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yas23

@yas23

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

amazing
aww ariya was dancing
arjun can sense danger intersting
who is the nwe girl
continue soon

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Mdmadona

@Mdmadona

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

awesome update
ariya dance superb
arjun still can sense danger early as always
it's confirmed that he is riya's arjun, etf 2nd command
so Mr & Mrs Chauhan hv to say the story behind this mystry now
aww still he is in danger
wonder who wanna attack him
is the new girl for rathore
he is totally lost in her
cont soon

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Mishti,mish,mishtu, mt

@mishree

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

i lttlebt sad bt it s amazing dr b t plzz pm 4 nxt part plzz

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

thank u so much my dr lvly fr ...
for liking n reading...!!
n giving ur valuable commentsss ...!!
its realy meen for me..!!
i m realy very happy after reading urs comments...!!
hop u like next part...
i will update very soonnn
lv u frs
piya...

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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#215

just now read part 7 and part 8 together...

👏.👏.👏.👏.👏.👏..👏.👏.

so sweet and emotional update...

riya and arjun danced together so nice...

riya hugged and cried to arjun that was so emotional...

who attacked arjun??????????

cont soon yaar...

waiting...

thanks for the PM...

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Megha (Vishav Kirti) Sharma

@dmegha

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Oh...the update was really amazing, Arjun...i guess he lost his memory but i am really confused about his power, i mean is he able to know what will happen or anything like this...chalo chado, i guess sam will fall for this mystery girl ! Do continue soon.

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

Thank u so much frs for suchhh a sweet sweet n lvly lvly comment..
i hv no word how to say thanks u...
realy thank u so much..!!
so finaly i will updating next part today...hop u like...
plz i realy need ur suggestion..is story is going well or not..
Hop its not bor n hop u like...
thank u so much...
ur piya...

Edited by Piyarani - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

PART=9
"Halky halk parat..ab hatane lagi hai..jo phasale bad gaye they..vo mitane lage hai.. "

SCENCE-Mrs chauhan is warried ..bez she tried his son no. many times but his phone is out of coverage area..
Mrs ch-main kab se uska phone laga rahi huin ,per pata nahi uska phone lag kyun nahi raha hai ..mujhe bahot dar lag raha hai,pata nahi vo kahan gaya keh ker gaya tha,jaldy aa jayega but abhi tak nahi aya..
Mr ch-vandana etani hipper kyun ho rahi ho,vo koe chota bachha nahi hai,
ata hi hoga,
Mrs ch-hipper kyun ho rahi hoon, ye aap keh rahe hai,
app jante hain na us per pehale bhi attack ho chuka hai..
or kal raat ka incident,esase ek baat to saaf ho gaye hai,
koe to hai jo use marna chahta hai,
or siya bhi to yahi keh rahi the,
Mr ch-yes u right,
mrs ch-or phir arjun ,how culd he wrong,u kno very well he can sence danger..
Mr ch- yes i kno but not almost..
mrs ch-mujhe kuch nahi pata..mr chahaun i wanna my son right now,
pata nahi vo kahan or kis hall main hoga,mera dil bahoot ghabra raha hai,
~~~
on the other side~
one girl n one man r laying on a ground,boths hands n leg r tied with rope,n their mouth tied with cloths,
.
one man talk to other-
One man-dono ko thik se to banda hai,
2man-yes bose,
1man-dono ko hosh aya ya nahi,
2-no boss abhi bhi behosh hai,
1man-achha hai,vo dono jab. tak behosh hai hamare liye achha hai,
per hamen kab tak dono ko pakad ker rakhana hoga,
jab tak boss ka order nahi ata ke hamen age ka kerna
hai ,tab tak samjhe,
bas ab dono per najer rakhana,
per dhayan rakhana kahin bhag na jayen..
yes boss,
~~~
SCENCE SHIFT-
what ..?per kab ..
or aap mujhe ab phone ker ke bata rahi hai,
ok aap chinta maat kijiye..
main pata kerta huin..
.
sir aap etana pareshan kyun lad rahe ho
two minute silence..
Ra-haan shree pareshani ke baat hai,

