Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai - Kriyaansh SS - Part 3 Updated

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: luvcookie
update ?????????????????????????????

sorry...i'll update ASAP

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abhiyakreya
sirani u there i knew pls atleast tell that when we will get an update!!!!!

sorry...i wasn't there last night...i leave my account logged in...so sorry for not updating this long...i was actually writing it...will update it ASAP

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: asmaju
k we'll wait.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hi everyone...thank you all so much for your appreciation...it really motivates me...im so overwhelmed with the number of likes i got...i cant thank you all enough...thank you all so much...

this was actually going to be the last part of this SS but since it got too long and i got tired of writing...i thought of extending it for 1 or two more part...please ignore any typos...anyways here is the part enjoy!!!

Kaisa Yeh Pyar Hai – Part 2

They all didn't have a clue of what was going on but that did not matter at the time…they knew that their friend need their help and they would help him in whichever way they can…
Outside of VP sir's office
Shivam: guys mujhe abhi jaana hoga…emergency hai…tum sab jab chaho aa sakte ho i'll come to receive you all…
Swayam: shivam main rey aur sharon bhi tumhare saath chaltein hai…vahan ar zaroorat pari to hum bhi help kar saktein hai…
Shivam thought for a while and then agreed…
Rey looked at Vicky as if instructing him on something…
Vicky: don't worry dude…you all go we'll bring you luggage…
They just nodded and proceeded towards the exit…when… Rey's cell rings…
Rey: hi sweetheart kaisi ho…
Caller: main to theek hoon…par lagta hai ki tum mujhe bhool gaye ho
Rey: aisa kabhi ho sakta hai main tumhe bhool jaaoun.
Caller: accha to phir itne saalon se mujhe milne kyun nahin aaye…
Rey: oh…im so sorry sweetheart…muje abhi chutian mili…doston ke saath ek trip pe jaana hai…jaise hi free hota hoon main jaroor aaoo ga…aur iss baar jitni der ke lie tum kaho utni der ke lia…chaho to puri zindagi vaha rakh lena…
Caller: badmash kahin ka…har baar mna hi leta hai mujhe…chalo dektein hai kitni der seh sakta hai mujhe…
Rey: aisa mat kaho sweetheart tumhare paas ake mujhe bohut accha lagta hai…
Caller: theek hai beta…par iss bar tum Dehradun ke bajaye Shimla aana…
Rey: Shimla??!!
Caller: haan vo kissi ko meri yahan par jaroorat thi to…tum aao ge to aur help ho jaaye gi…
Rey: theek hai daadi main aata hoon…
Rey to himself ( aisa kya hai simla mein jo mujhe vahan par kheech raha hai…jobhi hai…kuch to khaas hai…)
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They Reach Shimla…and go outside of the airport when they notice that it's unusually cold. It was summer time but it was snowing, as if symbolizing someone's life…but who's??
Rey was involved in his deep thoughts about weather's connection to his life…oblivious of the world around him…when Shivam's voice brought him out of his terrace of thoughts.
Shivam: guys main call karke phoochta hoon ki bhai phoncha ke nahin…
Hello…haan bhai ap kaha ho…hum pohunch gaye hai…aap kab tak aao ge…
Dhruv: main vahan do minutes mei pohunch jaaoo ga tum sab main gate pe aajao…
Shivam: theek hai bhai…
With that he cut the call
Shivam: bhi na kaha ki vo yaha do minutes me phunch jaayen ge…hume main gate tak jana hoga…
They all nodded looking at shivam and moved towards the main gate…when they reached there, Dhruv was already waiting for them…he came out hugged shivam, shook hand with the rest of the gang and helped them in arranging their little belongings in the trunk…they all took their seats in his car and Dhruv started to move out of the airport…
Dhruv: Shivs hume seedhe hospital jaana hoga…she needs you…I hope you all don't mind, he said looking at Rey, Swayam, and Sharon.
No not at all…they assured him…
They reached the hospital…and were now going down a hallway when a girl came running towards them and hugged shivam with all her might…
The gang guessed her to be sunju…
Sanju: shivs…please save her…please do something…
She had tears running down her eyes now and looked very weak…
Shivam: hey…relax…kuch nahin hoga usse…hum hai na…he consoled her while moving towards the patient's room…
For some reason…Rey felt very uneasy when they entered the hospital and with each step they took towards the room this uneasiness of him increased to no limits… he couldn't figure out the reason behind his behavior…he kept on moving towards the room…he was feeling as if someone has crushed his heart with a stone…this was even worse than what he felt when kria betrayed him…what is happening to me…why are all those emotions coming back to me…that too today...why? All of her memories we flooding his mind like a slide show and he knew no way to stop it all. These thoughts occupied his mind when they reached the room…
They all stood outside the room….waiting for the doctor to come out and give them the report…after what seemed like eternity to them all…the Doctor finally came out with a concerned expression…
Sanju: what happened doc… is she ok…will she recover…why is she not reacting…
