#2 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 4-11

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Misha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#261

Hb Maar khayegi...

Zyada natak mat kar...

Pehle hi fuse uda hua hein...

tujhpe bhadak jaoongi...

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Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#262

laalbatti abhi update chahiye...

@yogs aaj nahi kiya kal milega pakka

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Misha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#263

Oh hello...

Woh kinju Di ke liye tha..
Nt fr u...

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#264

Originally posted by: idiot_box
Awesome update!!i really like Smriti here!!She seems human here..She convinced Kriya to write to Rey..I really liked the SwaRon part..they are coming closer to each other!Now please update jaldi se now!!

Thank you dear! i'm glad you like her here. yes... thank you for your view 😃

@mimi- awww par ek line comment toh kar do? Im not asking for much na..

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#265

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--
hie

talking fr d 1st tym..!!
wat do u do n wer do u stay..!!

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#266

Originally posted by: alisha.a.s
awesome...
loved it...
waiting to see wht is written in the letter...
thnx for pm...

Thank you so much dear!

You will know soon 😃

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Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..

@asma- you all like the red color 😲 You know what I want 😛

s i do nknow!!!!!

My fav is blue..CM ka jo bhule hai woh wala..wo tho nahi le sakti nah!!!

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Deetha.

@Deetha.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#268

laal batti koi missing nahi lag raha?????/

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Purplevalley

@Ocean.eyes

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Posted: 13 years ago

#269

Originally posted by: Born2Dance
Oh hello...

Woh kinju Di ke liye tha..
Nt fr u...

kya mere liye tha?

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Araina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#270

Originally posted by: shaani2209
Lovely update khushi...
really loved the fact that you made Sharon happy about swayam being there for her...she blushing to the thought of he holding her and then the way swayam entered the locker room just to be there for her, caring least abt anything else...
Liked that you made smriti be understanding towards kria and she actually writing the letters was a relief...vishaka's pov in last sentence did stand out for me there...
the song choice and the way you liked it was nicely done, i really liked it...
really wish creatives ki dimag ki batti jalli hoti uss waqt...
thanks for the pm...