Shaadi Ka Ladoo ' Kriyansh OS ' - Page 19

Originally posted by: hARSHA_Neeti

hey guys dat was a damn hawt & romantic update..

Lovd kria in blak dress wid dat song..

Ahh rey ki kya halat hui hogii, kria ko itne stunnig luk me dekh kar...

u beautifully reprsntd d love life of busy husband & wife.. & last finally dey got tym 4 each othr..

dier romance was rili incredible...

Lovd d OS. it was beautiful...

do write more such creations..

Originally posted by: Asha_ArSha

Lovely ending (Di, n Nimmi, sorry, no time for a long comment, EXAMS)😳

Originally posted by: 21Neha21

amazing update...

loved it a lot...

i really liked d way kria made it up for rey...

it was d best way for dere reunion...

both of u did a fantastic job...👏

Originally posted by: crazysky

this was so awesome dears
loved it sky n dazzling_smile by reading it my smile again dazzled
kudos to both of u...
n 👏👏
do write more ss
wud love to read that...
love u both

Originally posted by: asmaju

Sorry yaar pm's have not been sent yet.

She'll send it after she is back.

SHe is busy now.

She posted and vanished to do her personal works.

Originally posted by: crazysky

this was so awesome dears
loved it sky n dazzling_smile by reading it my smile again dazzled
kudos to both of u...
n 👏👏
do write more ss
wud love to read that...
love u both

Originally posted by: Dazzling_Smile

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Rey looked here and there to find some food and at last he find a small ice cream near by..

he held her hand and dragged her towards it..

R: emmm so which flavor do u like??

chocolate or pineapple??

K: emmm wo.. hey wait a min.. ye apne us food fight me bhi to pocha tha..

R: acha really?? mujeh tho kuch nhi yaad..

he pretend to 4got it..

K: hawww !! how dare u forgot it??

she pretends to be angry.

R:Arey yaar yeh to gussa ho gayi hai.

Dekho sorry baba i was jus kiddin. tumhe sata raha tha.

Rey to ice-cream vendor: bhaiya ek chocolate icecream double scope dena.

k:Still pretends to be angey.

Rey gets the icecream and Gives it to her.She doesnt take it.

Rey ke dimag mai ek idea aya.

He took the icecream in his hand and Kept it near her lips.She was shocked by wat he had jus did.

She reacted instantily and opened her mouth to have the icecream.

Rey smiled at this gestural.It was when Kria realised dat she had given up.But she had a sweet smile on his face.

Rey was feeding her with care.

K:Rey aap nahi khaouge?

R:Nahi tum kha lo.mujhe bhuk nahi lagi hai aur vaise bhi tum ne meri vajah se kal se kuch nahi khaya(His was sad as he said the last words)

K:Aise koi baat bahi hai rey.

Ab tho maine kha liya nah so now smile apka chera haste huai hi acha lagtha hai.

Rey smiled and hugged her back.

After completing the icrecream which was melted by now both walked toward the car and started the drive again.

Rey drived the car to a place and stopped it..

There was a big well manufactured house..

it was like a farm house ..

K: rey ye hum kahan a gaye hen??

R: ummm ye mera farm house he..

K what??? hum to kisi business trip pe ja rhe the to yahan apke farm house me kyun aye hen??

R: umm kriya wo actually.. emm..

K: rey stop blabbering ! sach batao..

R: wo kriya actually mene tumse jhoot bola tha... hum kisi business trip pe nhi ja rhe the..

K: WHAT?? rey apne mujhse jhoot kyun bola??

R: kyun k agar batata to tum ati hi nhi..

K: han me nhi ati ! kyun k ghar me itna kaam he.. pata nhi mom and dad apna khayal rakh rhe honge ya nhi..

R; JUST STOP IT KRIYA !! i had enough !!

wo koye bache nhi hen .. i know tumhen unki fikar he.. mujhe bhi he but i had enough...

K: apka matlab kya he rey ?? what u had enough??

R: Kriya cant u understand me ???

K: is me understand ki bata kahan se a gayi rey ??

R: arghhh !!! kriya kitne months ho gae hen hamari shaadi ko?? tumne aik bar bhi mere bare me socha.. mera bhi dil karta he me tumse baat karun.. tumhare sath time spend karun... but tumhen kya he ... what ever..

he said while opening the door of the car and then kicked it hardly...

