Arhi: Valley of Flowers #2 Chapter 13 in thread 3

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frenzyy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#61

shyam is after khushi😡 arnav carried her up the temple and the sindhoor incident was awsum! loved the update!

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sur91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#62

So Shyam is finally included in the list of ppl that irk me in this FF. Arnav has a long list of opponents now to face to get to his khushi some alive and some dead like his mother who I think was a deeply selfish woman

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#63

oh god yet another problem in khushi life!

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@..mrinalini..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#64

I like this Arnav.Or shall I say I love to hate him.He is brutal at times..his unwavering faith in his mother is disgusting at times..but that's how ASR is supposed to be..ruthless,cruel,intense and passionate lover!!😛

Your writing is lucid..and your stories have this distinct quality about themselves..You can read it from ASR's POV or Khushi's POV..Either way it's equally delectable!!😃

Waiting for the next update!!😊

PS:Shyamu🥱Once a lecher..always a lecher!!😆

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#65

Loved this update !!

My heart goes out to Khushi !

How in the world is she to deal with the likes of Shyam, Nk, and Arnav.

All screwing up her brain as of now !!

One she is in a forced relation, one who is lusting after her and then of course the one for whom her heart beats "Arnav". As if these aren't enough she has to deal with the likes of La and Mamiji !!😡

Arnav is blow hot and cold and still manages to flutter our hearts !!

The entire mandir scene was written beautifully !!

Arnav and Anjali also battled out their differences... but that scenario is quite common among siblings where one feels the less favoured between both the parents.

Wish to see Arnav realise the wrong doings of his family towards khushi including himself !!

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Aparamegha

@Aparamegha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#66

My Gosh this story is getting more and more interesting ...ek phool tin mali...but the flowers heart only beats for one person..beautifully written Mandir scene

Edited by apara_loves_IPK - 12 years ago

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saavan_lover

@saavan_lover

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Posted: 12 years ago

#67

OMG awesome update! I loved it <3 I am loving the way the story is shaping up :) Omg a new twist? A new villain to our Arshi's love story :'( why? :( I just hope that Arnav's MU gets cleared soon! Cant see Khushi in so much pain :( She has suffered way too much :(

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gangsu

@gangsu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#68

Almost every1 is negative or grey character n shyam is d main villian.
wen ll arshi b 2gether ????
Awsum update.
anji is pshychologist so cn't c find difference abt scum shyam????

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g17jas

@g17jas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#69

I have goosebumps. what all will Khushi have to put up with? I wish she would just stop caring so much and tell Arnav the truth but I don't think Arnav will believe her. the girl can't catch a break. great update...makes me want to read more. one week is too long to wait for an update :D

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toblerone

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Posted: 12 years ago

#70

that temple-scene made me feel so nostalgic it was truly beautiful, both the scene from the past and the one from the present!! i liked that arnav didn't care the audience and even defended khushi in front of mami 😊

oh no, why is shyam so obsessed with khushi?? as if khushi and arnav hadn't enough obstacles to clear.. poor them, their love is constantly put to the test!!