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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Me!

Will unres tonight :)

~Edit~

Couldn't resist 😃

She knew that normalcy was always found in mental health facility where everyone was taken away from the madness in the world outside which conveniently wore a mask of realism and hypocritically dictated rules of sanity and insanity.

You raise this question in one way or the other in many of your stories, would love to know your views on it. I read a paper long back(cannot recollect the name) which said that schizophrenia should not be looked at as an illness - what they see is their reality, what right do we have to dismiss it? Whatever we see is also through a lens in our eyes.. so our reality is just an image. How can we assert that as the ultimate truth? Realism is perhaps a mask we put on to carry on a civilized existence.. why do so many of your stories remind me of Lord of the Flies? :D

Doctor Jha.. I am yet to form an opinion about the guy. The game of chess between Arnav and Khushi is perhaps one of the most intriguing scenes I have ever read in fiction. The baseline for "truth" is going to be very different here... now I will enjoy reading this story as you blow my mind :D

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Arani_Kumar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

so arnav is also subconsciously allowing khushi into his world...interesting

when did the attack on khushi happen? when she was in the asylum? or on the outside? was she attacked because she knew too much? i have the same question as dr.jha, why didn't the attacker finish what he/she started...that would imply that the attacker didn't attack to kill...

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Cherylann

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

Every story you write has a different Arnav and a different Khushi😲

It's an effort to wait till you update...😃

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arshi21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Holy mother of God.

What the-?

God. SO much pain and.. torture.

I can't even tell you how eager I am to read and know the secret behind Khushi and Arnav's story. How I wish tomorrow comes soon.

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CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Sorry for being absent for a while! Real life caught up with me for a bit.

Anyway, I think this is my favourite story so far.

Arnav and Khushi and Payal and Akash as loonies in an asylum? And Shyam as a psychiatrist? I have to say I never even considered the possibility of THAT happening!

I believe you when you say that nobody here is as nice or innocent as they seem. SO Dante's Inferno+Pan's Labyrinth?

What is it with me? I can't stop shipping Arnav and Khushi even when they're both potentially dangerous sociopaths. *I need help*

That mental game of chess was the coolest thing I've read in fanfic in QUITE a while. I like Akash's brand of psychosis. It was definitely entertaining to read, if a little disturbing.

But then, I have a feeling that I'm going to get that 'disturbing' feeling quite often in this one.

Did Khushi or didn't Khushi? That is the million dollar question!

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Kishmish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

😲

Am just wondering ... was it her step father who attacked her ???

"She is claiming it's her stepfather who did and then changed the story to a stranger with a weird mask and finally said both the stranger and the stepfather did it. She was found at the crime scene with the scissors which killed her sister in her hand and soaked in blood incoherently mumbling about nonsense."

Khushi's conversation with Dr.Jha was enlightening ...

he has realised that she is hiding something which could hamper her treatment ...

Very intrigued with this story ...

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appy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

Aha! Dr. Jha is here.

So, she was attacked by a stranger because she allegedly killed her sister. What is Arnav here for? And he's letting her in. Hmm, interesting. They play chess on an imaginary board. I always lose chess in six moves. On a board. :P

I find Payal mysterious. What is up with her? OR maybe, she's actually normal in comparison with the others!

Very interesting, RB! Continue soon. :)

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akaps

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Very, very interesting. Khushi's long scar was scary. Dr.Jha managed to get reaction from Khushi. Next time he will be able to peel off more.

Dr. Jha's observation of Arnav allowing Khushi to sit on his table during recreation time means that Khushi effects him some how.

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RockBarbie

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: Arani_Kumar
so arnav is also subconsciously allowing khushi into his world...interesting

when did the attack on khushi happen? when she was in the asylum? or on the outside? was she attacked because she knew too much? i have the same question as dr.jha, why didn't the attacker finish what he/she started...that would imply that the attacker didn't attack to kill...

Or:

a) He stopped because something went wrong.
b) Khushi fought back or did something for him to stop.
c) He made a mistake.

:=)

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404703

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Posted: 12 years ago

#90

whts tht khushi is not ready to share with...

tht scar she has on her chest is really scary one...i think she has an unhappy childhood as her mother remarried someone else as she stated her stepfather as her mother's husband...

arnav is unknowingly allowing khushi with him...

the story is really going very interesting...

thnks for the PM dear...

continue soon...