ARIYA SS:U R MINE..always mine*COMPLETED* - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely😊
kitna jaldi update kiya na... mujhe laga ki tu to bhul hi gye..
miss u shonaa😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear
thanx fr d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
tolrate bit long one...
i m ending my all story one by one...

LAST PART...


"Adhuri si sansen hain,adhure se hum...
shayada hamara sapher."
.


SCENCE---

Bolooo tum arjun ho na...plz bolo..tum mere arjun ho na..
but arjun didnt say anythink,
he didnt understand whats ans her..
.
She crying n runs inside the forest..
Riya stop vahan maat jao ,vahan khatara hai..
Riya..a!!
Arjun can easly feel the danger...
His all masuls are tightend,
he feel the very uneasy feeling,
Riya stoped..Arjun runs behind her..
----
arjun following riya ,After at one point
Ohhh noo...Leav her...Arjun shouted..
he crushed himself(jis baat ka dar tha vahi huya..)
.
I said leave her...!!!!!!!
arjun..nn...
She looking toward arjun n arjun in riya's eyes..
as now every think is over..
.
Ha ..ha ..ha ha.. haaa...
.
Etani bhi kya jaldy hai acp arjun rawte...
.
One man laughed...
He was the same man..which he saw in his vision...
I say leave her sikkander..!!!!!
he yelled out of his voiced,
.
Abaj nichhe karo arjun..
verna teri mehboba ke liye thik nahi hoga,
arjun just peased his teeth,
.
Sik ordered his man..
Pakad lo dono ko or vahin le chalon..
jahan ek baar ek kahani ka end huya tha..
----
SCENCE SHIFT-
Ra-shree kuch pata chala vo pass (Remember the chit he found)kahan ka hai,
Sh-sir ye to kisi club ka pass hai..
.
Ra-ok shree pata karo vo kis ke naam per ragister hai..
.
In bw Aisha called chotu..
Chotu kuch information mile.
sikander or us ke adamiyon ke baare mein..
.
Ch-Khaber to pakki hai,vo mumbai mein he hai,
Or shayad arjun sir ke pichhe..
per vo to ab...
(He wanna to say he is no more)
Ais-(In mind)arjun ke pichhe..matlab use pata hai arjun jeenda hai,
.
she was lost in her thought..
Aishaaa..!!!! tumhara


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Posted: 12 years ago
Dhayaan kahan hain..
Sameer sikander is here or...
.
Ra-or vo arjun ke pichhe
hai ..
Ais-haan per tumhen..
k leave it,Ab hamen arjun or riya ko jaldy dundana hoga,
esase pehale ke bahoot der ho jaye,
.
Ra-haan u right aisha..
Sh-sir vo pass kise raghu ke naam per hai..
.
Ra-shree chotu ko raghu ke baare mein sati info do..
or usase kaho use etf office le aye..
----

After half hour raghu in Etf investigation room--
Ra-yelled-bolo tum us auto driver ke gher kyun gaye..
uska mader tumne hi kiya hai..
Raghu-mein nahi janta ye pass vaha kaise pahonchha..
mein kuch nahi janta,
.
Ra-chotu ye ehse nahi manega..
Lagata hai ese bolana sikhana hi padega..
Chotu wanna to punch raghu but aisha stoped..
.
Rehane do chotu kyun apni energy wait ker rahe ho,
jab ese kuch pata hi nahi,
to ye hamare kissi kaam ka nahi..
She took her gun n put inside raghu's mouth,
Raghu-nooo plz dont shoot ok mein batata hoon,
.
mujhe ek aadami ne paise diye they es driver ko marane ke,or ...
Rathor slaped his face ..or kya.???
Raghu-or mujhe nahi pata vo adami kon tha..
.
shree hamare pass jitane bhi criminal ke record ese dikhao or pata karo ke vo adami kon hai,jisane ese us driver ko marne ke supari di the..
.
-----

SCENCE SHIFT---
AT PALI HILL...

Arjun n riya stood at the ege of cliff..
sikander's man holding both seperatly..
Sik-Uff acp kuch yaad aya ya mein yaad dilaon,
Yaad hai ye vahi jagaha hai,
Jahan se tumhari..Akhari saanse leti huye body ko nichhe phenka tha..
.
yahi esi jagaha tumhari,mehboba ke aankhon ke samne,
Arjun try to remved himself per all vain..
.
Tum log bachhoge nahi arjun yelled..
Sika slaped riya's face..
Ahhh...She screamed in pain,
Arjun very bad,tum jitana unchi avaj mein bologe,
utana tumari mehboba ke liye thik nahi hoga..
uff poor girl,he held her hair..
Ahhh!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
continue soon piya
cant wait
please please...
ll_piya_ll thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sikander leave her ,
shik again slaped hard..
Arjunnn..!!!!
Her corrner of lips r blooding,
Arjun just peeased his teeth,
he looks her helpless..
he didnt know, how To deal with sikander.?
.
if he do anythink ,then sikander definitly hurt riya..
.
RI-(in mind)Aaj meri vajah se tum yahan phas gaye ho arjun,
meri he karan ,Aaj arjun mere pass nahi or aaj tumhari bhi jaan khatare mein hai,
.
Na arjun use din mujhe bachane ata or nahi vo..
she closed her eyes...
.
Sik-He point gun on riya's head..
Ab jaldy baata arjun vo file kahan hai..
.
Ar-sik noo dont shoot her,tum jis file ke baat ker rahe ho,mujhe nahi pata,
.
Si-lagta hai tumhen esase ab pyaar nahi arjun, he unlock his gun n put his finger on the triger..
----