K: rey wo..

but before she could complete her sentence he was not there..

he rushed into the farm house.. he was angry on her again..

for not listening to him.. for not understanding his problems...

he had it enough really !! How much will he ignore these things... she didnt even talk properly these months... his anger has no bounds... was she HIS ?? huh not really..

he slams the door hard and jumps on bed and hugs a pillow and closes his eyes not wanting to do anything or to shout at kriya..

Kria:walked inside the house..It was a magnificent one.

Rey lied on the bed hugged the pillow still and was crying very much.He wanted to spend some cute moments with her HIS wife but she didnt even understand that he needed her.He was also sad that He didnt value much in her life like before.

She entered in and was amazed by the arrangements he has done there.He had decorated the whole place with all her favorites.

The way she wanted it to be.She was feeling sad now that she didnt give him enough time and he longed for her so much.

Kria:* self-talk*Kitne din se yeh mera intazar kar rahe hai aur mai hu ki inhe apna time hi nahi de saki.

She slowly moved forward and searched for him but could now find him anywhere.

She called his name many times but he didnt answer.

Actually he could not hear her call as he was crying badly and remembering their sweet moments during college.

She moved towards a room and found it locked.

She knocked it but he didnt open the door.

She did it for many moments but failed to open.

Finally she said Rey mujhe pata hai ki aap yahi hu plz ek bar darwaza khol dijiyeh.Mujhe apse baat karni hai. Rey came and opened the door.

She walked in.Both sat on the couch.Rey didn't face her.So she didnt know that he had cried.He moved in washroom got freshened up and came out.

He washed his face.Now none could say that he had cried for so long.

He didnt want Kria to feel sad after seeing him cry.

Once he came out of the washroom he told Kria Sorry maine tumhe force kiya but abhi bhi late nahi huai hai ham yaha par lunch karke fir ghar chale jayenge.

Kria was shocked when she heard what he said.

She asked Rey meri bat suno I didnt mean to hurt u.

R:U didnt hurt me Kria now I want us to back home soon .He said it very calmy.

Kria now understood that he was hurt so much and she decided to convince him but give some time to him now.

k: mai jake khana banathi hu.

R:Dear uski jaruth nahi hai its already done.Actually its was planned ki hum dono time spend kare aur tum kam nah karo.

to now ham lunch mil jayega in an hour.

.

K:Rey mujhe aap se kuch baat karni hai.

R:Haa kaho.

K she was bit hesitent how to say after a long silence she said mujhe yaha kuch din spend karna hai kya aap office se chutti le sakthe hai.

R:First could nt believe in his ears.

He just kept himself calm ansd asked are u sure Kria.

K:Didnt see him,.She lowered her lashes and just nodded her head and hugged him..

Rey cell beeped he got a call from office .

He just told he wil be off for a week and not to disturb him and to post pond all the meetings.

She was still in his embrace.

he quickly broke the hug and walks towards the hall..

R: come and eat..

he said calmly.. not wanting to let out his frustration..

K: i want u to feed me..

she said cutely

rey was surprised .. it was like a shock for him..

but he didnt react infront of her.. he knows that he was angry ..

she quickly made him sit on the couch near by and herself sits on his lap..

K: hmm so naraz ho??

she said while moving fingers in his hair..

R: do i have the right to do that??

he said calmly and tried to get her off him but failed..

K: what?? u have all the right on me??

R: i thought i never have anyone of them...

K: arrey gussa kyun ho?? ops i m sorry i mean gussa chor do na ... plzzz

she said pleading him..

R: kriya plz get off me.. i m hungry and tumhen bhi to bhuk lag rhi he..

K: no mujhe bhuk nhi lag rhi he.. plzzz thora sabar kar lo na..

R: kyun?? kya karna he tumhe??

K: emmm

she make him lay on the couch and gets on him..

K: hmmm so ap kuch poch rhe the...

R: em me?? ummm woo me

K: han ap

she was moving her index finger on his face from his forehead to eyes and then nose and

stopped at lips.. she was coming closer every second..

K: hmm so u were saying something na??

k something like get off me..

R: emmm wo kriya.. haaan mene emmm kaha tha.. buu

he couldn't complete his sentence by a sudden kiss on his cheek..

he just show her his fake anger and pushes her lightly down on the floor and goes towards the glass door of the nearby..

