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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

Really like your new picture of Pallavi. Very pretty and can imagine her as Sanaya's (Kashi) sister. The other lady seemed much older. Is this girl a Malyalee actress or a veena player? What about the lady you portrayed as Devaki? Who is she? She is gorgeous. My favorite though is Nalan. You picked the right kid to portray him.

Missing Nalan in the story BTW...😛

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nam_adi

@nam_adi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#112

Arnav is a perceptive fellow...figuring out Kashi quite well! So has he tempted fate? Let's see :-))

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

He is very susceptible to all the forces of the house and surroundings. I can not even Imagine how his sleeve could get on fire and he did not even realize...there is so much explained stuff going on.

It is major progress that she is now asking him to go away because she is worried for him. Is this love or the power of the house ensnaring him?

The land of the dead reference keeps coming up...was this concept (if specific) explained before or the generic meaning applies here?

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smitar

@smitar

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

So much passion!

And such a strong bond of love linking them.

When you introduced Kashi in this FF, that moment I knew that when Kashi finally fell in love, it would be a unique, one-of-a-kind, inconvenient, fire-like, explosive phenomenon. Glad to be witnessing it.

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

im totally confused.nothing makes sense.

not tht ur writing has any problem,but i think it is bz i hv a much lesser intelligence.i hope all this wud be clear one day.

good tht kashi n arnav talked abt it openly.good tht arnav was rational n helped kashi to cme back to her rationality.also loved how he spported her wen her fears came out silently.

their last talk i didnt follow.but im used to such riddles n not understand by now.lol.

like the way story is moving.it is gearing up for something big.

the thing u said abt 'unexplained phenomenas wer really good.it gave me some hope.

n thanks for the fast update

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#116

wow...i just felt like i saw a part of d mlym film 'manichithrathazhu'...wow..

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

wow.. i m glued... they are such an enigmatic pair.. Devi.. excellent story..

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padmanarayan

@padmanarayan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

I'm totally in love with your writing style...I'm a malayalee too, and I can relate with all the descriptions about the village and the ancestral house of kashi , and the religious rituals like 'Sarpam Thullal', as I spent my early childhood in a village in Alleppey. I think you should publish this as a novel after you finish the story. I'm sure it will be loved and appreciated for the creativity and the beauty of your imagination. And I loved all the pictures that you've put up. I like the way you've weaved the story around the beautiful people, Arnav and Kashi(khushi). That made our imagination easier and more romantic. This is not just any other mills and boons kind of story. It has got a touch of classiness and talent. Congrats. Waiting for the next part...

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nj.123

@nj.123

Explorer

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

Wonderful update! I am really confused about him not getting a burnt and this whole thing is just so mysterious and I absolutely LOVE it!😊

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Jina

@Happy-go-lucky

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

"If you were a lesser man, you would not fall for me" - So she knows, and from his reaction, it looks like he has accepted the fact too😊
Nice update, and I can't help saying that these two are adorable...

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