SCENCE SHIFT---
Ra-mahak kuch Pata chala ke riya..us auto mein baid ker kahan jaa sakti hai,
.
Yes sir vo beach gaye the..
meine yahan kuch local longo se pooch taajh ke to pata chala..
vo or arjun ek sath the..
.
Mein or aisha abhi vahan aate hain..
----


After few hours..

MAhak-Sir ye naveen hai,ye bhi un longo mein se ek hai jisane arjun or riya ko kidnaped kiya..
.

Kuch logon ne ese hi dekha tha ,jab arjun or riya yahan beach per aye they to ye naveen laga tar unka pichha ker raha tha..
.
Rathor grabbed his color n yelled
bol kahan le gaya tha tha tu un dono ko..
bolll.
mein kuch nahi janta ,mujhe kuch nahi pata..
.
haan ye sach hai ,ke mein unka pichha ker raha tha,per meine sachh mein kuch nahi kiya,
.
Aisha-ye jhod bol raha hai,sameer..aisha punched hard his face,
bol tune us raghu ko paise kyun diye they..us driver ko marne ke liye,
.
Naveen-Mein kise raghu..
(befor he completed aisha again pounch)
jhood to bolana maat ,
bez mere pass tere khilaph pakke saboot hain,
sameer ye vahi hai..jisane raghu ko paise diye they,
shree ne abhi mujhe


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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mms aya tha..us raghu ne us a
aadami ko pehchan liya hai sir..or its god news for us..
the person is nonother then is naveen..
per mahak tumhen ye naveen mila kaise...
----
FEW TIME BEFORE--
Mahak asked riya's mom n dad..but they didnt know anythink about her..
.
but mahak knows very well..whenever riya upset ,she always go beach,
.
kahin es baar bhi beach..
So she decided to go beach..
she asked local people n beach stall's man ,showing photo or arjun n riya..
.
is any one saw her or known..???
She shows photo to one tea man..
One tea man-haan madam meine en sahab ko dekha tha..or shayad...haan ye ladki bhi unke saath the..
Mahak-R u Sure..?? mera matlab,tum etana yakeen se kaise keh sakte hoo,
.
One tea stal man-pura akeen hai madam,kaise bhul sakta hoon,pure 490 ke tip de thi,
pehale to ye sahab aye the beach per,kaphi udas or khoye khoye lag rahe they..
unhone mujhase ek cutting chai mangi,or mujhe 500 ru diye or kaha baki ke rakh lo,
.
Phir baad mein ek ladki aye,
vohi jo es pic mein hai,
Dono kuch bast ker rahe the,
Ladki roti huye vahan se bhag gaye, ye sab bhi unke pichhe bhage..
.
Tabhi ek car ruki,usamein se kuch log aye or un dono ko jaberjasti (forcefully) apne sath le gaye,
.

per haan usamein se ek adami ko janta hoon,
vo yahin pass ke basti mein rehata hai..
---
Mahak-phir kya tha sir...us adami ke help se mein or chotu es naveen tak pahoonch gaye..
.
Rathore-bata kiske kehane per tune ye sab kiya..bol..
.
Naveen-ager meine kuch kaha,to vo mujhe nahi chodega,
Rathore put his gun on his mouth,n said ager tune apna munh nahi khola to hum tujhe nahi chodenge..
.
Aisha-sam(she call sam loll)
(Sameer looked toward aisha)
ye ehse nahi bolega,or vaise bhi,hum to pata laga he lenge or ye to hamare kisi kaam ka nahi,
.
to eske marane ka hamen to koe nuksaan nahi hoga.
.
Sameer-tum sahi


Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Keh rahi ho aisha..he unlock the n about to shoot(just act)
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naveen-noo!!!! dont shoot mein batata hoon..
.

SCENCE SHIFT--

NOOO,..!!!! dont shoot her,
dont shoot,
dekho tum mujhe jo samajh rahe ho,mein vo nahi hoon,
.
Mein sach mein nahi janta vo file kahan hain..
.
Sikander yelled bus arjun rawte bahoot ho gaye tumhare bakbas..
.
He put his finger on the triger..
Ab vaise bhi us file ka koe matlab nahi,
jab tum he nahi rahoge to kise ko vo file jisamein
hamare illegal kaamo ke details hai,kisseko milegi nahi..
.
Ab bata pehale kise maro..tujhe ya tere mehbooba ko..ha ha ha ha ha..
Use jaane do sikander leave her..
Sik-eska matlab tu pehale marna chahata hai..jaise tere
marji,
ri-nooo..!!! dont shoot arjun,
Chood do use..plz..zzz ..!!!
.
sikander laughed laudly n ariya looked each other with helplessly expression..
.
His laughed enchhoing arjun 's mind, some flashes come across his mind..but he cant saw properly...
.
on the other
Ri-in mind-noo not again,mein ek baar arjun ko kho chuki hoon..ab dobara nahi..
.
sik-Aaj phir se es ladki ko marna hoga..
es baar tu bhi ese nahi bachha payega..
.
nooo.!!!!
one gun shoot..
Riyaa...aa...aaa...!!!!!!!...
Ariya r rolling on the ground n fall down the cliff...
.
Arjun riyaaa..!!!! Rathor screamed...

