ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~(BFTW3)# 6 Ch14 Pg122 25/04 EXT - Page 37

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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update :) do you not update on your blog too dear? I've been looking for an uodatr there for days now!
But anyways an amazing update please.update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
superb update...finally we will get to see a changed arnav now !!!! :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
how a husband can treat his wife like that...and wife a women still love him...please Appy ..make khushi little bit stronger
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Posted: 12 years ago
this was the best update...i really wanted Arnav to know that Khushi was a virgin and what he was doing to her was tptally wrong
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Posted: 12 years ago
appy u r dam great 👏
itni awsome stories k cant xpress ma fellings in words...
n dis PAWN its simply a master piece ever ...
hats ov to u dear 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
I read all 13 chapter in one go
My feelings n emotions are at it's extrem right now n my hurt n pain I'm feeling being a woman are a size of Jupiter ... not in my wildest imagination I had thought a mother could be like Gazal Gupta n a husband like ASR. I feel n I feel from the bottom of my heart for this khushi u have created
Her husband left her on their nuptial night to b with another woman n not to forget he had promise his wife's mother a romp the same night ,,... n ofcourse the mother how can she be the lowest form of selfishness that she haves sex with him the very next day at work place ... They both goes on the honeymoon leaving the poor soul alone to deal with difficult family member ... No matter what Arnav's excuse be but he kept on sleeping with Gazal even after he is married... n not mention with
several other girls ... And the mother trying to instigate him against het ... N Ohhh how I hate Anjali .. Sh has always been week excuse of a woman for me ...
I really really feel n hope that khushi wont care for him anymore when he if he want to repent
It is grossly discusting for him to go out n have a sex with a mother n comes home n have it with doughter
I would really really live to follow this story if u would grant me an access to yr blog it sen me a pm plz
My email is : archi629@gmail.com
Plz pm me thanks
Edited by archmink - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was superbbb!!!!!!!!
Shayam is such a sweetheart... I really loved him...
It was really nice way u have showed Arnav her reality ... Though he was feeling her innocence but now he will trust her... he is regretting his actions now...would really love to read how he will behave with her now...

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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part...
atlast arnav is repending for his deeds...
bt still i cant accept wat he had done to khushi...
and tat wome mrs.gupta...
i hate her to the core...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Poor Kushi suffering a lot because of Arnav.

Hope he will change his behaviour towards Kushi now.

Nice update and waiting to read more
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Posted: 12 years ago
arnav realized his mistake..he was in so much madness that he cudn't even realize b4 that khushi is a virgin...ok so repentance times have come..or maybe only for sometime..now the prologue speaks of something else.. a pregnant khushi goes away frm RM wen she witnesses arnav's deeds with her mother..does that speak of a future MU due to which he will once again resume his affair with GG?? m really scared for this girl now..so right now we'll get a repentent arnav who will take care of khushi..but this is just the calm before the storm right?

can't believe there are women such as anjali in our society as well as men like this arnav..pls appy we want the arnav of this ff to repent really badly, not like the one in ons2..there he repented as per his mistakes.. but this arnav is really like the devil incarnate..actually they shudnt be any redemption for this sort of crime..sleeping with the mother of one's wife, having affairs with othr women and then raping one's adolescent wife n misjudging her with no validity..i'm really eager to see how u will go forward with his character development..but i really want to see him going thru a hell of a redemption
Edited by poojasidd123 - 12 years ago

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