OS: You won Arnavji..(Based n today's epi)Pt2Updtd

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yusam

@yusam

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#81

OMG.. THTS WA ITS ALL ENDING TO... HIS APPROACH TOWARDS HER IS ALWAYS AN ABOMINABLE STEP N THE WORST PART IS HE NEVER REALISES IT.. THIS ONE WAS BEAUTIFUL N TRULY HEART WRENCHIN AT THE END..

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jazz

@jazmeen

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#82

OMG

that was jus awosommmeee

one of the best os i hav eva read

man jus simply mind blowing speiclaly second part

jus wowww

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inluvwivARHI

@inluvwivARHI

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#83

Wow!!!
im speechless
This was amazin...soo intense nd emotional...plz plz continu dis id love to know how he gets bak da real khushi
This is one of da best os i hav eva red
Thanx foh da pm nd plz continu

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Iruni Sulakkana Jayasingha

@-Iruni-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#84

awww this is sooo sad ..i almost cried with how u expressed khushi's feelings

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Aliya_hzsn

@Aliya_hzsn

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#85

This was such a Sad OS...
Beautifully written...Khushi's pain depicted Beautifully!!!

Found it to be sad when khushi considered herself being sold to arnavji..And the end literally made me cry!!!!

This was Amazing!!

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daljeet

@daljeet

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#86

the last line was the most perfect.i really wish icud see tht power of guilt in arnav in the show than the ASRkinda victory smile on his face.i dont like his smile anymore.

but kushi wud nvr be like this.she cant be like this.she must fight.i cant bear to see kushi like this.

nice story frnd.continue if possible.show us how arnav will repent wich i hv no hope the CVs will show

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Cetronia

@Cetronia

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Sunara, that was sooo touching...chap 2 was just too good...you write soo beautifully filled with emotion...God bless..

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boracutters

@boracutters

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#88

This was realy good! Can u please pm me when u update

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velangini

@velangini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#89

i had tears in my eyes while reading this

poor khushi

how much can she tolerate from her so called loving husband

arnav is breaking khushi by his actions

loved it

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taniks

@taniks

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#90

Omg the first part made me cry but the 2nd part broke me , I felt every emotion that she was experiencing , well done it is indeed a very talented writer who can get her readers so involved emotionally . This os was one the best I have read so far , ur use of vocabulary was brilliant to bring out the essence of the story . A masterpiece in my opinion ,this piece really touched me ,I read a lot of novels and os ,ss,ff very few can reach out and pierce my heart like this one did. Thank u for this incredible os

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