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@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR👏👏👏...beautiful chapter😳

thanks deep di

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: aashizin
woww superb upd priya i loved it sorry for late reply do upd soon can't wait for next upd n thanks for pm

thanks aashi di

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: arzzo
wao finally the 1 update of the story and now doupt it was really fantastic the way of intro was really unique just like seen in tv such a lovely happy family all stay together each and every character have it own charm love the brothers sister gang and a,sam,sw saying pari shona and bachi to tia that was really beautifull as u have told this in character skatch also but in scenes it was looking more touchy and their are very possive for tia beat a guy just for that becuz he flirts with him thats brothers are forlove the way the ask for mafi and the song sequence the entir update was awesome waiting for the into of deshmukh parivaar

thanks dear

the bond and love between both the sibbling gang is very touching indeed

this ff is about the this bond too

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: idiot_box
Awesome ff.
Very interesting concept.
Loved the first update,
Please do add me to the pm list!
Love,
XOXO
Amrita!!

thanks amrita

for sure

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: IMMI-
wow LD such updates amazing, what lines in the second update kya baath hai my LD knows her stuff😉😛.. Hai what a family in 3rd update we get the family atmosphere from it already hahahahah such brotherly love hahhaha👏

thanks BB

i am glad you like it

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Marium

@pehlanasha.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#136

Are you updating now? 😳

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#137

Originally posted by: Tanya_Swaronluv
Are you updating now? 😳

i am still writinng it if i finish then i will otherwise tomorrow

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@-Marie-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#138

Just wow !! hehe it was quite diffferent from all ones.. n loads of character damag ghum gya but yeah hel interesting cant wait for mystery guessing a lot lol let see what u stored for us .. loved siblings manao mission it was so sweet n great <3 <3 cant wait for other family s intro continue soon <3 i loved da narration part pari <3 <3 Best of luck update soonish <3 <3 wIth loads of sajan😆😆😆

And yeah the siiggy is really gud n the lines written over it😲 Cant wait for sure to know this story please continue soon <3 <3

Edited by MSluvsSI - 12 years ago

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#139

Originally posted by: MSluvsSI
Just wow !! hehe it was quite diffferent from all ones.. n loads of character damag ghum gya but yeah hel interesting cant wait for mystery guessing a lot lol let see what u stored for us .. loved siblings manao mission it was so sweet n great <3 <3 cant wait for other family s intro continue soon <3 i loved da narration part pari <3 <3 Best of luck update soonish <3 <3 wIth loads of sajan😆😆😆

And yeah the siiggy is really gud n the lines written over it😲 Cant wait for sure to know this story please continue soon <3 <3

thanks jaani

mystery toh full on hain iss mein

i am glad you liked it i was nervours with it

update raat ko

the lines on the siggy was given by sadi i never told her to write those lines but it fittrd so wll

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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Posted: 12 years ago

#140

thanks for the likes and comments

Part 2

Virani parivaar ke baad ab baari hain deshmukh parivaar ke unke parichay ke liye hum chalte hain deshmukh villa yahan har subah masti Mazak aur nach gaane ke saath shuru hoti hain aur kabhi kabhi chote mote ladai jagrah bhi hote hain

6.30 am

Shuruvat ghar ke bado se anurag aur prerna deshmukh se

An-mera ghar mein maan hi nahin lagta soch raha hu ki aaj office chala jao kaisa rehega?

Pr-haan bilkul theek rehega main toh kehti hu ki tum wahin apna ghar basalo yahan wapas aane ki zaroorat hi kya hain

An-prerna tum itna overeact kyun kar rahin ho? Main Mazak kar raha tha

Pr- main overreact nahin kar rahi hoo sach keh rahi hoon tumhare ghar mein mann kahan lagta hain agar mihir bhaiya retire hone ka faisla nahin karte toh tum toh kabhi bhi retire hi nahin hote

An- ab aisa bhi nahin hain ab mere bache mujhe office mein kaam nahin karne dete toh mujhe kabhi na kabhi toh retire hona hi padta aur ab chote bhi tyaar hain kaam ko sambhalne ke liye

Pr -chote ke bina ghar kitna suna lagta hain acha hain ki woh aaj wapas aa raha hain

