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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

this is something really amazing

i didn't expect it to come out this good

but u have outshone me

wow the way you write is commendable

the concept is rare...

loved it

simply amazing...

m loving it

thank you or the pm

please post DAY 2 as soon as possible

and don't forget tot pm me

i'm getting excited...

waiting...

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vrushanharshi

@vrushanharshi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

awesome start

I was expecting this only after reading the prologue

superbly written

u really a grt writer

plz pm me wen u update next

will be waiting for the update

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Kankshita

@thegameison

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I did not know which couple this was going to be based on. Something about the title encouraged me to take a chance. I read the introduction, I figure this will be a miniseries. I like my stuff mini, you see, I always do. So, that's that. I got to page two and read on with a whimsical smile on my face. I enjoyed reading it greatly, and I'd be happy to continue reading. Being a writer myself, I understand how and why most of us are averse to 'great update' and 'update soon', but the sad truth is, it is going not to stop. 😆 Alright, about the plot - I cannot imagine Sharon like that at all. 😳 This is your story, though. So, it's about how you imagine her. The story's got a theatrical air to it. Your writing style is very simple and contemporary, by the way. It's catchy, a writer can be good and everything but it means squat if they cannot get people hooked to their story. Enough said.

Epiphany.

Edited by epiphany. - 12 years ago

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sharon_

@sharon_

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

I totally loved it! Looking forward to read more n more n more. Apt writing style. I guess we are gonna get lots of swaron-awesomeness outta this one.

take care. Keep wrting!!😉

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Nehal92

@Nehal92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Whoa! This is real interesting i am looking forward how these 7 days will be...

you are one awesome writer.. Update soon :))

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sharon was Swayam's fangirl😲

Feels unusual even to imagine😳

Swayam's anticipation of 'Swayu baby' was hilarious..poor boy😆

But boy did she throw him off-track with her super normal behaviour👍🏼

So 'Swayu baby' is missing the attention..hmm..😉

Hell,its certainly gonna be but a diff kinda hell for the poor 'baby'😉

Thanks for the pm n update soon.

You are a very sharp writer😊

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Pooja-J

@Pooja-J

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

It was short but effective enough. I liked the flow of the chapter, it was really intriguing. Well this is going to be new to Swayam afterall, all he was always used to was his phangirl after him, but now with things changed, it would be a treat to read to find out how exactly are the seven days going to be of hell.

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Neel

@neeliyer

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

it just the start and am already loving this swaron tale a lot .. the way, swayam was behaving throughout the whole part was really hysterical and a treat to read .. I can't for the rest of the 6 days ..

Awesome chapter .. Update soon ..

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--Ta_Sha--

@--Ta_Sha--

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hey i just looked at your concept it is amazing and very different i like different concepts 😃

what i m about to write you are definitely gonna laugh at me 😔

i didn't know who u were writing on so i had to skim thru your first part to see who the couple is like it really matters as i love to read new concepts as said earlier so it doesn't matter who the couple is 😊 as i like all the three couples.

as soon as i saw swayu i knew it was on swaron 😆

so will be reading first part soon and have send u the request so don't forget to accept it 😃

loved the concept looking forward to read 7 days in hell 😊

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#30

wow!
the concept is really different!!
and the first chapter was awesome!! 👏
Sharon was Swayam's fangirl 😲 that's unusual but it's uniqe 👍🏼
and all imaginations by Swayam were hilarious..
specially the "Swayu baby"!!! and "she is going to seduce me "!! lol 🤣
I am damn excited to read about the upcoming 6 nights 😃
thank you for the pm dear 🤗