please don't end it!- a poem

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Arbitrator.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

the best lines were...

love of your close ones

so you still have a pair of wings!

it is really very disheartening when you read any news about a suicide and i read one of them today itself... it really hurts to know that some people have no idea of what they are going to loose after this stupid step... they remember what they have lost but they forget what they have and what they can still achieve... the life is for once a life time and so is the death... its up to you to choose among them...

you wrote a fabulous poem adi... and keep writing such stuff.. it is really very enlightening...and not to forget you are an amazing poet!!

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Priyanka Datta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

great poem and too emotional topic

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: chand91

1 problm hai

mere body pr kahi v tickl point nahi hai
bt blush zarur karungi

thank god blush point to hai! warna jiju ka kya hota!😉😆

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chandrima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: lavi_taarey
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happy birthday

thnks

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chandrima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie

thank god blush point to hai! warna jiju ka kya hota!😉😆

bahmash

☺️

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aditi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ShivTRSS
Hey Aditi its very nice and meaningful. Really nice. The thought you passed with this poem really touched me. Specially this line

so you still have a pair of wings!
Loved it. Keep writing. And I agree with you. Wo yeh jawani yeh deewani ka dialogue he na. 'Me udna chahta hu, girna chahta hu bas rukna nahi chahta.' That is what attitude everyone should keep. Life has ups and downs. Awesome

thanks yaar aashna! n ya i too love that dialogue! sabko aisa hi sochna chahiye because life is more precious!😊

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: chand91

bahmash
☺️

oye hoye! kaash jiju hote wahaan par!😉 waise badmash kaun hai? mai ya jiju?😉😆

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chandrima

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: adi.cutiepie
oye hoye! kaash jiju hote wahaan par!😉 waise badmash kaun hai? mai ya jiju?😉😆

tum donohi

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: lavi_taarey
well said adi through a poem 👏wht a poetic talent maan gye👏*hats off*

thank you so much dear! it means a lot to me! jo poet apni poem se ek big message convey kar de wo bohot accha poet hota hai! so for me this means a lot!😃

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aditi

@adi.cutiepie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: chand91

tum donohi

aaye haaye mai mar jawa gud khaake! waise aaj jiju se ek do kisses le lena! char paanch bhi allowed hai n cheek haan! kuch aur mat samajhna par aage ka bhi kar sakte ho! no objection!😉😆