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surlin_chhabra

@surlin_chhabra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#601

Beautiful update
Loved how u portrayed arnav's feeling
Loved both naina and bunny
Flashbacks were beautiful
Arhi heartbeat scene was good

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Love.life2

@Love.life2

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Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Really beautiful touching story!!!

Ch 2.

I loved d 1st part n hd tears by d time arnav goes up to khushi's painting n talks 2 himself red or pink n paints her lips in pink.

It jus showed how much he loves khushi cherishes every moment spennt with her hoping she'd b bck somedy while he's immersed in his own sorrow.

2nd part

It ws abt him playing d song n each line describing khushi n it ws touching n cnt help feel d pain arnav is in.

3rd part

It ws abt khushi trying to kill herself bt knwing she wnt die coz she recalls their old convo abt their heartbeats ebing one n tht arnav nt letting her go so she wudnt die n thts why she sd let me go.

While arnav at d same time realized tht khushi is nt ok.

This is written so beautifully tht its jus 2 ch n u already r glued to it n moreover tho we r yet to see arshi's past a few moments fb n d present show the intensity n depth of their love n how much in love they must hve been to go thru so much pain for each other.

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Anamika Kumari

@Anamikarocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

Hey..Aicha!!!!

What n update..truly..it was so intense...my eyes got watery!!!!

I know I'm commenting after hell ...a long time!!!!

But my probs are there!!!

coming to the update...!!!!

I loved each and every bit of this update!!!😃

Arnav possessiveness and his obsession just made me feel bad for him!!!

He is so passionate about his love..and his trust just breaks my heart!!!

I wish Khushi is able to come out of her darkness and accept him!!!

I know...no matter what..he will accept her!!!

Now...I'm waiting eagerly for the twists and turn in this beautiful fiction!!!

I know it's quite early to wish that but...ur story just increases my curiosity!!!

I have so many ideas and imaginations of their meet..but I know that the ebst would be presented by you...as I am now so used to your surprises..that ur name brings only one word in my mind!!!

SURPRISE!!!

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amita

@star_fan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#604

beautiful and lovely update !!!!!!!!!!!!

loved it too much

every part is written beautifully

Arnav is so much in love with khushi

feeling bad for Arshi

they are in so much pain

hope soon he find her

waiting for next update

plz continue it soon

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Mano2789

@Mano2789

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Posted: 12 years ago

#605

Nice work
Thanks for pm
Update soin

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@06Pallavi_Arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#606

ZATS WAS BEYOND AWESOME!
Plz update regularly that will help u get more readers plus i'll notify my friends too cos i think this FF is one of A kind!:D

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hiddenpearl

@hiddenpearl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#607

fantastic update

oh i love that song ...nice work done buddy

dis is going 2 be more fun !!!!

thanks 4 d pm :)

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#608

I have tears in my eyes while reading it. Both loves each other so much but destiny made a very cruel game with them and got separated. I m still crying while typing.
U r too good in writing yaar. Hats off to u.
Thanks for giving us long update. Love u dear🤗
Wanted to kill that bloody culprit due to which khushi condition is like this😡
She is commited suicide again and again. Can't see her like this.😭
Hope nia is only hope due to her arnav will find her lost love.😕
Hope arnav will understand it and and tell her about his love story.😆
Make them meet yaar plz. I can't take this.😭
Both are longing to each other. Hope they meet soon.😊
Truly fab update. Loved it .🤗

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zayana khan

@zayana123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#609

That simply awesome update...
u showed der emotion so briliantly.. it touched my heart... superb writing..

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kristin

@sweet_5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#610

Yes an update!!!!

It's just horrible, how lonely must Arnav feel. Why the heck was she recording him? She didn't think that would upset him?

Imagine how Arnav will feel when he hears about Khushi's suicide attempts.

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