please don't end it!- a poem - Page 4

Originally posted by: priyal_TaaRey

Beautiful poem dear...
Love it...

Originally posted by: aditipandey.adi

amzng poem .. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: mehek_taareyluv

awsum..
beautiful!!!

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

aaye haaye mai mar jawa gud khaake! waise aaj jiju se ek do kisses le lena! char paanch bhi allowed hai n cheek haan! kuch aur mat samajhna par aage ka bhi kar sakte ho! no objection!😉😆

that was great😃

i think that it would inspire people not to turn to suicide for every little thing in life😊

you know frm my pint of view if someone with that thought in mind read this poem i think they would try to find another solution but killing themselves

so its basically like you saved a life👏

Originally posted by: toshi_ta

the best lines were...

love of your close ones

so you still have a pair of wings!

it is really very disheartening when you read any news about a suicide and i read one of them today itself... it really hurts to know that some people have no idea of what they are going to loose after this stupid step... they remember what they have lost but they forget what they have and what they can still achieve... the life is for once a life time and so is the death... its up to you to choose among them...

you wrote a fabulous poem adi... and keep writing such stuff.. it is really very enlightening...and not to forget you are an amazing poet!!

thanks di! n ya sometimes i feel to throw the newspaper in dustbin! life is the second name of challenges! there will be ups and downs! we all just have to keep patience and overcome the bad situations!😊