Doc: I'm sorry sanju but we can't figure out why she is not reacting to anything…the wound on her head is minor but because she is not responding to any of our medicines I'm afraid that it may not heal…and if that happens…it can prove to life threatening in her situation…
Shivam: but doc why is she not responding to anything now…she was recovering earlier right…then what happened all of a sudden…
Doc: Shivs, I'm sorry to tell you this but misinterpreted her reports…when we thought that she was recovering…it was just body's initial reaction towards the medicines given to her…
Sanju: Doc, will she ever became the old person she was once…why is she not responding to anything??
Doc: see sanju, as I told you earlier…it's not like she has a memory loss…her brain has blocked certain parts of her parts, because of which she does not recognize some of the people around her…but her heart knows them…so whenever she is close to her loved ones she feels at ease…but one thing that shocks us is that she doesn't let her mom come close to her…it's as if she doesn't want to be in her presence…as if she is afraid of her…
We think that she has Post Traumatic Stress Disorder (PTSD)…this is something when a person goes through something in their lives that they can't handle…because of which either they would kill themselves or like in her case their personalities would change… it's just that she is on the dramatic end of it…we have to put her in a situation where she can be her old self…
Earlier we thought that dance could do that for her…because she lived for dance but to our utter disappointment she didn't even react to it…while she was watching people dancing she has some sort of deep longing in them…we couldn't figure out what it was…but I think that her mom knows what it is…sanju…please do me a favor…please ask her mom what it is…and convince her to bring it back to her life…that's the only way I think that we can safe…otherwise…all I can say is she is sinking…and we will lose her sooner than predicted.
Shivam: no Doc, don't say that…we'll do whatever it takes to bring her back…
Doc: ok shivs…but do what you have to fast…as we have very little time left…for now you can take home after about an hour…she's under observation right now
The doc left and sanju looked at shivam and dhruv helplessly…knowing it would be near impossible to convince her best friend's mom…
Dhruv: Don't worry…we'll do something…
The gang was still confused about what was going on…but they knew it was serious…they could see their agony filled eyes and the horror struck faces.
They all turned around to take their seats near the room when they noticed an elderly lady speeding towards them…
Rey was shocked to see his daadi there…what shocked him even more was that she was not coming towards him rather she was moving closer towards where shivam, sanju and dhruv stood…
She stopped right in front of them…kaisi hai meri K? she asked dhruv…he just lowered his gaze and tears started to roll down from his eyes.
Dhruv: aunty to manana hoga daadi…k hume chodke ke jaa rahi hai…she is sinking…
Daadi: kuch nahin hoga usse…vo to meri strong bachi hai…
Dhruv: daaadi par aunty….
Daadi: uski chinta tu mat kar…main bhi dekhti hun kaise nahin manne gi vo…agar vo K ki maa to main bhi uski maa hoon…dekhti hoon kabtak dek paati apni beti ko iss halat me
Rey: daadi aap yahan??!!!
That is when she noticed him…Daadi: rey beta, tum in sabko jaante ho…
Rey: haan vo shivam mera friend hai…
Daadi: oh…chalo accha hai ki ab tum bhi yahan ho…hamari help ho jayegi…
Rey: Par daad aap in sab ko kaise jaanti ho…
Daadi: lambi story hai beta…kabhi fursat mein bataoun gi…iss waqt mujhe kissi ki akal thikane lagani hai…
Rey: ji??
Daddi: kuch nahin beta bus tu dekhta ja…dhruv tu jaa usse leke aa…bahar khadi hogi car ke paas…aur shivs tu K ko leke aa…
Shivs: par daadi vo to under observation hai abhi…
Daadi: koi baat nahin…maine Doc se baat karli hai…aur aaj mujhe yeh sab saaf karna hi hoga…
Shivam: ji daadi…and he went into the room to get her…
The gang was now facing daadi, away from the hospital's main entrance and towards K's room… Dhruv bring aunty along saying daadi wants to talk to her…when they enter she sees several people standing with daadi but couldn't see their faces…she just stood little further away from them when she noticed shivam coming out of the room…
Everyone went still when they noticed shivam coming out of the room…he was holding someone's arm securely as if supporting them in walking…that is when they saw her face…they all went numb…Rey felt like he was struck by lightning…he couldn't say a single word, he just stood still in his place…he slowly took in her form…she didn't look like herself…she had lost weight…her skin had become pale…she had dark circles under her eyes…had bandages around her writings and forehead…and what shattered his heart the most was that she lost her glow…the twinkle in her eyes was nowhere to be seen…
She didn't look around to see anyone…she was just following shivam to wherever he was moving…as shivam was bringing her closer to daadi her arm brushed with Rey's…she felt jolt of electricity run down her spine…she looked to see him…that is when their eyes met…she didn't recognize him but still she couldn't pull away…she felt flow of emotions running through her body…
