her sleep was disturbed by the continuous ringing of her phone…. Without opening her eyes she picked up her phone n in a sleepy voice she said,"Hello"…
Caller: Kriya baby……….
Hearing the voice,,she got up from the bed with a jerk
Kriya: Rey you r back from Goa… I missed u a lot.
Rey : I too missed u sweetheart…I wanna spend the whole day with u… I've planned a lot things so get ready…..
Kriya: what do you have planned ??
Rey: Its all surprize.. I'll be der in an hour… put on dat white frock which I got u for ur b'day..
Kriya: okk….. n hanged up the phone
one hour later Rey came to kriya's house to pick her up and Kriya was wearing a white frock and she looked like an angel.
Rey: u look stunning princess…
She blushed on hearing dat….
He den tied a black scarf around her eyes..
Kriya : Rey.. Yeh kya hai?
Rey: Surprize keliye…….
As he started the car she said.."I'm so excited Rey".. he smiled at her.
Kriya:Rey, can I open the scarf off now… Where r we now? Please batao na..
Rey: not yet we are alomost there..
Rey parked the car in the parking lot and helped Kriya out of the car.. she was holding his hands as she walked inside a building.
They got in the elevator n as it was going up she said..
Kriya: We are in the CN tower… right…
Rey: I won't tell u…. anything… u have to wait…
She pouted….
Finally he took her to a table n helped her to sit down n took off her scarf

Kriya looked around
Kriya: wow…rey isn't this the 360 restaurant in the CN Tower

Rey: you are right sweetheart, since you always wanted to come here i thought to bring you here for lunch today..
Kriya: I loved it rey… thank u so much…..
They had a great time at the dinner n they talked about Rey's goa trip… kriya didn't want to leave dat place..
Kriya: I wish I can stay here foreva…. I feel like I'm in the middle of sky n earth…….
N she turned n gave him a warm hug…..
Kriya:where are we going now?

rey: u will see

kriya: another surprise….

Rey winks 😉….n say " u will see"


Kriya looked around
Kriya:oh my gosh it beautiful, i can't believe it today we are at all my favourite places it slike a dream
Rey: look over there……
There were two horses n Kriya loves horse riding…bt she didn't even try it once…
Kriya: Rey its all like a dream for me…
Rey: Its not dream babes.. its all real… u wanna go for a ride??
Kriya: R u serious??
Rey: yeah ofcourse… come…
Bt she still stands der..
Rey: kya?
Kriya: Rey, thoda dar lagta hai..
Rey: Kriya.. I'm wit u na…so don't worry..
Den he took her hands n ran to where the horses were..
After riding the horse they went to see the sunset together…
Rey wrapped Kriya in his arms n kissed on her cheek…
Kriya: Rey Why r u doing all dis for me??
Rey: B'coz I love u n I wanted to make ur each n every dream come true…
Kriya: I luv u too rey.. n hugged him tight..
It was getting late in the evening
Rey: Kriya,,u have one more surprize..
Kriya: who kya hai Rey..
Rey: To know dat.. u'll have to wait for some time..
Saying dis he left from der leaving a confused kriya..
After sometime rey came…
Rey: So ready for the surprize??………….
Kriya nodded n smiled at him…
Den he took her to where the next surprize was..
There was a huge rock n on the rock it looked like a picnic like set up…
Kriya: Rey who made all dis food??
Rey: isme kya doubt hai… The great Reyaansh singhaniya…
Kriya: Rey u cook???
Rey: sirf tumhare liye seekha… they looked into each others eyes(LLHH)
I know u wanna marry a guy who can cook right??
Kriya: Rey,, u know me well na…….
Rey: morethan u…
Den they started eatng n feeding each other... all the dishes were her favourite.
Kriya: Rey its too delicious……..shaadi ke baad tum hi sab cooking karo….
Rey luked at her with his mouth open..
Kriya: u know what this is the most precious day in ma life.. I won't forget dis day..
N some tears started flowing from her eyes, he wiped it n hug her
Rey: ' well I duno when I saw dad and talk to him he said he had a lot of regrets with not being the great husband and he told me he pushed mom away. He never made her small wishes come true and today mom is gone and he feels bad about everything and I don't want to be like that. I want to dream that I can live forever but live life as if this was the last day in this world and if today was my last day in this world I want to spend it with you the love of my life and I want to make you happy
Kriya: Don't even dare to say dat.. you and I are not going to anywhere.. we are always going to be together , we will get married and have kids our kids will have kids we are going to grow old together and if we died one day we will be together. I can't imagine living in this world with out you rey..
she said hugged him real tightly and she cried.
Rey:Don't cry baby…I was just kidding.. come tumhare liye abhi bhi surprizes hai…
Kriya: aur bhi…
Rey: yes.. den he handed her a golden box inside there was a sliver chain with a round pendent and with a diamond stone and a ring
Kriya: wow this beautiful.. Rey…
Rey:it was my mom's chain.. Dad gave it to me to give u.. n the ring I bought u from ur favourite store..
Kriya: wasn't it expensive??
Rey: hmm… expensive hai lekin mere pass isse bhi jyada expensive cheez hai…
Kriya: kya???
Rey: tum… u r ma princess………
She blushed a little
Now lets go…
Den they packed everything n headed towards their car..
They got in and he put on some music…
Rey: Kriya tumhare liye abhi bhi surprize bhaki hai…
Kriya: abhi bhi
Rey: ha.. lekin kal tak wait karlo..
when they reached Kriya's house rey got out of the car frist and opend the door for kriya and she went to open the front door and he went to open the car trunk and got a bunch of red roses. He gave it to kriya and asked her you have a good time
kriya: do you have to ask of course i did
thank you for a wonderful day i wont ever forget this day
she she gave him a hug and kissed him on both cheeks in that moment even rey kissed her back and said thank you sweetheart for everything, i am glad this day is memorable as he turned around and walked to the car. she stood in front of her door waving goodbye until his car left her drive way
Next morning
"Ring ring", the cellphone rang, kriya thought it was rey's n she picked it up..bt it was not rey..it was rey's friend vicky..
Kriya: oh… vicky its u…. I thought it was rey.. btw where's rey? Subah se uska koi call nai aayi…..
Vicky:…………………………………..
Kriya(shocked): what??? She was shivering hearing dat…
U'r lying right??where's rey? usko phone do…. Tum dono mujpar mazak kar rahe hai na…….she fell down on the floor n started crying…
Her cellphone beeped n she went to pick it up, she was in tears she couldn't stop crying. It was a text message and it came from rey it was the longest one she ever got since it was a letter to her

