ArHi SS | Corridors | Chapter 5- The End [11/18]

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bhadraprasad

@bhadraprasad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Brilliant...Atleast they have gone to a world where they can be together without the hazzles ...Thx for the PM

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Pramiti

@maverickmartin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

I finally got around to reading this...And you say you posted your last chapter. Ugh.

No worries (I hope (!))...Am on my way to be bowled, 'cause I know this will be good!😉

Brb!!

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Read the first chapter. And I know I'm a goner. I have tears in my eyes already and I'm practically going to weep through the story if the second's like this too.

Be brave, she thought.

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Alllright. I was smiling by the end of the second. You. Are. Marvellous.

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How could you even think about writing "decent enough?" at the bottom of Chapter Three??? Coming back after the fourth...

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Erm.. I'll just come back after the last one and pour it all out.

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Right. Okay.

NO! It is NOT okay!! He dies? Of course, he was almost dying anyway, and his Khushi was presumably dead and he was wandering without sane thought or a real destination (was he?) on his last vestiges... but, seriously. All dead? Poof?

Ashfaq - Loved how he is significant to the story without having undue attention drawn. The only neutral point, the only semblance of sanity.

Khushi and Arnav's little rendeszvous - Loved them. To bits. You have brought Khushi's nuances with the least words and that, my dear, is sheer brilliance itself.

Khushi's veil - Arnav did hallucinate in the end, right? She wasn't really there. So what he thought as his beloved's face - something he had never seen - was what his mind produced? And where Arnav died - was that her house or just a building that happened to handy?

Arnav - The yearning, the despair, the thoughtless search, the selflessness, the haunting memories, the heart-rending thought of reliving her through her smell... So poignant.

Beautifully written. I would say. 'wish there was more', but I won't. Because, this here, is just how it should be. And thank you for giving your readers this wonderful story.

Edited by maverickmartin - 12 years ago

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@AJlovesArshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

What an intense update!!! 👏
Hats off to u yaar..
Loved the ending too much...
At least Arshi will be together.. :)

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amritab

@amritab

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Oof - a heart-wrenching, heart-breaking story. It is emotionally and beautifully written. You have depicted what happened to so many families during the partition. There is so much beauty in faith and such destruction when it is used to justify violence.

Amrita

p.s. sorry for not having commented before - a lot of personal and work stuff has been taking up all my time.

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@Hot.Pink.Heels

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

That was sheer beauty right there. This whole story takes the definition of true love to a whole new level.

It was absolutely heartbreaking how after all the searching he had to find the reason of his existence dead. But while that loss makes our hearts weep, Arnav finally getting to see his Khushi one last time brings tears of joy forth before he can finally join her in a better place where they can't and won't be separated.

Beautiful story! Hopefully you come back with more beautiful stories just like this.

Thanks, Pria

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ayushma

@aycma98

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#216

clenched my heart. goddamn, it was so hard to breathe while reading this FF. one of the best writings i've read so far. (will add more later! test day! :/)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

This was such a heartbreaking update.. And its the end?? 🥺 Not all love stories go on to become happily ever after... 😒

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sruthick

@sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Finally Arnav found her...Thank god...

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

very beautifully written but it was so sad:(

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aysh05

@aysh05

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

So I am forcefully away from IF for 2 days and you finish Corridors!! Okay other than my giddy excitement that he will finally find her, I for the love all that is sacred did not expect him to find her in another form💔 😭anyways... loved loved loved the entire story.

PS... did I mention I loved loved loved the entire story?? ❤️