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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: madmadona

nice
i think that doctor saved arjun
& he got amnesia

Thanks dr...areee etna age...hummm...gud...very gud ...dr ...hop u like next part dr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: shrutisweety

arjun gaya kaha
nice update
continue soon

Thanks dr dont be confuse just enjoyyy...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Thank u all my fr for liking n commenting ,hop u like next part to..plz leav ur comment if u realy like..

**part-4**
"maine bahut koshish ke per.."


SCENCE-Riya n mrs chauhan talking to each other..
RIYA-thinking in mind..kal to meri engagement the or main yaha..mom dad ...or vo..sab mere liye waried ho rahen hongen ..
Mrs chauhan notice the tention on. riya's face ..do u hv any problem my dr..
R-vo..main yahan ..i meen its to late now i hv to go..
mrs Ch-plz dr dont take so much stress ..mera driver tumhen safly tumhare gher tak drop ker dega..
R-ohh no anuti..dont bother about me ..i can manage..
Mrs ch-its ok dr esamain tention ke koe baat nahi..Can i ask somthing..???
riya looks enqurily..
mrs ch-dont warry main ye nahi puchungi ke tum en kapdon pe road per kya ker rahi the..ager tum nahi chahati to..
R-ofcourse anuti..ask.. what u wanna to ask..
Mrs ch-will u kno my son..
R-what..?
mrs Ch-etana confuse hone ke jarorat nahi dr..main to bus ehse he puch rahi the..vo tumhare muh se maine uska na..
SOME ONE NOK THE DOOR-
mrs chauhan turn in that direction n say come in..
one servent come inside..
Mrs ch-yes boliye..
Ser-mam one person wanna to meet u..
Mrs ch-ok u will go..i will come after complete my conversation..
Ser-but mam its urgent..
mrs ch-ok u can go ..i wil be coming..
before leaving mrs chauhan trun in riya's direction ...main abhi driver ko bejati huin vo tumhen tumhare gher drop ker dega..
R-thank u aunti vo apko meri vajaha se..
Ch-its ok my dear..
IN HOLL-
man-r u mrs vandana chauhan?

mrs ch-yes i m ..n boliye kya kaam hai apko..
Man-kya aap es car no. ko pahachanti hai..
m ch-yes ye to mere baite ke car ka no hai..per app ye sab kyun puch rahe hai..
Man-grate to ye app ke baite ke car ka no. hai..then. speek up where is ur son ..n th



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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

or vo girl kakan hai jiska accident apke baite ke car se huya ..
Mrs ch-dekhiye plz come inside..or pehale aap aram se baidiye..i will tell u everything..
MAN COME INSIDE N SIT ON A SOFA --
mrs ch-first may i kno who r u.?
Man sho one id n say ..main etf cheif sameer rathor..ab aap bolengi ke aapka baita or vo ladki kahan hai..
mrs ch-dekhiye etna hipper hone ke jarorat nahi..mare baite ne kise ka accident nahi kiya..
Ra-lose his temper..aap jitana apne baite ko bachaye ..hamara shak utana yakeen main badal jayega..jaldy boleye vo ladki kahan hai..
Mrs ch-dekhiye main samajh sakti huin aap pareshan hai..n belive me she is fine..nothing gona heppened to her..
Sameer aap yahan..one voice distrub their conversation..sameer turn. n saw riya is standing on stairs
sameer stood n goes near to her..riya tum thik to ho na..tumhen kahin chot to nahi...
sameer main bilkul thik huin..
Ra-mrs chauhan ager riya ko kuch ho jata to..apke son ko hamesha hamesha ke liye jail ke piche bhej deta..
Ri-no sameer enmain enki or enke son ke koe mistake nahi enfect ager mrs chauhan ke baite nahi hote to shayad main...
Ra-what??he save u ..but tum wahan ker kya rahi the..tum to parlor main the..or tumhara phon ...
Ri-sameer main. gher jaker tumhen sab batati huin..per abhi hamen yaha se..
rathor noded in yes..n goes near to mrs chauhan..
Ra-vo i m sorry mrs chauhan maine vo apko...vo acctualy evening se riya ka kuch pata nahi chala..to main thoda pareshan..
Mrs ch-riya ..? ohh ur name is riya..etna time ho gaya tumhare sath or maine pucha bhi nahi...
n plz sorry kehane ke koe jarorat nahi..i kno kise apne ko khone ka matlab kya hota hai..maine bhi...
anyway plz hv a seet ..
both sit n then mrs ch sit..
Ra-kya main apke son se mil sakta huin..accualy main personaly mil ker thank kehana chahta tha...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85