An- sach chote hota hain toh ghar mein main kabhi shanti nahin rehti aur ab dekho kitni shanti

Pr- shanti toh hogi hi na choteke bina uski beheno ka bhi kahan mann lagta hain pranks khelne mein kitna bigar ke rakha hain apne bhai ko

An- prena ek lauta bhai hain aur woh bhi chota toh bigarna toh unka haak hain ek doosre se charo bahut pyaar karte hain bas darr lagta hain ki kahin unka yehi pyaar ke wajah se koi bhi rasta na bhatak jaaye

Pr- aisa nahin hoga humhare sanskaar itne kamzor nahin hain ki charo mein se koi bhi rasta bhatak jaaye aur agar hua bhi toh hum hain na unhe sahi rasta dikhane ke liye

Anurag ka darr jeetega ki prerna ka vishwaas yeh toh aane wala kal hi batayega ab jaage badte hain inke bade beta aur bahu ki taraf manav aur archana ke paas

ma- archana mera towel kahan mujhe kahin nahin mil raha

ar- manav wahin toh rakha hain bed par aap zara dhaayan se dikhiye

ma- kahan rakha hain mujhe toh kahin nahin mil raha

ar- yeh toh raha aap bhi na manav dikhai nahin deta kya

ma- agar dikhayi de jaata toh kya tumhare saath romance karne ka mauka kaise milta

ar- manav kya kar rahe chodiya na

ma aise kaise cohd du tumhare saath romance karne ke liye itne time baad time mila hain

ma- kya hua kya soch rahi hoon?

Ar- manav kya riddhima ko bhi aap jaise pyaar karne wala jeevan saathi milega ?

Ma- humhari riddhima lakhon mein ek hain usse aur baakiyon ko bahut pyaar karne wale jeevan saathi milege

Ar- pata nahin manav uss din ke baad mujhe apni teeno betiyon ke liye darr lagta hain riddhima pehli jaise nahin rahi aur kahin gunjan aur sharon ke saath bhi kuch aisa na ho jaaye

Ma- tum tension maat lo riddhima bhi jald hi theek ho jaayegi aur dono gudiya ke saath kabhi bhi kuch galat nahin hoga

Kya hua tha usse din jisne riddhima ko badal ke rakh diya ? yeh waqt aane par bataugi archana ka darr kya sach hoga? Wait and watch

Ab baari hain anurag aur prerna ke chote beta bahu ki maltab shansank aur Padma ki chaliye milte hain

Sh- kya baat hain Padma aaj bahut khush lag rahi hoon ?

Pa- kush toh hongi hi na mera beta jo aaj waapis aa raha hain

Sh- bete ke waapis aane par tum jitna khush ho rahi hona itna toh kabhi mere tour se waapis aane par bhi nahin hui

Pa- aap na ek maa ke dil ka haal kabhi nahin samjhege aur waaise bhi chote mera ek lauta beta hain khush hone ka haq banta hain

Sh- sahi kahan kabih aisa laga hi nahin ki humhari do betiyan hain hamesha aisa lagta hain ki humhari teen betiyan aur ek beta hain jin par hum kitna garv karte hain

Pa- ab humhari bache hain hi issi layak garv karna toh banta hain

Kya inke bache inke garv ko kayam rakh paayenge?

Ab baari hain rockstars

Sh-Chali re, chali re
Junoon ko liye
Katra, katra lamho ko diye
Pinjre se uda dil ka shikra
Khudi se maine ishq kiya re

Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re jiya oh ho

Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re jiya oh ho
Sharon dance around in the room while cleaning her messy bed

Sharon dance around in the room while cleaning her messy bed

Gu- Chali re, chali re

Junoon ko liye
Pinjre se uda dil ka shikra
Khudi se maine ishq kiyaaa re
Jiya jiya re jiya re...

Gunjan joined her little sister by helping her clean the room and started singing along her

ri-Chhote chhote lamho ko teetli jaise pakdo toh
Haathon mein rang reh jaata hai
Pankho se jab chhodo toh
Waqt chalta hai
Waqt ka magar rang utarta hai
Udte udte phir ek lamha maine pakad liya re

Riddhima came and joine them in singing the song and dancing
ri,sh,gu-Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re jiya oh ho

Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re
Jiya jiya re jiya re jiya oh ho

sh- di aapko pata hain itne dino baad aapko gaate dekh mujhe kitna acha lag raha hain?

