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divvk

@divvk

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

wow!!! amazing update yaar!!! just too good!!! it was just magical!! and what?? khushi is gonna give a goodbye kiss???Khushi realizes that she is poor and can't afford to be around him even if she wants to be 😭 just too good yaar.. enjoy your vacation.. hope we get some updates in b/w though 😛

congrats on new thread!

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Luvd d chapter n mst importantly d emotions dey shared... D Kiss ws 2 b cherished n d way he made her comfy in restaurant saying she shud get used 2 it, shws his intentions clearly... D sense of belongingness has sruck him, d way He admires His Khushi, makes me weak on my knees... Bt d way she dejected him tore my heart...

U deserve a break n No1 cn stop u 4m tht... I understand n respect ur decision... Go n cum back sooon... 😃

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Sidda

@Sidda8

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Rachel, this update is absolutely magical. You have proven your craft in writing subtle and beautiful romantic and passionate tales. I have always loved the romance in Mirage and now I'm happy to see it in Trampled Butterfly as well. I was waiting for this scene since the beginning of the FF and now I am very happy. I must say that you are among the best FF writers that I have ever come across. Each update is as magical as your characters.

I loved how Arnav was awestruck to witness the beauty of a saree wrapped Khushi in close proximity. It is at times like this that he realizes his Kukku has grown into a beautiful and charming lady. Poor Khushi is not aware how she has trapped Arnav with her innocence and charm. I loved the car ride and the visit to the jewelery shop. It was sweet for Arnav to buy the diamond earrings which Khushi liked without realizing that it was her birthday. He wanted to gift his Khushi whatever her heart desired without her demand. The scene at the restaurant was very beautiful. I loved how Arnav taught Khushi how to eat with a knife and fork. He is teaching her to adapt to his lifestyle just as he has tried to adapt to hers. Khushi was smitten to see Arnav's care and affection on her special day. He made her birthday magical and worthwhile by being with her. Anyways, my favorite scene in this chapter was the very last one. Little Kukku was brought to life with the drops of rain and she ran to rejoice in the heavenly showers. Arnav was admiring little Kukku until he acknowledged Khushi as a lady. He has realized that he is attracting to Khushi and he is accepting this attraction. Never before has Arnav desired Khushi but the glance of Khushi in this stance undoes the strings around his heart as he stealthy approached her and showed her what she really means to him. Arnav is slowly accepting his love for Khushi and his kiss proves the depth of it. It seems that even Khushi's heart understands its bond with Arnav and she reciprocates his gesture. Nevertheless, the stigma of the society and her status brings her out to this beautiful haze as she denies her feelings. Hopefully, Arnav doesn't feel dampen by Khushi's stance as he tries to make her accept their bond.

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pmehra300

@pmehra300

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

That was one hell of an update
Just amazing
Very beautifully written dear
U r one blessed writer
The kiss was magnificent
Please do come back soon
Happy holidays

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@sherlockthor

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

You know when I read the teaser I was shocked that they kissed so soon!!but now after I read the chapter, it was perfect!!

I am all warm and fuzzy now..!

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Soniya

@TUKI.MICKY

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

You left me completely speechless with this part... You are truly a gifted writer... I really don't have any words to convey my feelings... It was just

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sree_dey

@sree_dey

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Congo congo 4 turning into a rockerz yipee 😆 and olso 4 d new thread ... ⭐️

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

OMG this was so beautiful. Loved this chapter.

Arnav made her day so special.

Waiting to see her reaction when he gives her those earrings.

The kiss was high on passion.

Even after this Khushi knows the reality despite the fact that Arnav is not ready to acknowlede it.

Love reading this story. Always have been a fan of yours.

Have a good holiday.

Hoping to see you back soon.

God bless

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Shreya

@-MKB-

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

i knew it ! i KNEW IT! bas pata tha

that you will add some twist towards the end , i know you too well for it 😆

you evil woman ! 😈

and honestly i was expecting this awkwardness after the kissfrom khushi's end

arnav toh apna lover boy hain but khushi has internalized class issues and is seen to be following it at least towards the end

worry not reader this rach will give you few sad updates but then when she will give romantic ones you will have tears in your eyes and i mean it ! i did not have tears in this update 😛

but in the next few ones i will definitely have !

as for the kiss and before that i loved ! simple yet beautiful loved the way you took your own time in describing arnav's emotions and his predicament but in the end he is guy and gave into the temptation

aww i love this naive khushi who cried not because of embarrassment but from the happiness and still cares selflessly for others

i also like dadi's character - witty yet loving !

so be happy rach that you got a big comment and you ! , you going on a break ? 😡

that means no tete-a-tete via scraps ! 😭

great when you will come i will leave after few days for my longish break 😎

i will still pester till you leave so i wont wish you happy holidays right now 😛

and yeah better give us 1,2 updates in between lava

or you know the r button 😡

and in the end

I LOVE YOU RACH! 🤗

Edited by -bazinga- - 12 years ago

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Jaya

@pink.lotus

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

he gave her a perfect birthday and his heart on a platter and she gave him a goodbye kiss?
way to break his heart, kukku!!
yes, i know he is in fantasyland and having AU fantasises, but ... but./..😭

the chapter was dhakdhak inducingly beautiful. thank you.
enjoy your break.. we will still be here when you update, even after a year.
🤗❤️