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Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#711

wowww that was an awsm update i really loved it...

ek to vo precap mere dimag me ghus gya hai...

i mean i read whole update and mind me bas vhi pretence wali baat ghum rhi thi...

i can't read it proper man se...😆

their fruit date was really nice...

and rey giving her ring...

and what was neha and shivam xactly meant...

is he really pretending...???

yeah its true people change over the years...

i don't want to think about it now...

update soon... (:

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senoritashweta

@senoritashweta

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#712

again super awesome chappy..!

loved it..loved it..!

an nah rey myt nt be pretending wid kira..how cn he..he is his true self infront of her !

anyways...update soon..! 😊

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Yamna

@..-Chabhilal-..

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#713

Very sweet update
But I hate Shivam URGHH...
Thnx 4 da pm

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#714

AWESOME

AMAZING

SUPERB

FAB

REY IS A GREAT MYSTERY

UPDATE SOON :)

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#715

Hey my comment for previous chappy !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nice one but I hate this Shivam why does he interfere every time without even knock? 😡 😡 Doesn't he know the manners? 😡 😡

He always interrupt them at a wrong time !!!!!!!! 😡 😡

I love Rey's family who they handled every thing so nicely !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 😊

Rey and Kria were interrupted while doing romance by Rey's father which was really embarrassing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😳 😳😳

Oh Rey is going for shoot, leaving Kria and Rivaan so early? That is sad !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 😲

I hope Kria will not suffer any problem because of that and having Shivam around can create problems for her !!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡 😡

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#716

Awesome update 😊

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dancersqueen

@dancersqueen

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#717

superb update...i think rey is not pretending infront of kriya...outside world keliye voh lag hoga...

shivam rey ke peechey kyu padi hai????? eagerly waiting 4 next part...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#718

read the whole FF in one go !!!

superb man

it really rocks

thanks for the PM

please do update soon

P.S. will take time for the other FF

as have to read it from the start as well 🤔

but i'll read it soon... 😃😊

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anshika

@Kiarawinget16

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#719

nyc turn ...awsmo story going interestng :p

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#720

Awesome part...
Hmmm...i think shivam has got a valid point in sayng things to kriya...
But samen time rey loves kriya truly and he's trying to change himself...
Waiting for future track...