The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :) - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago
Por Kushi
And married at the age of 8 wow
Nice interaction happening between them
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Posted: 12 years ago
My granny got married when she was 14..and her MIL was really khadoos...she used tell us the stories of her child bride days and we would be shocked beyond belief and indignant that our below end dadi had to endure such hardships so young in life.. This indignation was unfortunately long forgotten
Thanks for writing on this topic..
The. Chapter was just heart breaking except for the presence of thami...
Beautifully written and well researched..
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Posted: 12 years ago

brilliant updt jenny..
love da way u potray arnab inner turmoli,khushi's innocence nd insecurities..amazing.. brougth tears 2 my eye while reading it..
love da care of thami towards khushi nd how well she make her understand abt her dead parents..
my heart cries out for those women who were forced 2 take da responsibility of housechore nd also bearing child at dat tender age with stake of der life..
khushi's MIL also wanted da same..poor khushi..felt reallly bad 4 her..
bt happy 2 see arnab getting very protective 4 khushi nd promised her to talk 2 his mother 4 roopa..how sweet..jst love dis arnab..
luking forwad 4 da story to be unfold..
continue soon:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow. Beautiful update. Lovd d use of words lyk little monkey, squirrel. How more cute it cn be. Lovd d update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update n love this cute n innocent khushi..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wanna read it more often .. its damn cute .. and someway sad also ..

but loving this khushi ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg jenny!!! this update was one of your most soul-stirring writing!!!

the innocent child bride...Arnab sensitive to this...and a household with people reacting mixed to all this...what a potpourri of emotions in this story!

Arnab's journal writing was so good!

you are amazing girl!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Dear I loved the update. Thanks for the pm in advance.😃

The update is very emotional. 😭

Khushi is only 13 and already Arnav's mom wants her to do all duties.I really hope Arnav is able to make society understand the evil effects.

But Arnav needs to tell this to Khushi. Khushi will feel Arnav is not liking her. Khushi expects Arnav to behave like a husband with her. I hope Arnav behaves friendly with Khushi.

Please update. Dear I want this to be a FF. Please dear.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Jenny,

Loved his sensitivity towards Khushi and the practice of child marriages, I loved how she has taken it upon himself to do whatever it is that needs to be done to protect her innocence and childhood.
I loved how you mentioned her playing hopskotch ...that detail created such a visual impact...

Loved this child Khushi who is following what she thinks she is meant to without really knowing and loved her directness and conversation with thami, looks like Thami approves of her wit and her candidness and and see a great friendship brewing there...loved how she mentioned her brothers wife who did not speak for a month and was considered perfect daughter in law material...

The mother in law does not really have much character apart from following her husband and his wishes and probably not a happy person and is taking that out on Khushi

Loved Khushi's conversation about the stars, it was so endearing and emotional...love Thami's response to her concerns ever so patiently...

Love her trauma at Roopa, being snatched away, her confidant and her security my heart broke for her when she pleads to Arnav to get her back saying she is the only one she has left from her previous life, I could feel her pain...I am glad she felt she could go to him...and am so glad he assures her that he will help her get Roopa back...

Jenny, i love the way you are progressing with this story...its touching all the right cords...brilliant as always but have come to expect that from you!

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Posted: 12 years ago
I just found this story... Its a lovely one jenny... Loved it...
Innocence of childhood is shown here... Along with the painful ... Stupid cultures like childhood marriage...which iis still prominent in many parts of our country inspite of all rules...

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