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absolutely brilliant...the expressions, anger, emotions written perfectly.

I could easily visualise the whole thing as you have written so well

I felt sad for arnav...both to be precise but more to him...

thx

sri.

Wow that was simply such an amazing update! im glad you took your time to write this because it seems as though you had planned it and went over it and had time to think about how to write it and stucture it etc.. it's good because it just made this chapter a whole more interesting and good! i absolutely loved it, one of my favourite chapters yet! Cant wait to see what happens next!

oh my god that was just awesome

Ah...wonderful update Rachel...
I am glad the truth is out...
Poor Arnav and Khushi...though i feel more bad for Arnav...
Khushi he needs you...he is a fool to hide the truth but he loves you...
Awww...Arnav...i wish someone was there to support him...
I hope Khushi doesnt do something that harms Arnav like Arnav thought...
Please update the next chapter..not able to click like only...
Remember i always stalk your ff...
Take care...

I feel 4r arnav...wat is his fault if he is a criminal... I hope someday they will end up together

dat was an awesome update..
loved it.. bt felt bad for arnav..
khushi left him..no.. wats gonna happen now..
eagerly waiting for d next part..
continue soon plz..

Well just caught upwith the update. Wow totally speechless. You very portrayed the confrontation scene between arnav and khushi very well. This was needed and i was happy to read that arnav atlast revealed all his secrets to khushi. Just wish he would have said it earlier. Well i exactly don't know that for whom i will feel more sorry for i just love both of them and i just can't see both of them like this. I just hope khushi realises that just like the locket failed to come off her life would fail to revolve without arnav and that she and arnav are destined to be together.
Well i have certain doubts.
I fell khalid bhai has a reason to send arnav to guwahati. Why do i feel he is not what he seems to be. Well may be i am thinking too much. Secondly i feel that this mission will affect arnav massively and khushi will blame herself for it. Thirdly i feel aman will have to sacrifice something big for his family. Fouthly where is shyam?? Well i am now totally confused.
O you are forguven for giving a long update and givin such a wonderful mindblowing chapter

Well just caught upwith the update. Wow totally speechless. You very portrayed the confrontation scene between arnav and khushi very well. This was needed and i was happy to read that arnav atlast revealed all his secrets to khushi. Just wish he would have said it earlier. Well i exactly don't know that for whom i will feel more sorry for i just love both of them and i just can't see both of them like this. I just hope khushi realises that just like the locket failed to come off her life would fail to revolve without arnav and that she and arnav are destined to be together.
Well i have certain doubts.
I fell khalid bhai has a reason to send arnav to guwahati. Why do i feel he is not what he seems to be. Well may be i am thinking too much. Secondly i feel that this mission will affect arnav massively and khushi will blame herself for it. Thirdly i feel aman will have to sacrifice something big for his family. Fouthly where is shyam?? Well i am now totally confused.
O you are forgiven for giving a long update and givin such a wonderful mindblowing chapter

very very nice yaar i cried a lot[silent tears]dont never ever seperate arshi😭

awesome update.justified chapter so khushi is shattered completely. i really felt sorry for arnav.