MAANEET FF JAANE TU YA JAANE NA#8 LINK #9 PG 141 - Page 27

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Posted: 13 years ago
wiill w8 4 update di...happyndiwali😛
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Loved it dear

Continue soon

HAPPY DIWALI

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Posted: 13 years ago
hayeee another love story is starting
awesome update.
loved it very much
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great FF PiYa! I love it! Thanks again for the English Translation!








***"You know that when I hate you, it is because I love you to a point of passion that unhinges my soul." ~Julie de Lespinasse ***

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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the teaser can't wait for update awesome poem few words that leave a impact
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Posted: 13 years ago
Guys the update is ready will post it after coming back
me going to watch MADHUBALA now as soon as i come back maybe by 9.15 i will post the update 😳

be ready guys the party has just started 😉
Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support dear friends here is the next update I hope u like it. I have tried to summarize the entire story of Maaneet in the form of poems do let me if it was a good attempt or no😳

love-Piya

PART 49

Prem: Geet main dua karunga ke tumhe apni mohabbat mil jaaye'[I pray u get your love soon Geet]

He was about to keep his mobile on the table but something stopped him for few seconds and the only word he uttered was

Prem: Sanjana'

He smiled one last time and left his room

India,

Sanju: U r a gem Prem.

There was a strange glow on her face as she said these words

She kept her mobile aside and went ahead to start the preparations of the party

Prem had mailed Sanju the entire plan in detail. He had emphasized that it was very important to create a situation wherein all the hidden emotions of Maaneet be it hatred, love, guilt; anger would be forced to come out completely

He was sure the moment their emotions becomes dominant it would just be a perfect start to their not so perfect past

Sanju was impressed with Prem's plan and mailed him a reply that she would do her level best to make this plan a success

As per the plan

Sanju couried Maan a letter secretly

KM,

Nakul collected the letter from the courier boy and gave to Maan who was busy removing his frustration and helplessness by exerting perfect taichi moves

Nakul: Maan Sir aapke liye ek urgent courier aaya hai [Maan Sir there is an urgent courier for u]

Maan: Table par rakh doh [Keep it on the table]

Nakul follows Maan's instructions and walks out from there

Maan showcases his superiority and finishes his martial arts practice with utter perfection

He wipes the pearls of sweat from his perfect abs as he allowed his legs to make a move towards the table where the courier was kept

Maan: Ye courier kisne bheja hoga? [Who has sent me a courier?]

He placed the towel around his neck and gave the non-living entity the pleasure to kiss his shoulders as he ripped open the parcel to reveal the letter

Maan was surprised to get a plain letter without the name of the sender on it

He decided to read the letter

Letter starts

"In the darkness of the night a sparkling star glorifies

Capturing the dark folds in its mesmerizing eyes

It keeps on travelling miles and miles

The fragrance of this Angelic star's innocence, the touch of its sacredness redefines the beauty and divinity of many lives"

***

A PEARL WHICH HAD THE SHAPE OF "G" WAS ATTACHED TO THE FIRST PART OF THIS LETTER

Maan touched the G shaped pearl delicately as if he new the Angel and he didn't wish to harm her even in his dreams

***

"In the blissful mist of nature a selfish ball of fire magnifies

Spreading its devilish clutches it initiates a dance of destruction time to time

The smirk of its flames; the poison in its breath bestows the curse of grief and pain in the disguise of an unavoidable crime"

***

A STONE WHICH HAD THE SHAPE OF "M" WAS ATTACHED TO THE SECOND PART OF THIS LETTER

Maan lowered his eyelashes as the storm of guilt threatened to drown him completely

After few seconds Maan regained the strength to read the next part of the letter

***

"Destiny played its cards

To bind to opposite hearts

Creating a blend of perfect and unimaginable situations it brought the Angel and the Fire close part by part"

***

A heart shaped Pendant with the letter MG was kept securely on this portion of the note

Maan couldn't resist himself he kissed the joint pendant which had the initials of Geet and his name possessively as if making an unheard promise "One day I will get u back in my life oh my love"

***

"Cupid danced with joy

As the blossoming love of this unusual couple glorified

Angel accepted Fire wholeheartedly in her life

She gave him her soul and the throne of her wings to make him satisfied

For his own selfish purpose Fire demanded her sacredness'she opened her heart and allowed him to snatch it away without thinking twice

He wanted her wings'she extended her magnificence for her love as she couldn't deny

Ruthlessly the fire burned her wings giving her a pain which couldn't be justified by a simple cry"

***

A ruined shaped "G" made of melted wax was placed untidely on one end of the note and a shining symbol of "M" made of pointed glass was placed on top of it as if declaring that " U shattered her completely and lost the most precious and divine light of your dark life"

