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Posted: 13 years ago
awww... this shud happen 😛 she was coaching lav for him!!
she must ve felt terrible wen those feelings were coming up...
there s so much baggage.. so much unsaid in their relationship...
al these shud unfold... hmmm fingers crossed...
wel sheun as usual tht was gud... so serene... ppl changing in love not for d other... but just bcz of d other unknowingly... nice...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ak_maggi

awww... this shud happen 😛 she was coaching lav for him!!

she must ve felt terrible wen those feelings were coming up...
there s so much baggage.. so much unsaid in their relationship...
al these shud unfold... hmmm fingers crossed...
wel sheun as usual tht was gud... so serene... ppl changing in love not for d other... but just bcz of d other unknowingly... nice...😊

cant agree more...many things were left untold...many things were left in the dark...in shades of haze...maybe they will unfold..maybe they wont..lets see...😊
thanks...ur heart felt ❤️comments means a lot...thanks. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
LOVELY Update 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey. Love your ss. Please pm me in your next chapter
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowdt was tooo cute..😳😳ehem ehem..:D
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sheun

💔sorry dear...
pming is a task...😭as much as i like to write..the PM ing thing gives me the chill.😲
next time will keep u in the loop...thanks for ur comments...
❤️
oh just checked..u hv crossed limit for PMs...so i guess i did PM u...but u need to CLEAN ur inbox..cause my emails r bouncing ...😆...no ones fault!!!!




OKKK KOI BAAT NAHI...LEKIN KINTU PARANTU...😔 I DONT HAVE MUCH PMs...😲

NEWAY I AM NEW HERE...THESE CONFUSIONS ARE OUGHT TO BE THRE...😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAR: AFSHEEN ARSHI ON HER 20TH!!! : this PART 7 is for you dear...wish you all the best in life 😊
A PROMISE
PART 7

Khushi tucks him in and holds his face in both hands.

Smiles. And caresses him.

He rests his face on her chest. On her dupatta and hides himself. She holds her tight into deep embrace. Pats his back with on hand and sooths his hair down with another.

Arnav holds her back with both hands, soft and gentle like he is holding a very delicate yarn of silk.

KHUSHI: I LOVE YOU.

ARNAV: I LOVE YOU TOO.

Time: 4.34 in the morning''''.Arnav finally drifts to sleep in her arms.

Time: 4. 37 in the morning''''.Khushi sheds on more tear '.of love and kisses his hair and places her head on top of his.

Smiles and shuts her eyes.

( NEXT DAY MORNING)

Time: 10.48.

Let me go'now.

No

Let me go. I wills cream

No.

I am telling you for the last time, let me go. Now.

Umm. Hu'no.

Please.

Nah

Please.

No.

Please. See I am going to count to three then shout.

Lol.

What? You laughing.

Yes I am laughing.

Let me go.

No.

Please. See I am requesting with a smile. So you should let me go.

Nah

Ufff.

Ufff, what? Where is your smile?

No smile. I am going from here and you will move this from here?

This is not going to be moved

Move it.

No.

Ufff. You are extremely stubborn

Tell me something I do not already know.

Please.

Nah.

Ok, lets make a deal, you let me go and I will do whatever you tell me to do.

See? I have you here and I can do whatever I want to. Why will I let you go now and make this same situation arrive again.

Please, let me go. Anyone will come and see you here. I cant imagine what will happen then. Either they will slap me or they will finally kick me out of this house for good.

Nah.

Please. How many times should I say please?

I told you not to say please, but you wont listen. So what the point. You know very well, I do what I want and now I am not letting you go. So stand straight and close your eyes.

Close my eyes? kidding me right?

No, you know I don't joke about these things.

You are not letting me go?

No.

So what the point. Why are you so stubborn? S Jiddi?

Hmm, you repeat words.

I know.

You told me I am stubborn. Tell me something new.

You are arrogant.

Thanks

You are bad.

Thanks

You are rude.

Thanks.

You are crazy and a bit on the lunatic side. Insane actually.

Thanks, thanks and thanks again.

You are scary.

Hmm.

You are egoistic.

