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That was an amazinggg update!!

U jus know how to make the moment magical

Gosshhh I've soo much to say n appreciate abt your writing
Again this was the besssttt update ever!!

The day m sure is something they both wont forget ever,afterall it was their first.long drive alone,arnav feeding n teaching her was better than dining at a high class restaurant,well arnav even got her a gift
And dadiz timing of call n informin arnav was the best

Their kiss was something I havnt read it was so unique,he didn't let her go,trying to get his fill of khushi,even after seeing fears in her eyes he didn't let go instead pulled her close to his warmth to remove all those dark memories n I guess he did succeed cz I feel there is other reason holdin back khushi, mayb the person buaji talks abt

But now after this kiss arnav wont be able to let go of her, though now he has to face more of a stubborn khushi ignorin him, I jus hope he doesn't lose his temper n again walk away from her

Uhhh ooo, mo update till 8june,i hope you enjoy your vacation n manage to drop an update or two!!

Loved reading it to bitss

Amazinggg update!!!

Res ,..

Arnav really made her birthday special...though he did not know in the beginning that it was her birthday but the way he made her comfortable in the restaurant was very sweet...it was sad to read how khushi celebrated her birthdays in the past 15 years...

Aww...they kissed...and arnav with his kiss...his love wanted to erase the memory of that horrible incident which terrifies khushi...

Oh god...khushi leaned forward to kiss him goodbye...I hope it doesn't happen...though I understand that khushi is scared but I want her to think of arnav as her annyav and not chote sahab...And it's not like she doesn't...she is just reluctant and scared because of the so called society...

Awesome update!!!!

OMG that was just beautiful... does Arnav realize and accept his feelings for her?? or is he still in a trance? hope he know what he is doing n not hurt khushi... omg that was just tooo good... this is all i can think of n write at the moment :P

R

Congratz on the new thread and more for claiming the red!

I have lots to say about this chapter and no idea with what to start or end. So .. I give up. 👏

Have a safe and wonderful vacation!

PS: So it indeed is her biryhday! I thought rishtawaalon were coming to mee her. 😆

What are you made of up girl to write in this way!!!!! Sorry please don't take me wrong. I meant in a good way.. It's just my way of expressing my excitement after reading the whole update ' You are a gifted writer. I know you have mentioned earlier (during Mirage I guess) that , you are not planning on taking 'writing' as your profession but you've got tons of talent in this 'I just don't want it to go waste without getting its deserved attention. Anyways, that's my pure personal opinion. Please ignore if you find it otherwise..

That kiss was soo captivating. More than the kiss , I liked the description of the environment during rain'OMG it's soo magical. It was totally out of the world. I want to stop here just not to spoil the effect of the kiss'

I'm not sure if I believe in any cosmic power but it really worked towards Khushi here and she got her well-deserved treatment on her birthday without Arnav even realizing about it .And of course when once he realized it was totally enthralling !!!!

One thing I am very curious about is Dadi - why is she soo keen about bringing these two together ; I am thinking that there is something happened in the past which made Dadi to determine that these two are meant to be together but how did she get convinced and made Rajvir also get convinced to help her in that. I'm just thinking out loud ; please don't be obligated to answer these ; I would like them to be revealed as and when they are supposed to be..

And last but not least, enjoy your time off ; you need it ' and I need time to completely devour this update anyways, because I'm not content with one iteration of reading !!! But please do remember that you have your loyal readers waiting for you !!!

Yeee my problem is solved,sorry for blank comment bt it was nt my fault.technical problem. Wow kisses & rain,so romantic.bt feeling bad for khushi,she will hide her feelings.

Originally posted by: mysterious_maze

first of all I envy you Agathe... two reasons...

the whole thread is dedicated to you 😡

and you got the first spot...😡

yes life is so unfair😆

This is the height of awesomeness...👏

I know you would find me silly but I HAD tears in mah eyes while reading this...😭 Every time I read your updates I feel It can't get better... But you leave me spellbound every time you update... I can't tell you how much I loved this update...❤️❤️ The emotions are just too overwhelming...😭

I won't tell you to not let her go... You are an amazing writer and you know what you are writing.. I'll just go with the flow...😊

Is it possible to fall more in love, than you actually are...?? If yes.. then i fell more in love with this ff after today's update...❤️❤️

I'll be waiting... update when you get time..😊😊