Smitar's OS2:Finding Khushi#3Part15(1-3)Pg122(1/4)

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#451

This Arnav is sooo adorable and how can anyone not forgive him when he talks huskily and smiles that smirk !! He is doing everything Khushi tells him to and then sharing it with her.

The kissing scene with the dhaadi was once again humorous but loving along with Arnav's reply of his lips would not hurt..

All the things that the CV's conveniently forgot to depict in the show, you have masterfully recreated for us and its all centered around the two of them with the others providing minimal but essential support..

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Arshifan4life

@Arshifan4life

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

Awww loved the update it was amazing love arnav

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aquagal

@aquagal

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

Aww... that was so good.

Lavanya is happy for them and Arnav is being naughty & still got reward for being a good boy all day 😉😛😳

Anjali is smart & wicked😉

Loved it Smita

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
Hahaha... I loved the way Arnav is using Khushiji ki dhak dhak to his advantage...

Imagine me grinning like an idiot lukinh at my phone and ppl around me thinking Sayali is having affair as she is forever chechking her phone and grinning as is she is in love... Lol

Anddd here a songg dedication..

Jabhii koiee update dekhu.. Mera dil dewaana bolee... Ole olee...
Gaunn tareefe smitajii ki zhoom zhoom ke haule haule... Olee olee...

Muzhakoo lubhatii hain Smitajii ki kahaniyaa...
Khushiya bhikheratii yehh kahaniyaa...

Jab Bhi koi long commentwaa dekhoon, Mere dil deewana bole..Olee Ole Ole Ole Ole Ole...😆

Dekhoon Arnav ki picture, zoom zoom ke, woh pagli hoon mein...Ole Ole Ole Ole Ole Ole...😉

Smita😳

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Ashg

@Ashg

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

😃Omg what awesome update

Can't wait for the next one

Thx for the pm👏

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Sayali_23

@Sayali_23

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

@ Smitaji...

Kyaaa bat hain... Aap toh expert ban gayee ho... Apake andar bhi ek bahot bada Kavii janma le chuka hain... Thanx to meee.. 😉

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musicfan5

@musicfan5

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

Awesome Update...

Arnav apologised to Lavanya...Its true..Khushi can make him do things he does not want to do...😊

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smitar

@smitar

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Originally posted by: sayali_d23
@ Smitaji...

Kyaaa bat hain... Aap toh expert ban gayee ho... Apake andar bhi ek bahot bada Kavii janma le chuka hain... Thanx to meee.. 😉

All thanks to you!!!!😆

Main shaayar to nahii...
Magar e dosti (aur kavita)
jabase dekhi aur padhi, mujhko
shaayarii aa gai...ting ting ting ting... (background music)😉

Smita😃

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK
Awesome update smita !!! 😳

Arnav said sorry to Lavanya and the details of their convo !!! hayeee i couldnt stop smiling !!!!

the feelins that arnav stirs up in khushi !!!! it brings tears of happiness and its my heart that goers dhak dhak !!! 😆

and finally she did kiss him !!! well its the just the beginning and thr is more to come and khushi better be prepared coz if arnav has hs way then her lips are neva gonna leave his !!!! 🤣

his line " u can undress in my room anytime u want " !!!! ROFL if it ws me i would have melted into a puddle !!! 😉

hugs smitaaa !!!!

😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆😉😆

amazing chapter

awesome

please keep writing

always

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

ASR's last line awww😳 , im blushing like hell smita only with his words than what gonna happen when when he actually ,kiss her awww, waiting for that magical moment. Smita love u to the core yaar.