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#219

Sh-sir kya baat hai,.?
Ra-tum jald se jald riya ka no trac ker ke batao ke vo kahan hai..
Sh-ok sir,he type something in his lapy,
after five minute,
yumm sorry sir riya ka no track nahi ho paa raha hai,per sir baat kya hai,
kuch nahi shree bas main abhi aya..or haan tum try kerte rehana or jaise he kuch pata chale mujhe phone kerna..
sameer took a deep breath,
.
sameer took his suv keys n moved toward parking area..
lot of Q is running in his mind..pata nahi ye riya bhi na kahan chali gaye..
hop riya thik ho..
he opened his suv door n sit on diver sheat..
after half n hours he reached riya's house..
mr n mrs mokherji waiting sameer..
Mr-achha hya sameer baita tum aa gaye,
riya ka shubha se kuch pata nahi,
mrs mo-pata nahi es ladki ke kya problem hai,
hamen laga en ek saal main sab change ho jayega per..arjun ka bhoot us ke sir se nahi gaya,
ye khud to maar gaya,
or sath main hamari phool se baiti ko bhi ..mrs mo sobing..
Sa-plz uncle aunti aap log tension maat ligiye,
kya aap ko pata hai..
vo gher se kab gaye the
Mrs mo- nahi baita..vo mor main jab main usake room main gaye to vo vahan nahi the..pata nahi etani mor main kaha chali gaye..
hamen laga ke thodi der main aa jayegi per..raat hone ko hai,vo ab tak nahi aye,
Sa-app ne uske frs se baat ke,
Mr mo-sab jagah pata kiya per uska kuch pata nahi chala..
sameer thinking somthing in mind..
ok aap tension maat lijiye,
main use kuch nahi hone doonga..
i kno tum kahan ho sakti ho..
~~~
SCENCE SHIFT~
Ahhh..the man feel his head is heavi..mera ser etana kyun bhari kyun lag raha hai,
the man slowly opened his eyes n recogniged the place.
ye kon se jagaha hai,
or light bhi kitani kaam hai,
lagta hai raat ho gaye hai,
he feel his hand n leg is tied n his mouth r tied with cloths,
ye sab kya hoo raha hai,
or main yaha kaise or..Ahhh

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Poonam..../Piya

@ll_piya_ll

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Ahhh..
mera ser etana kyun chakra raha hai..
ir vo or vo kahan hai..
vo bhi to mere sath ..he move his head here n there ..
but the room is litle dark..
finaly his graze fell in one corrner..(i kno u all r think in one time how he speek if,his face his closed..he all think in mind)
vo thik to hai na..
my both hands n legs r tied..how i recognized is she is fine or not..
first i hv to try to open my hand but how..
he lift his head to find..somthing..with the help of this ,vo apne haath khol sake..finaly he saw one glass peiace..he slide on the flor n try to took that peiase of glass..so many tryle finaly he succed to free his hand..then he free his mouth n after that his leg ...
n took step toward her..

SCENCE SHIFT-
Sameer in mind i kno vo kahan hogi,jaror vo mr chahaun ke gher gaye hogi,
i hv to go n check..
sameer took a deep breath,
vo tumhara arjun nahi hai riya..
vo arjun abhinav chauhaan hai,mr n mrs ch ka baita..tumhen etana samjhaya phir bhi tumhen samajh nahi aya..
lot of Q is running in his mind..pata nahi mr n mrs ch kya sonchenge or unka baita..
i hop vo meri baat samajh paye,
hop riya vahin ho..
He drive his suv toward arjun's house..
after one hours sameer reached in arjuns house,

Inside arjun house-
Mr ch-what ye tum kya keh rahe ho..

nahi riya yahan nahi aye,
or riya to chodo mera baida khud mor se missing hai..
pata nahi vo kaha hai..?
Sa-what arjun bhi missing hai,
jaror arjun ne he riya..
befor he completed..someone call him from behind..
Aap jaisa sonch rahe hai mr sameer rathor vaisa kuch nahi hai,
samjhe aap..
Mrs ch-siya baita tum...??
Sa-tum..?

TB CONTI-
What happened riya n arjun...??
who is siya..???
is their life is in danger,..??
is arjun is arjun suryakant rawte..?
if u wanna all that ans waited for next part...??
n dont forget to read my SS