SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78

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Binuja(binju)

@Anomic_loner

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#321

Hey nisha it was an awesome update... 😊

It was a bitter one yet u simply portrayed sharon's feelings so beautifully...can really understand her pain in this update and her hope of swayam not being like the other guys is all very well written..
😊

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Snowey

@Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#322

Nice update Nish..some very good usage of prose like words. The pain in Shaorn and how she battled them to make a life of her own, nicely shown. Looking forward to the next update..and to see what turn Swayam and Sharon life is going to take..

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ArYa/Ash

@Arya.100

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#323

amazing ans shocking...

awsome twist...update soon.

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Wantubak

@Wantubak

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#324

lovely update NIsha ji

poor sharon 😭😭

update soon😃

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-Shravzz-

@-Shravzz-

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#325

Awesome update nisha...
Loved it...😃

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ShrutikaSwaRon

@ShrutikaSwaRon

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#326

Hey sissy...totally an awesome update but a shocker too...u conveyed sharon's past story so well...poor girl she had to face it all that to alone...n now even swayam had hurted her...hope he comes to know about d truth n relieves her pain...u write so beautifully yaar...waiting eagerly for nxt update...continue soon.

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#327

Originally posted by: Nehal92
res

unres soon... 😳

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-.Nisha.-

@-.Nisha.-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#328

Originally posted by: an_skyfighter
wow this was shocking
i thought she ignored swayam coz she didnt like him being a playboy or wht but she has a whole different story of her own and that too this depressing
wonder whts gonna happen next

thanx anu😊