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Posted: 12 years ago
read chapter 4
it was really gud
sharons n taanis concern towards each other
was nyc to c...
rey is very naughty...always making taani blush...
loved it
moving further
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 5
awesomely written
taarey ka rasiya seq sab ko pata chalne wala hai...hehe
band bajegi rey ki ...jab swayam ko pata chalega n uska possessive bhai mode kick in karega...hehe
moving to next
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Posted: 12 years ago
chap6
er chak chak...taani itani bholi bhali hai ki
usse pata hi nahi chal raha hai ki sab log kya soch rahe hai...so sad...haha
lets c how this mu is sorted
m tuned in to ur ff...
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god chapter 7...
lol...kys imagination tha nil n vicky ka
bechari tasni
n rey blushing was cute...
reading next
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Posted: 12 years ago
chapter 8
i was blushing blushing n only blushing
who said that u cant write romantic gener
u wrote this one so very well...
i loved it...
eagerly waiting for next update
pls upd soon
n do pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shriya_taarey

chapter 8
i was blushing blushing n only blushing
who said that u cant write romantic gener
u wrote this one so very well...
i loved it...
eagerly waiting for next update
pls upd soon
n do pm me...


thnx dear... and i like ur all comments on every part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
thnx 4 ur like and comments guys... so here is the next part hope you guys enjoy...
PART 9
in taayam house after dinner, taayam are sitting in hall. taani is doing something in her laptop.. swayam is thinking about what all mu happen in canteen today..
swayam(thinking):maine aaj taani aur rey ko bohat mu kiya... par mai kiya karta situation hi aisi hogaye thi... par tab bhi i have to trust them... but as they are couple so unke bich kuch bhi ho sakta hai...(looking towards taani) par taani bohat chhoti hai and she is very innocent aur usko to ye bhi nahi pata aaj canteen mai sab kya soch rahe the,,,
swayam is thinking all this with changing weird expression.. and taani is looking to his brother face confusingly as what her brother is doing...

taani: bhai
swayam(still thinking): no response
taani(louder): BHAI...
swayam: ha .. kya hua???? kuch kaha????
taani; kaha ho aap bhai... aur kya soch rahe ho..
swayam: kuch nai...
taani: u r ok na bhai...
swayam: ha meri behan...
taani; ok... then mai sone jati hu... gudnit..
swayam: taani thodi der ruko na... bohat din ho gaye humne acche se baith kar baat nahi ki hai...
taani: wo to hai bhai... aur kya baat hai aaj mere bhai kuch emotional lag rahe hai...
swayam: aisa kuch nahi hai... bas apni sweet si sister ke saath kuch time spend karna chahta hu...
taani come towards swayam and give him a side hug and sit beside him...
taani: ok bhai... dekho bhai aapke ke baal kitne dry ho gaye hai... aap apni care karte hi nahi... chalo mai aapki aaj chumpi...😊
swayam: kya karu aaj kal meri behen bohat biusy ho gaye hai... ab mera care kon karega...😔
taani: bhai.. plz dont say like that...
swayam: mai majak kar raha tha... ok ab jaldi se mera hair massage karo...
taani went to her room and bring oil and start to do his bhai hair massage...
swayam: taani mai kitna relax feel kar raha hu... kya batao...
taani: hmm.. bhai aapke bal bohat bade ho gaye hai katwa lo...😆
swayam; no... tumhe pata hai na mai aapne balo se kitna pyaar karta hu...
taani: bhai at least trim to karwa lo..
swayam: ok... i will see...
taani is doing swayam chumpi and sometime she used to make small poni... and swayam used to act like a girl... they are doing masti...
taani: bhai ho gaya...
swayam: i am feeling very relax... aaj meri behen ko aapne bf se time mil gaya...
taani: aisa nahi hai bhai...😳 my first priority is you...
swayam: thats gud... aur mai kabhi rey ko mujhse jyada priority di na to dekh lena... i wont give my permission to your relationship...
taani: ok bhai...
swayam: taani at first i was little uncomfartable with ur relation ship... but now i am very happy for both of u... meri behen ko second time hi sahi ek accha ladka kto mila...
taani become sad by listening his last sentence... and swayam notice this... he thought he hurted his sister...
swayam: taani i am sorry.. i dont wanted to hurt u...
taani: aisa nahi hai bhai... bhai mujhe aapko kuch batana hai... mere aur shivam ko lekar(swayam was about to sat something) nahi bhai plz aaj mana mat karna...
swayam: ok... agar tum insist karti ho to tell me...
taani: bhai wo.. mai aur shivam... hum...(closing her eyes) bhai hum ek fake relationship mai the...
swayam: what??? par kyu...
taani: bhai bohat lambi story hai... par main point is mai aur wo kabhi relationship mai nahi the...
swayam: thats great... tumhe mujhe ye pehle batana chahiye tha... mai us shivam ko chodta nahi... 😡
taani: bhai
swayam: ok par kya rey ko pata hai...
taani: ha... maine aapne relationship ke first day hi unhe bata diya tha...
swayam: ye tumne accha kiya... ok bohat baat ho gayi... ab tum sone jao.. gudnit...
taani: ok..par aap sone nahi jayege... aap bhi to bohat thak gaye hai...
swayam: actly aaj mai yahi sone wala hu...
taani: kyu???
swayam: mere room ka ac work nahi kar raha...
taani: to bhai aap mere room mai so jao... waise bhi mai ac use nahi karti...
swayam: its ok taani...
taani: bhai mai aapke rum mai sone ja rahi ... gud nit...
swayam: ok... gudnit...
swayam went to taani rum...
in rey house... rey is not able to sleep... he is missing his taani...
rey: i am missing my taani... uske ghar jata hu... par swayam bhi to waha hai... aur pichli bar taani se milne gaya tha to swayam ko pata chal gaya tha aur wo bohat gussa ho gaya tha... par usne hi bola tha ki mai aa sakta hu par usse pata nahi chal na chahiye... ok its decided ki mai taani se milne ja raha... par pehle confirm kar leta hu ki wo kya kar raha hai...(rey called swayam)