Pearl drops made way from Maan's eyes as he died millions of death with the guilt of breaking the heart of the girl who was the sole reason of his existence

He moved on to the last part of the letter

***

"Time doesn't remain the same

Fire realized his sin and sacrificed his egoistic flames in shame

He went to his Angel and begged her love to get back his claim

Her heartbeats trembled as she thought this was yet another game

Scenting herself with a perfume of fake hatred she denyed to participate in his mission to gain cheap fame"

***

The next line of the letter was blank. One half of the blank portion was burned indicating distances created between Maan and Geet

Maan allowed himself to read the last part of the letter

***

"Destiny gives fire another chance

It creates a situation with one perfect glance

Challenges can become destiny if Fire is ready to grab this chance"

***

Maaneet's marriage pic was pasted beneath this note. Maan caressed this pic with all his love.

The address and the time of the party was given at the end of the letter' This was followed by the signature of the sender

REGARDS,

DESTINY

Maan didn't bother to get detailed information about his well wisher who was hiding behind the mask of a name called "DESTINY" all he knew was he had to take a chance to get back Geet in his life'Yes he would go to this location as he knew small steps will only act as a catalyst to reduce the unnecessary distance that was created between him and his lady love'HIS GEET

Meanwhile,

Geet Mansion

It was not difficult for Sanju to convince Geet to attend the party

She told her the party she was attending was a theme party and the theme would be a game

As soon as Geet would make an entry the game would start

Geet felt this explanation a bit odd but Sanju convinced Geet to such an extent that she couldn't deny

It was late evening now and Sanju made a pretext of some emergency and forced Geet to attend the party alone

Before going she reminded Geet be ready anything can happen in the party as this is the theme

As soon as Geet left Sanju messaged Prem that the first half of their plan is successful now whatever happens would be totally in Maaneet's hand

After some time,

Geet reached the mentioned location

The place was completely dark but since Sanju had warned Geet to expect the unexpected Geet was at ease as she thought maybe this strange setup is also a part of tonight's theme

She saw the entrance and opened the door to make her presence felt

Maan had already entered the room through the entrance and like Geet he too was busy finding his way through the dark room

Both of them saw a box which had the imprint of hands on it

Geet thought maybe after placing her hand she would get to enter the main room where the party was going on and Maan thought that maybe he will get to meet Geet after placing his hand on that object

The room was dark and hence neither Maan nor Geet saw each other and a curtain was divinding the room into two halves

Both of them took steps towards the object and it was Maan who placed his hand on that phase of the hand print which was visible to him

Nothing happened but Maan decided to wait

Geet reached the object and placed her hand on the print.

The curtain moved up as soon as the print on the object got its ideal partner and within a second the curtain got replaced with handcuff (HATHKADI) and the whole room got brightened with romantic lights

As soon as their eyes got adjusted to the unexpected brightness Maaneet were surprised to see their hands locked together in the handcuff thus making htem realize they were the only 2 guests who were invited to the party

Maaneet were all alone'the room was closed'their hands were trapped together in the handcuff and now'

THE CUPID OF LOVE WAS ON ITS WAY TO MAKE CHALLENGE THEM TO FALL IN LOVE ALL OVER AGAIN'😳

PRECAP: 1

Maan: tu humsafar ho to sab hai jaise haseen

chaand se zyada hai jagmagati zameen
pyaar mein doobi si lagti hai har disha
Khwabon Khwabon jaage soye, khoye khoye,
hum hain jaise yahan
raahon raahon dhundhle dhundhle halke halke
hosh ke hain nishaan
kya karoon main bayaan
ladkhadaye zabaan...


[When you're the companion, everything is beautiful,
the earth shines more than the moon,
every direction seems lost in love,
in dreams, wake and slept, lost, we are here..
on the ways, there are some hazy, light signs of consciousness
what do I say..
my tongue seems to be stammering.. (due to intoxication)]

PRECAP 2: Their lips were now at a kissing distance what would be the outcome'A KISS OR A MISS?

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Love-Piya

Hey guys the good times of Maaneet have started and be ready the next update would be full of passion, love, emotions and a new beginning '

CONGRATULATIONS THE NEXT PART WOULD BE THE 5OTH PART OF OUR FF. Thanks a ton for being there with me in this journey 🥳

I promise u will love this Maan like you'll love the Maan of MH. The new love story of Maaneet is just about to begin'SO when do u want the next update guys?


Part 50: Page 87


Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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mindblwoing update the letter is outstanding eagerly waiting for next part and very happy that i m the first one to comment on this after a very long time

Edited by tanvi04 - 13 years ago
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Awesome update sweetu ...thxs for the pm
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mindblwoing update the letter is outstanding eagerly waiting for next part and very happy that i m the first one to comment on this after a very long time

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