mrs ch-ohh actualy vo abhi gher per nahi hai..but aap log kal ke paryti mai mil sakte hai..mrs chauhan hand over one card to rathor..
dekhiye plz ager aap log party main ayenge to mujhe bahut achha lagega..
Ra-party dekhiye plz..vo hamen..
M ch-dekhiye plz na maat boleyega ..hum log yahan. newly shift huye hai..es city main or business main khud ko introduse kerne..ke liye hamen kal ek parti organied ke hai..hop aap jaror ayenge..
Ra-ok hum koshish karenge mrs ch now we hv to go..
NOW BOTH GOES--
IN OUTSIDE MRS CH HOUSE
Rathor open car door for riya..
R-sameer vo ..i kno mare vajah se tumhen takleef..
Ra-its ok riya bhul jao us baat ko..
R-how i forget sameer i kno kal ka din tumhare liye bahut importent tha..
Ra-its heart rathor..only for me..not for u riya..kya kal ka din sirf mere liye importent tha or tumhare liye..?
.
Riya did not give ans of rathor's Q she also confuse..n wanna to live some time alone..
Ra-riya car mai baido hamen gher jana hai..sab. kaphi peration hai..
Riya silently sit in car n close her eyes..n rathor aslo sit n start car..rathor's car is left chauhan house n one other car is coming his opposite side..when car comes close to rathor car..riya feel his presence...in air..n open his eyes..she open glass of window n look ouside the window ..she saw one car goes in chauhan house..
riya r u ok..sameer ask her waridly any problem...riya look in sameer n nodded in negtive..n again close her eyes n leand her head on seet..vo kaise ho sakta hai..kyun. baar baar mujhe uski yaad aa rahi hai..kyun ?
kya sach main parlor ke bahar maine arjun ko..ye kya ho raha hai kuch samajh nahi aa raha mujhe..tum kyun mujhe jhud ker chale gaye..
riya riya ..r u ok gher aa gaya hai..without saying anything..she comes out the car n run inside her house..
riya'mom n dad-riya




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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

ask her -riya tum kahan the or yeh sab kya hai..tumhen pata tha na ke kall tumhari engegment the..tum etni careless kaise ho sakti ho..tumhen pata hai..kal log kya kya keh rahe they hamare bare mai..
Rathor comes inside..plz uncle n aunti aap log riya se es bare main koe baat nahi karenge..
Both-per baita..
Ra-jab mujhe koe problem nahi to..or vaise bhi kal sirf engegment the..or vo baad main bhi ho sakti hai..plz its my request aap riya se es bare main koe baat nahi karenge..
mahak comes there n ask riya..riya r u ok..u hv any idea how much i scare when. i not found u in parlor..tum kahan chali gaye the..or tumhara phone use ladke ke pass kaise aya...
Ri-i m sorry..i kno u all disstub or tens bez of me..vo accualy jab main tumse baat ker rahi the by mistake main kise se takragaye or..mera phon vahin gir gaya..again say sorry n leav there n goes to her room
flashbak..
when mahak goes parlor n saw riya is not there..she thought..may be she return back to home..but when she come back to home n saw riya is not there ..she inform her mom n dad..her dad searches her outside n her mom n mahak..try to contect her all fr but not found any clue..
when rathor family comes there for their engagment..they found the truth that riya is not there..rathor first pospone his engagment n said all gest to go back to ur house n then order shree track riya's no..
they found no. locaton in slum area's n goes there ..
Sh-sir riya ke no. ke locaton es gher se a rahi hai..
Ra-r u shur shree?
Sh-yes sir..
they goes inside n saw one boy age 14 .
Ra-ye phon tumhare pass kya ker raha hai..or vo ladki kahan hai jiska ye phone hai..
Bo-uncle mujhe kuch nahi pata mujhe to bus ye road per pada mila..
Ra-daro mat kya tum hamen bo jagaha dikha sakte ho..jahan per tumhen yeh phon mila..
boy show that place..
n



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Posted: 12 years ago
#87

rathor n shree ask every single person n show everyone her photo..
n finaly he got information about her ...one tea stall man saw her running on the road n screeming one name..
Ra-kya tumne es ladki ko dekha hai..
Tea m-haan sab kal rat ko dekha tha..lagbhag 8 baj rahe they...vo road per pagalon ke tarah bhag rahi the...or shayad kise ka naam pukar rahi the..
Ra-kiseka naam..?? per kiska..
T m-saab kuch to tha per..kuch yad nahi aa raha..kuch aa se...
Ra-jaldy sonch ker batao..
Tman-haan. sab yad aa gaya uska name arjun haan arjun arjun chila rahi the..
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rathor shocked after hearing arjun name.. riya arjun kuch samakh nahi aa raha..
Ra-achha tumhen pata hai vo kahan gaye..i meen usake baad..
T m-haan sab ek car aye ..or madam ji usase takragaye..or shayad behosh ho gaye..
or ..
Ra-or kya..
Tm-or haan car main se ek man aya or usane unhen udaya or car ke piche vali seet per baidaya or chala gaya...
Ra-kya tumne us car ka no ..ya color ya model dekha tha...
Tm-sab no. ka to pata nahi hum to unpad adami hamen bhala no. ke bare main kya pata..
damm it ab kya karon..kaise pata lagaon ke vo kahan hai ..rathor think somthing n calk shree..
Ra-hellow shree ha tum jaldy yahan aa jao..
Shree comes there n show some model of car..haan sab. yahi model tha ..
sh-r u sure..
T man-haan sab black color ke car the or yahi model tha..
Sh-gud ab tum ja sakte ho..
Ra-shree kuch pata chala..
Sh-yaan sir es model ke five he car indea main aye hai..
jinamain se two black or three white hai..or esamain ek black car kolkata main or dusari ese city main hai..thats meens hamen riya ka pata chal gaya..
Ra-gud job shree..now u go back .or main vahan jata huin..
flashback end...
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PRECAPE-So finaly enjoy party on chauhan house...u all r invited...hop u realy wanna to meet chauhan's whole family...



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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
dont tell me... Arjun Chauhaan??? i don't believe it... interesting story... waiting 4 more!!😉
Edited by dashequalsd3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Update soon ,😊
mujhe Chauhan se milna hai.
Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
cool update... so dat means Riya ws to gt engaged to Rathore... y do i hv the feeling that Arjun s with chauhans???... update soon...

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