SWARON SS; I DONT WANT U BUT U R MINE updt page 11 - Page 11

I love ur update
it was awesome

he doesnot know why she is dancing nd started coughing
but when he came to know abt her asthma
nd now he want to give her all his love
sharon buried her face in his arms nd washed away all her sorrow

lovely update soon

Originally posted by: 8JSmileyFace8J

Loved it!!!!finally Swaron is together!!!!man..you wrote what i want to happen in the show!!!!!!! continue soon!!!!!

comment edited on page 13.. :) :)

Originally posted by: Ria_SwaRon

Gosh, I now am cursing myself.

What the freaking hell I do by spending day and night on forum?

' Miss out such brilliant stuff'???

I am absolutely spell bound.

Di,

you are freaking awesome writer.

I just read all the parts in a go now and I was like stunned.

Each and every chapter is way to go awesome.

U can pen down both Sharon's and emotions so well, I was bewithched.

It all started with Sharon's point of view, then u beautifully took the story to swayam's point of view and then the amazing transition to the SWARON.

I had no clue that story would take this turn. I was amazed when Sharon's idea backfired coz while watching episodes even I used to think something likethat.

And then Swayam's pain, he actually didnt want her,

Sharon's painful efforts to bring Swayam back to dance. So now the story is unfolded.

I am just waiting for other chps now. Plz pm me next time. :) I must say that all the readers who havn't read this ss yet are missing something hell amazing.

guys ye ss yehi khatam karti hoon...will be back with new things whenthey strike me. hope u guys like this.

I did not want to lift my face off his chest. It was enough for tonight...i was tired and swayam felt like...the glimpse of home after a weary long day.

I had cried myself out...and i just lay there with my head cuddled between his shoulder blades, wanting nothing more than the bliss of being in harmony with my love.

"Sharon"he gently nudged me from my contentment filled place. "i'm sorry...i did not know and i called you a lot of things..."

"swayam...you will still...?" i stopped him apologizing midway.

"still what Sharon?"

"you will rejoin the dance team right? You will continue dance?'

"Sharon, i left dance because you left me like that;stranded...and i know that your asthma must have made you lose your rudder for a while... this does not mean that our relationship is back on track. you don't wanna be with me Sharon... I cant dance Sharon...its too painful for me without you i told you. You have your reasons not to be with me...but i cant..."

"now wait just one sec swayam shekhawat...just what do you think i left you for? I sweat my butt off acting acting acting...now you get to know about my asthma and look at you...you're still clueless about why i was behaving like you meant nothing "

"i thought you left me because of one of those strange self-doubtey moods ka chakkar...but you left me because of asthma? i get it you did not wanna tell me or anybody else for the matter because you did not want sympathy...but why did you take yourself away from ,me for asthma?" his voice soaked with incredulity.

"swayam...for the rest of my friends i did not want sympathy frm them...but you; no. Swayam i was scared that you get so affected by anything happening to me...you would leave dance and your future in it for me..just to make me feel better about not dancing...so i thought..if i went away, you would... you know"

"yeh ghorapati cheez tumhare dimaag mai aaya kaise" he enquired...with his jaw open.

"ghorepati?"

'topsy turvy...upside down...aur agar tum mujhe ekbar kehti ki swayam...for me don't leave dance...mai ignore karta kya?'

"sorry swayam...i know i've been stupid...and i know i hurt you a lot in the process...but seriously...it was just because i did not want you to lose your love for dance and what you could be; for me. " i hold my ears...and he smiles...freeing my ears from my hands.

"Sharon raiprakash, mere liye itna care karti hai...not bad Sharon." He was definitely teasing now.

"yeah ok...nothing really has changed swaym...between us. Just between me and dance...everything has." I say sighing. "just no dance anymore.

"says who?' he counters. And i find myself in a moment...standing on his feet...like a toddler and he dances a few steps across the floor with me standing on his feet...i have to laugh...he is sooo adorable. And it feels great to laugh ...truly laugh, with him.

Its getting late.I try to stand up and find my legs still wobbly. He supports me out. Drives me home.

We talked a lot...on the way...happy to be together again...he sensed i did not want to talk about asthma anymore...not that talking about it would cure it. he did not even touch upon it. he was as sad as i was about it...but he did not want to show it in front of me. Anyway...at least half of my world has been salvaged. Swayam is spared to me...and he will dance ...for me. I have won.

He puts me to bed. I smile at him...and he shuts my eyes...whispers a goodnight and leaves. And i sleep well tonight...his smile making my sleep happy and content.

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NAHIII!!!!!!!!!!!end kyu kiya?????I was loving this so much!!!you know i wiated for your updaets everydy!!! okay in all seriousness really very nice SS and definetly something im going to come back to again and again..thanks for sending me the pm and thanks for letting me read your BEAUTIFUL writing...i usually end by saying continue soon... but... today im going to say see you soon... because i want more of your writing to read!!!!

It was nice end yaar

sharon dance for him nd she want him to dance for her
swaron teasing each other nd both of them smile after their never ending argument

sharon happy after their convo nd seeing his smile
swayam cried lot cuz she did this everything for him nd now he will dance for her
lovely