SwaRon OS:[UPDATED] Siren back for her Lover Boy

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LittleBitOfAlexis

@LilBitOfAlexis

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Awesome update😊
Bin badal Baarish was so cute 😆 and swaron as well as simmi was sweet and cute :)
I really liked the update and ya jealous sharon was good 😉
Plz do continue this OS
Thanks for the scrap

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Mihika

@Legilimens.

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Hey..this was such a beautiful and a cute update.. I had a constant smile on my face during it...

The concern, the care, the love, everything was evident. My favorite parts were when Simmi teased SwaRon with reference to rains and when Sharon was getting jealous when Swayam was teaching Aashi! Really hilarious. And I loved it when sharon gave a wife wala tough look to Swayam and Swayam bechara darr gaya! I wish you could continue it. The captions used in the middle add more to the beauty of it!

Keep writing..😳

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purvibahri

@purvibahri

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

The second part was just sooo CUTE!

Loved the jealousy and husband-wife part...Amazing yaar!

Keep writing...waiting for ur next, and dont forget to PM me...😊

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Awesome update 😊

Loved it

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tanharockks

@tanharockks

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

awesome os

do write more

u can even continue this os too if you like

pm me d next time u write

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sakshi gupta

@sakshiswaron

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: tanha29
Hey..this was such a beautiful and a cute update.. I had a constant smile on my face during it...
The concern, the care, the love, everything was evident. My favorite parts were when Simmi teased SwaRon with reference to rains and when Sharon was getting jealous when Swayam was teaching Aashi! Really hilarious. And I loved it when sharon gave a wife wala tough look to Swayam and Swayam bechara darr gaya! I wish you could continue it. The captions used in the middle add more to the beauty of it!
Keep writing..😳

Thankss! love ur review of my OS, ur appreciating views really encourage me!! 😳

I will keep on writing n will post my new OS soon...😊

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sakshi gupta

@sakshiswaron

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J
HAHA!!!!luved the ending poor aashi she had to bare the wrath of the diva and swayam is just sooo confused!!!!i really liked the swaron comparison to a husband-wife...really good job!!!

thank u sooo much!

even i like the husband wife SwaRon comparison...😉

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Fatima

@HSFA

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Hi. I just loved your OS. I wsh it could be a little longer. Really very well written. You commendably explained every emotion. In Swaron land also loved Simmi. Thanks a lot for the pm.