Dear Kriya,
You are my love,my life,my everything and i am sorry i have to leave you.But I'll always look after you from above. You have given me the gift of love and have allowed me to love in return, a gift that only the lucky receive. Every minute i spent with you will be in my heart forever and i will think of them until my very last second, which is not to faraway for me. I hope i was able to give you all the things you've ever dreamt of . I hope i was able to love you like no other man has.I hope you think of me and remember me. I am sorry i couldn't give you a good life, i am sorry i couldn't give you a dream wedding or few beautiful children. I am sorry i couldn't grow old with you and see you still beautiful. I hope some other man is able to give you all this and so much more since you deserve it.No other women in my life has helped me the way you have. I have loved no other the way i loved you. I will always love you. Even from above i will always watch you. I hope you dont cry when you come and see my cold body beacause even if a single tear falls from your eyes , the angels will begin to cry as well. I'm sorry i must leave you in all this pain. i wish i could make it go away. But i can't, i can't stay as much as i want to, i really hope you enjoyed yesterday it was my last day with you and i wanted to make it special.
I wanted to make all your dreams come true, but unfortunately God gave me no time for that he only gave me one day. I love you from the bottom of my dead heart,i love you and i hope all your scars will heal and that you'll be able to love again forgive me for leaving this early sweetheart

with love Rey

That was the first and last love letter Kriygot from Rey
he died at the age 26 because he had no cure for his disease which was lung cancer since he started to smoke at the age of 16. When he found out he decided to tell his father and his best friend. He didn't tell Kriya about it since he knew she wont take the news well. He had one day to live and he decided to spent it with the love of his life

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Posted: 12 years ago
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nyccc os hahahh qik reading :P
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updte was awsum . . . . .so heart touching story
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i really feel like 😭😭😭😭😭 but i was touch os...
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From my username you see that i am a taarey fan. But i am a kriyaansh fan too, This is the first work i am reading on kriyaansh.It was amazing.Superb writing.👏 It was so touching.😭😭 Loved it from the core of my heart.😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So awesome

loved it

the end made me cry!
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It's touching...
Though i m a sanvi fan...

But i like it... Amazing os...
Thanx for pm
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wow... very nice one dear...
i cried after reading the last part...
thanks for the pm..😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing.. U should write more,will be waiting
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nyce 😊

rey made the day so special for kriya 😃

the way he adressed her princess... awww

he is so loving ... so caring 🤗

but ye kya kar dia end me 😲

although i knew.. title padh ke

KR deserves happiness.. together 😭

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