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Posted: 12 years ago
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The girl nxt door

Chapter 1

introducing d charecters

taani: she is bold likes bing alsone also likes writing songs n also a dancer. she doesnt like making frnds .New girl in collage n she is not swayams sister
(all the other charecters r d same)
story starts:-
(the bell rings all r in d class)
professor: i wud like 2 introduce u 2 our new student her name is taani.
taani: hi!
class : hi!
(den she goes n sits on her place)
(class ends )
a girl cums n tells taani:hi ! i m neha.
taani:hi!
neha: dis is my frnd Swayam.
swayam: hi!
taani:hi
Neha: u liking the collage??
taani : accha hai!
(suddenlu a guy by mistakely hits taani nt perpously all her papers aly )
the guy: sry he hit me! (points to nillesh)
nil:sry
t : its k
(the guy is none other dan rey)
(rey helps her collect her papers)
t : ty
r : again sry
( time passes n collage ends)
( taani gots home. rey is at d collge as he is d gs n he has 2 do some work.he is about 2 leave when he stams on a sheet of paper. is about 2 throw it when he reads it.)
r :I've always been the kind of girl
That hid my face
So afraid to tell the world
What I've got to say
But I have this dream
Right inside of me
I'm gonna let it show
It's time to let you know
to let you know

This is real
This is me
I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now I've found who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me

Do you know what it's like
To feel so in the dark
To dream about a life
Where you're the shining star
Even though it seems
Like it's too far away
I have to believe in myself
It's the only way

This is real
This is me
I'm exactly where I'm supposed to be now
Gonna let the light shine on me
Now I've found who I am
There's no way to hold it in
No more hiding who I wanna be
This is me
hey ! dis sounds like a song wonder who dropped it
( takes the paper n goes home)
r : i m tired!
(he looks out of d window n realizes dat d house which was close 4m so many days suddenly sum1 has shifted.)
r : yaha pei ro koi nahi rehta tha? wwho wud have cume 2 stay?
( he sees on d window a girl n realizes her face is similar n remembers her dat she isd new girl in class)
r : yeh toh taani hai na?
( d girl sees him n tells him HI)
(rey also tells hi)
(rey takes a book n writes i m sry 4 2day)
( taani replys: its k)
rey :ur name is taani na?( he wrote)
T: ya(she also wrote on a paper n replaied)
T:whts ur name?(she wrote on d paper)
(rey realized he 4got 2 tell her his name)
R: mera naam reyhansh hai every1 call me rey (he replies)
(taani yawns n writes)
T: tired need 2 sleep!
(b4 rey cud reply she closed d curtains switched off d light n went 2 sleep)
rey 2 himself : wired cudnt wait 4 me 2 reply a wht !

Morning:-(at college )
sharon : sab paper ready hai hame ye aaj sir ko dena hai
swayam:yep sab ready hai so its gonna b fun na?
sharon : ya might b .

(at reys house)
r: oh no mei late ho gaya! ( he gets up freshens up n den leaves)
(taanis house)
T: oh no mei late ho gai.
( goes gets ready n den takes her uncu in her bag n leaves)
(taani is trying 2 catch a rick bt cudnt find 1 . rey was passing by he asked taani.)
R: lift chahie ?
T: nahi its k mujhe abhi ek ric mil jae gi u go .
R: dont worry by dat time collage will over.
T: very funny:
R: ty cum on fast or v both wil bcum late
(taani realizes she has no other choice n goes wid rey)

at collage
(dey both were late )
professor: so mr. gs aap late hai aur app bji?
T: sir sry voh
{{{{(professor cuts her n say)
p: i dont wanna hear any reasons u will have 2 stay 2 hrs after collage. Taani realizes dat she is has 2 finish her song so she can do it after collage nt a bad idea.)swayan:sharon shud i make d announcement?
sharon: k
(swayam try 2 change d topic . he acts as he got a sms .)
swayam : sir i have an annoucement 2make may i?
p: sure (n tells tarey 2 sit )
S : sir hum is weekend ek camp pe jaege so if any1 wanna cum pls tell meor sharon or rey.
Class : woohooo
Class: bt where r v going??
1st episode ends...
need 2 select a place 2 go any suggestions??????
Edited by ray1998 - 12 years ago

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...Natasha... thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
Hey awesome start, plz continue
ray1998 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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yes i will but i need a place 4 camp
i cant think of any place 😭
Edited by ray1998 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start..
taarey are neighbours..
loved to see this taani which have many qualities...
place koi bhi ho kya farak padta hai as far as taarey are togeather..
may be lonawala , khandala
pls. do cont. soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Nice start dear.. Loved the wryting of Taani on that paper.. Continue soon..
a place fr a camp... umm...
What type of it is??
I mean adventure hain ya.. dance ya.. sports??😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#6
hey dea gr8 start...update soon

nd ya u cn choose lonavla or pune 😊 will b gud fr camp
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey gud strt...pls do ..Continue soon...

and sry i don't have any idea of a plce 4r campng...

Edited by 123renudrlng - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start, tr neighbours, that's soo cute, please cont soon n pm me when u do
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Posted: 12 years ago
#9
yes i will 😊
i m really happy u liked it!!!!!
ray1998 thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
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GUYz d whole D3 team is gonna b on nb 5 dis weeek its so cool!!!!!

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