5 mins later he looked here and there for her as she disappeared from there ..

then he heard a song coming from the deck very loud...

he turned at saw his baatcutter in emm emm a black saree emm emm what should i call it?? hawt

Yeh.. raat ruk jaye
Baat tham jaye..

Teri bahoon mein

she came forward towards him and caught his collar tight..

Khwaishein jagi hain
Pyase pyase labon pe
Sii..

she moved her finger from his hand to his shoulder..

she placed her finger on his lips

Khud ko jala doon
Teri aahon mein

she goes to his back and places her arms around him

Aagosh mein..
Mere aaj samah jaa..

Jaane kya hona hai kal

she moves away from there and then caught his hand tight and pulled him against her..

he was standing there dumbstruck at her every move.. emmm is she that kriya or duplicate's one??

Aa zara
Kareeb se

she places his hands around her waist and her hands around his neck and start slow dancing..

jo pal mile
Naseeb se

continuing her slow dance she moved closer and closer...

Aa ja zara
Kareeb se jo pal mile
Naseeb se jile

she moved closer that there was just a mm distance for their lips to meet but his cell beeped at the moment..

she rushed to the deck .. turned it off and moved towards him..

He picked up his phone and thanked that the person called as She was driving him crazy.He was not able to control his feelings.

But to his luck or say bad luck it was the call from Airtel(Guys just a guess,I dont know woh kya network use kartha hai)

Now he had a plan to tease her.

He keeps his phone on.

he speaks ha mom mai thik hu app kaise ho.

Acha mom batayie nah kya hua?

U r putting me in tension.

k mom but if anythings happens plz inform me.

Kria just heard the last lines.

She came to him asking Kya hua.

He made a very sad face and turned towards her and said da ki tayabth thodi kharab hai.

Kria went into hyper mode.

So he just smiles at her and asked ab ghar chale kya.

She saw the grin in his face so she snatched the mobile from him and checked the call list.

He was shocked and she was bit angry at him for lying.She was abt to turn back and go when Rey pulled her in a hug.He asked ab kya hua kuch der pehela bahut ache mood mai thi.

She just smiled at the way he caressed her and he asked ab bhuk nahi lagi hai mujhe bahut lag rahi hai.

She said K tho mai aap ko apne hato se khilao.

He said ab tho bhuk aur bhi jayade lagegi.

She started feeding him food and He was enjoying it.

He too fed her.

Both had their dinner and sat down on the couch in each others embrace.

R:Maine yeh sab kitne dino se miss kiya pata hai?

K:Sorry Rey mai apko pehele jayada time nahi de payi thi.Really sorry.

R:its K baatcutter I can understand.

K: Aap mujhe bahut miss kiya tha nah.

R: haan par ab tho tum ho nah mera paas.

K:I promise Rey mai ab aap ko apna time jarur dungi.Mere liye aap hi sab kuch ho.

Mujhe pata nahi tha ki aap mujhe miss kar rahe the.

R:Its k Dear.Acha ab jao tayar ho jao I'll take you to some place.Its a suprise.

K:Rey bahar kyu this place is so beautiful ham yahi rahethe hai.

R:Bahar nahi yahi par par tumhe tayar hona hoga.

K:Kyu mai ab achi nahi lag rahi hun kya? pouting.

R:Laughs at this Bc u r always beautiful.Bas baat yeh hai kiI want that moment to be even special isiliye .

KRia replied K and went to the room to change.

She came down all dressed and rey was stunned.

He went near her and said u r looking stunning.Aaj tho tumpe phir se pyar ho jayega.

She kept her lashes low and blushed hard.

Rey Smiled seeing her face turn red and moved close to her and said Dear I'm ur husband agar mai nahi kahunga tho aur kaun kahega.She smiled at this even more.

He forwarded his hand.She holded it delicately and they moved towards the back door.

There was a wonderful garden which had wonderful flowers and the scent was filled all around.

She could feel the beauty of the place more as cold breeze passed through them.

She held Rey's arm tightly as a sign of thanking him for this wonderful surprise.

They moved into the gazebo of the garden and sat there enjoying the moment.

Rey knelt down and asked her for a dance they danced on a slow number beautifully.

This moment was very special to both of them. S its true that they both have shared their date before but this was something different.

They were married now and this was the special moment they spent after marriage.

they were no more bounded into any restrictions.They were made for each other and for ever the others.

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