please don't end it!- a poem

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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys how you all are? here i am your cutie with one more poem! but this time on a different topic! guys whenever i open the newspaper i read- a student committed suicide because he or she got less marks in board exam! a farmer committed suicide because he couldn't pay the loan he took! a girl committed suicide because her parents didn't gave her permission to stay in a relationship with the guy whom she loves!

i am just pissed off with all this! i mean this is nonsense! ending your life is a very big thing! n what happens after that? do the problem gets solved or the pain gets lessened?

n those who are even thinking of ending their life i wanna tell them that by ending your life you are taking away many mores life! think about your parents, your brothers and sisters, your friends and all those persons who love you! do you want to see all of them sad and crying and whole life missing you?

so this poem is dedicated for all those people think like this! i don't know why i am posting this i just want to take my frustration out n this is the best way i found! through my poems! hope you guys will like it!

PLEASE DON'T END IT!


life is a pleasant gift

there is nothing to die for

you are still alive

live at least more!


please don't end it!


it is just a loss

nothing very big

for that you are ending your life

is something very big!


please don't end it!


besides that loss

there are many things

love of your close ones

so you still have a pair of wings!


please don't end it!

how was it guys? i know it didn't turned up well! phir bhi guys do comment n if you liked it hit the like button! do tell your opinions on this serious issue!

sorry if i hurt someone! n a special sorry to my bestie chand! its her birthday today! sorry i am posting this on your birthday but i couldn't hold myself!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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😭
dnt wary
khusi ki ansu hai
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DII its so emotional and too gud dii yaar loved it superbb work nd i agree with u dii😊
Edited by rakhiankita - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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res
unres
beautiful humesha ki tarah
seriously people need to think about life as a gist
many people want to live more but they don't get even one minute beyond their destiny people should respect life!😊
Edited by nuckts - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

😭
dnt wary
khusi ki ansu hai



Pehle happy birthday Chand😛🥳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Aditi its very nice and meaningful. Really nice. The thought you passed with this poem really touched me. Specially this line

so you still have a pair of wings!
Loved it. Keep writing. And I agree with you. Wo yeh jawani yeh deewani ka dialogue he na. 'Me udna chahta hu, girna chahta hu bas rukna nahi chahta.' That is what attitude everyone should keep. Life has ups and downs. Awesome
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

😭
dnt wary
khusi ki ansu hai

is it your birthday today?
in that case
many many happy returns of the day chand!
have loads of fun!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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well said adi through a poem 👏wht a poetic talent maan gye👏*hats off*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chand91

😭
dnt wary
khusi ki ansu hai

jo bhi ho aansu to hai na! birthday girl ko rula diya maine!😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank you!😊

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