swayam(in half sleep): kya hua dude... ye mera no hai taani ka nahi🥱
rey: shut up swayam...😡 waise tu kya kar raha hai...
swayam: dance reharsal kar raha hu...😆
rey: itni raat ko...😲
swayam: shut up rey... i am sleeping yaar...
rey: ok... to tu so ja... gudnit... acche se sona..(and he hang up)
swayam was feeling weired with rey behaviour but he was feeling sleepy so he slept... here with rey
rey: swayam so raha hai matlab mai taani se milne ja sakta hu... so my sweetheart i am coming...
rey went to taani room very carefully... he climb through the window and he saw taani sleeping covering her head(actly swayam was their in taani's bed)... he sat beside him
rey: kitne acche se so rahi hai meri star... i dnt want to disturb her... par kya karu mujhe uske sath time spend karna hai...
rey come closer to taani(swayam) and lay down next to her and wrap his arm around her...

rey: sweetheart... wake up... dekho tumse milne tumhar prince charming aaya hai...
swayam wake up by hearing rey but he didnt remove blanket...
swayam: mujhe rey ki awaz kyu aa rahi hai... aur ye mujhe pakda kon hai...
rey: sweetheart uthona... aaj swayam bhi nahi aayega wo so raha hai...
now swayam realises that rey was actly there... he was feeling embarass...😳 and rey was tighting his grip on his waist and his eyes were closed..😆. swayam slowly remove blanket from his face... he saw rey is making puppy face...
swayam: rey...
rey: taani tum swayam ki awaz kyu nikal rahi ho... waise bhi maine confirm kar liya hai wo so raha hai...
swayam now came to knw why rey called him...
swayam(loudly):REY...😡
rey: kya hai(he just open his eyes and saw swayam in front of him)
rey(shocked): tu... aur yaha...😲
swayam: ha mai...🤢

so here the end of part 9... hope u guys enjoy it... i am little bit busy now a days so i a not able to update frequently but i will try to update once in a week... and now its ur turn hit like and comment...
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was simply incredible dear :)))... bechaara Rey to gaya
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh My God! I'm dying out if laughter right how :) that's was too cute! And I love the Taayam moment, I wish they would have something like that in the show! I loved it a lot! You always do a great job and I love reading your story. Please do continue soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome Update!!!
It is really funny...I am laughing so badly...poor rey...
I loved TaaYam's scene...
Update Soon!!!

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