Gu- haan di aap aise bahut achi lagti hoon

Ri- ab meri itni pyaari behen gaana gaa rahi hoon aur dance kar rahin ho toh main aise peeche reh sakti hoon aur waise bhi jo kuch bhi hua main usse bhul chuki hoon

Sh- yeh toh bahut achi baat hain di dekhna ek din aapko bhi aapka sacha pyaar mil jaayega bilkul meri tarah

Gu- ek minute di toh sach pyaar mil jaayega iss mein koi shak nahin par meri tarah matlab? Koi hain kya teri life mein?

Sh- di kaisi baat kar rahi hoon? Agar koi hota toh sabse pehle aap dono ko bata diya hota mere kehne ka matlab tha ki mujhe pura yakeen hain ki ek na ek din mujhe mera pyaar mil jaayega

Gu-what rubbish yeh pyaar vyaar sirf kitabo mein acha lagta hain aur asli zindagi mein yeh sab sirf sapne hi hota

Sh- aisa nahin hain di

Ri- bas bas isse pehle tum dono jhagra start kardo main tumhe yaad dila du ki aaj chote waapis aa raha hain aur jahan tak pyaar ka sawaal hain pyaar agar humhari kismat main hain toh waqt aane par humhe mil jaayega ab chalo bahut kaam karna hain aur academy bhi toh jaana hain

Jis ke aane ki khushi mein yeh sab khush hain aakhir who hain kon yeh toh sab samjh hi gaye honge lekin who kahan hain yeh sawaal zaroor aaya hoga chalo iska bhi jawab main de deti chalo chalte hain Singapore chote se milne

In singapore

Guy- yaar tera aaj jaana zaroori hain kya ? itni bhi kya jaldi hain jaane ki? kuch din aur rukh jaa

Guy2- yuvi main aur nahin rukh sakta tujhe toh pata hain na main apni family se khaash kar apni beheno se bahut pyaar karta hoon unse dur rehna ke baare mein soch bhi nahin sakta main yahan kaam ke liye aaya tha woh hoga ab main waapis jaa raha hoon chahe tu jitna bhi mujhe rukhne ki koshish kare

y- ranveer tujhse iss baare mein behaash karna bekar hain main ab tujhe nahin rokunga lekin meri ek shart hain teri flight mein abhi 6 ghante baaki hain jaane se pehle mere saath ek choti si party toh banti hain aakhir itne saalo baad jo mile hain aur wahan hot chicks bhi hongi

r-ab dosti ki hain nibhani toh padegi aur waise bhi jahan ladkiyan wahan main chal chalte hain

in the royal disc

r-dude yahan toh ek se bhadh ke ek hot chicks hain ab tu dekhta jaa kaise main inn ladkiyon pe apna jaadu chala tha hoon

y-tu nahin sudharne waala chal dance floor padh chalte hain

r-stop the music right now

*minute silence*

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GbQh8_N9LlI

(image karan wahi instead of ranbir kapoor and some random girls instead of bipasha,deepika and minisha)

r- party mein in ladkiyon ke saath bahut mazaa aaya ab mujhe airport ke liye nikalna chaiye warna filght miss ho jaayegi

y- apna khayal rakhna dude aur ghar pahuch ke phone kardena aur hain tohda toh sudhar jaana itni ladkiya theek nahin kahin tere sache pyaar ko tu kho na de inke chakkar mein

r- tu bhi na yeh pyaar jaise kuch nahin hota aaj ke zaamane mein

kya ranveer sudharega?aur kya in char ko inka sacha pyaar milega? Kya gunjan aur ranveer ki pyaar ko lekar rai badlegi? Kya sharon ka pyaar par vishaas toot jaayega? Kya riddhima pehle jaise ho paayegi? Kya charo kya pyaar aise hi rehega?

Precap- main pregnant kaise ho sakti hoon

I am not satisfied with the update I think I messed up with it while writing it down

Still comment and criticize

Edited by additive_monaya - 11 years ago