Shivam moved forward but felt a tug on his arm…he noticed that she hadn't moved…he followed her gaze to see what she was staring at…and noticed her staring at Rey.
Sanju: did you see what I saw
Dhruv: She didn't flinch away…that's…
Shivam: why didn't I think of this earlier….
Daadi: what are you talking about shivs
Shivam: Rey…
That's when kria noticed her mom…this broke her eye lock and she quickly turned and hugged shivam
Shivam: hey K kya hua…main yaahin hoon…please don't be scared…we all are here…daadi dekho na isse…
Daadi: Kria…beta…kya hua..mere paas aao…
Kria left shivam and hugged daadi as strongly as she could and pointed towards where her mom was standing…
They all looked towards where she was pointing…that is when they noticed smiti standing there in a corner with tear filled eyes…
Daadi pulled kria away from herself and made her face her mom…K…look at her beta…she is your mom…why are you scared of her….
Kria: no…daadi…please…no…
She said in a weak voice which was barely audible to anyone, but they all heard it as there was pin drop silence there. With that she hugged her again.
Daadi: dekh liya yehi chahti thi na tum…sirf is liye ki vo bhi uss sabse na guzre jise se tum guzri ho…tumne usse uski hasti kehlti zindgi ko cheen liya…
Smriti: main to bas isse uss dard se nahin guzarta hua dekhna chati thi…
Daadi:sahi kaha tumne…tumne usse uss dard se to bca liya par usse bhi bhatar dard de diya…kya yehi chahti thi tum…
Smriti: main to bas usse khush…
Daadi: khush…dekh rahi ho kitni kush hai tumhari beti…
Smrita: maa main nahin chahi thi ki yeh bhi mujhe chodke chali jaaye jis tara…
Daadi:to kya aaj yeh tumhare paas... tumhare aankon ke saamne hote hua bhi tumse kkitni dur hai…kya yeh chahti thi tum..
Smriti: par dance…
Daadi: tum abhi bhi nahin samji na…dance ne jo tumhare saath kiya zaroori nahi hai ko K ke saath bhi vaisa hi ho…aur vo ladka…tumhare paas kya proof hai ki vo isske liye theek nahin hai…shayad ussi ki vajah se yeh theek ho jaaye…par tum to kissi suno ji nahin na…theek hai… mat mano hamarai baat jis din chaligayi nay eh tumhe cho kar uss din sochna iss bare main
Rey, Swayam and Sharon were shocked to hear this…they had no clue about what was going on but one thing that they were sure about was that kria was innocent and Rey's heart cried after knowing that…he was punishing himself mentally…he wanted to kill himself for not trusting his baatcutter…for not seeing the true love for him in her eyes…that is when realization struck him…he didn't see her eyes the last time he saw her…she wasn't looking into his eyes…how could he be so stupid to not notice that for two long years…and here she was suffering because of him…he was brought out of this thoughts by smriti's voice.
Smriti: daadi please aisa mat kahiye…maine job hi kiya is ski vhalayi ke liye liya…
Daadi: dikh raha hai kitna bhala hua hai issa…tumhe shayad pata bhi nahin ho ki Kria abb dance karne ke liye bhi react karna chod diya hai…aur jahan tak mera experience hai mujhe lagta hai ki isska dance bhi uss ladke ke saath juda hai…isse vapas aane ka ek hi tarika hai beta...please…save her
Smriti: par maa agar vo ladka galat hua to…ussne meri beta dil tod diya to…
(PS: daadi doesn't know its Rey who kria loves and smriti still hasn't noticed Rey, Swayam and Sharon)
Daadi: jo haalat isski aaj hai…usse to buri nahi ho sakti…aur tere decision ka natija dekh chuki hai na…beta dusro pe trust karna seekh…beta i'm sure ki kria ki choice galat nahin ho sakti…vo kisi galat insaan ko kabhi apne paas nahin aane de sakti…
Dhruv: haan aunty main aur sanju K ko bachpan se jaante hai aur aaj tak ussne kisi bhi ladke to apne paas nahin aane diya…vo koi galat decision nahin le sakti…
Shivam: aur aunty jahan tak K ki choice ki baat hai vo to har maine mein sahi hai…kyunki ki jis ladke ko usne pasad kia hai aap uski family ko bohut acche se jaanti hai…
Smriti: matlab??

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To Be Continued...

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Amazing Update sirani.

It was superb one.

So Rey's dadai nd Kria's mom are frnds.

And Kria is so week that she has lost herself.

Wonderful update.plz update next part soon.

cant wait to read more.

want to see smritti's reaction after she comes to knpow abt Rey.

Ab Rey ko kaun samalega.

Thanks for pm.

Update soon.

Edited by asmaju - 13 years ago

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Konpal Gupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Awsm update!

Kriya ki ye kya haalat kar di tumne! 😭 not fair

Anyways! Awsm update! than for pm and update soon 😃

Edited by abhiyakreya - 13 years ago

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Shweta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

i was literally crying on kria's condition...a bubbly girl turned into an emotionally drained lady...i was like wanting to question her mom for this...kria and rey's small LLHH...it was intense and passionate...loved it to the core...i wish kria regains her trueself and they become kriyansh soon...marvelous update/...