.
Few minute before-
.
arjun already saw his vision he shoot riya..
n he know what will be next..but he hav to take chance..
he gether his all force n finaly free himself from sik's man n run toward riya..
.
Sikander shoot toward riya..
Arjun screamed..
nooo ...Riyaaa...
He pushed riya away but both lost their balanced n start rolling on the ground..
.
the same time sameer n all team reached there..
.

They r already stood at the end of cliff..(so before they saved themself to falling down..,they Already fall down the cliff..)
.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Sameer wuthout waisting any second shoot sikan's head n all team start firing..
soon all sik's man r dead or or two r alive they catch by team..
aisha mahak n sameer run toward r cliff..(where they fall down)
.
Arjunnn..!! riya...!!!!!...
Sameer screamed..
nooo not again..
i cant lose u both..
Arjunnn riyaaa..!!!!!!!!
.
he fall down on the ground ,
i lost again my friend..
i m looser ..i m fail again..i cant save both..
.
Aisha put her hand on sameer shoulder..
Plz sam sambhalo apne aap ko..we cant loose hop..
hamen unhen jald se jald search kerna hoga..
.
shayad vo abhi bhi...(Stop in mid)
.
sameer look up with teary eyes..
i loose both ...
.
maine unke parents se promised kiya tha..ke mein dono ko kuch nahi hone donga per...
.
how could i meet my eyes to riya's n arjun's parents..
*********************************
*******
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*
SIX MONTH LATER---
She try to catch her breath..her heart is racing forcely...
She looks her self in mirror n then closed her eyes..
.
Someone come from behind n hug her tightly...
She shiver down by sudden hug..
hey its me..he inhaled her perfumes ,
(she lost)per aap kya ker rahe hain..
.
I wanna to see u first,mein dekhana chahata tha,pehale
.
he wishper her ears..
u looking so beautiful..n kissed there,hiii how could i controled my self,
.

She-Per dar lagta hai..kahi es baar phir se..ager ehsa hua sach mein main mar...
before she completed he
sealed her lips by him..
n wishper...
Shhh es baar ehsa kuch nahi hoga..u r mine n always mine..
.
no one can separate us...He start kissing her softaly..
she tightly hold her dress..
plz stoped ager koe aa gaya to,(Stil closing her eyes)
.
i dont care riya..
jise ana hai aa jaye..plz arjun,
kuch der mein hamari shadi hone vali hai or tum yaha..
,
but he continue to kiss her..
he kissed her neck line,
arjun plz jao...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Koe aa jayega..to kya sonchega..shh riya hamari shadi hone bali hai..jise jo sonchana hai,sochane do..
.
per arjun..he again peaked her lips n kissed her passionatly until both didnt need air...
.
After some time riya rest her head on arjun chest n both breathing heavly n try to catchup their breath..
.
Arjunnn..!!
hummm
yakeen nahi ho raha..
.
kiss baat ka..
yahi ke aaj hamari shadi hai,
Or aap sach mein mere sath,mere etane pass hain..
---
FLASH BACK
sameer is crying ...but sudenly they heared one sound..
arjun shouted for help..
Riya hugging arjun n. Arjun holding one rock..
,
both r hangging by rock..
Sameer n team imedeatly help both n same told every think to arjun n riya that..
.
arjun chouhan is non other then arjun rawte...
Fb end
----
arjun nn
humm..
ajeeb saa dar lagta hai,
kahin phir se..
He put his finger on riya's lips shhh..ehsa kuch nahi hoga riya..
.
arjun hug her tightly n she hearing arjun's heart beat..
.
Ar-riya ager meri memory kabhi vapees nahi aye to..
.
mujhe to hamare poorani yadon ke baare mein kuch bhi yaad nahi,
.
Riya parted that hug n looked in arjun's eyes..
to kya huya arjun..Hum apni nayee yaaden phir se banaeyege..
She flashed her dimpled smiled n wishper..
u r mine always mine..samjhe* she pulled arjun n kissed his lips ,
samjhayon***
.
--
Somone knok the door--
Arjun kissed her last time n run toward the balcony..
arjun sambhalker..
dont warry riya ,mujhe kuch nahi hoga..he kissed her checks n go down..
.
She some how controled her blush..
it was mahak n aisha..
both-ohe hoye abhi se etana blush..shadi ke pehali raat ko kya karogi..
.
her face changed deep ..
Ab chalen tumhari shadi ka time ho gaya..
.
----
Both locking each other with corner of eyes..
she comes n sit next to arjun..
Soon they take seven circle around holi fire ..Holding each other hands..
.


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