Yes. Umm. Thanks?

I am rebuking you, calling you name and you are thanking me? Man you have changed.

Yes woman, I have changed for you. And you should be more than happy.

I will be happy when you let me go.

I will be happy when you stop twitching and let me do what I wish to do.

Nah.

What? Why not?

Stop it.

No.

Ok tell me some nice words I will think of your request.

You are a goon.

What?

You heard me right. You do what you want. You take what you want. You make people compelled.

Hmm. Anything new?

No.

Please. Anything new. Impress me.

Hmm.

What?

Impress me. Tell me something new that will wow me and I might let you go.

Uff.

Uff twice. H aha'you crazy girl!

I am not crazy. You are crazy. All crazy.

Hmm.i am still waiting. Tell me something new.

I

I what?

I love?

Hmm. Now we are talking.

I love making.

What?WHAT?

I love making love.

Hmm. I think what is coming.

I love making love to.

Ahme ahem'wow Khushi! You are pretty good at this.

I love making love to the picture on the wall?

What?

What what? I said what I wanted to say.

The wall? Picture? You kidding me right? It is Salman khan. Please kHushi, I know you like him, but that doesn't mean that I will just tolerate you speaking like this.

Hmm. You wanted to hear something new. That's it.

Shut up Khushi!

Why? Now who is upset? Lol..

Don't smile.

I will smile whenever I want.

Don't smile.

Ok, Mr Arnav Sing Raizada! I will stop smiling. This is getting too much. Let me go. I will tell whatever you want to hear. I will do whatever you want me to do.

No.

Please.

Uff.

Please.

See? My hand hurts. Within a few minutes it will start to burn. My fingers will burn and get red and you will be responsible for that.

Nah.

What nah?

Please Arnav Ji! Let me go. Buaji will come back anytime soon, Amma is sitting outside, Di is in the washroom and jiji is just coming back with the food. Please Arnav ji, what will they think if you are standing here like this?

I am standing with something or rather someone who belongs to me. Who will care?

Please.

Nah.

Khushi, if I pull you into my arms, lock the door and slam you down on the bed and do'ahem ahem'., no one can stop me.

Shut up.

WHAT?

Please. I beg. Do not say stuff like that.

What ? I said the words ahem ahem'like the way you do? Still its too much for you?

Yes. I say it because I do not wish the actualt words.

Khushi! My dear what will you do when I actually start to

STOP IT. NOW.

Ha ha ha'.you at yourself. You are all red.

Ha ha..very funny. You laugh at my expense.

Yes I laugh at your expense. Why wont I?

Arnav ji! What do you want?

Now?

Yes now. Cause if this goes on, I might aswell, ask you to take me in your arms and lock me in the room. This is unbearable. Atleast room will be a bit more private and I won't die of shame.

Ha ha ha..ha'shame? really?

Hmm. I am shy,

What girl says out loud that she is shy? But the way you react you don't seem to be shy.

Uff! Arnav ji. I am going to shout in 1 minute. When the clock strikes 11. Iam shouting out loud. I really cannot hold on like this and my hands hurt. See it's already all red?

Is it really hurting?

Yes. Why will I lie?

You would really rather go to the room with me, than here??

Yes.

Your hand hurts?

Yes.

Hmm''''''.let me do something that will take care of it''''.

The clock strike 11.

KHUSHI shouts out loud to break free.

But at the same time'.ARNAV does something that shuts her sealed with a hitch '''''''''''..

Edited by sheun - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Whenever s0me0ne menti0ns Lavanya the thing that c0mes in my mind is h0w brilliantly the CV's handled her...They cud hav used her as a negative character when she realizes Arshi's b0nd but instead she gracefully 0pted herself 0ut...Nne 0f the many reas0ns I l0ve IPKKND...Thank y0u f0r reminding me this beautiful fact by menti0ning Lavanya :)
And yes, beautiful c0nfessi0n...Y0u are good with w0rds :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow lovely conversation n update
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...naughty naughty update😉👏😊i really wish ur updates get more regular..really miss u n them too😔u forgot to pm me sweetie😭

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