#1 [AR+D3] Sajda (FF) Chapters 1-4 - Page 62

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

okay am the first one to comment... matlab a writing comment...



i edited my post...

and sorry didn't read the pm.. maine directy chapter pe tapak gayi thi.,...



hope u like the comment...

Originally posted by: pkriyaansh

aah after ages khushi u updated maa kasam kya update tha maza aa gaya padke😉

Originally posted by: surbhi_d3

Amazing part Khushi..!

I really loved it, especially the fight at the end.

Kriya handled it so efficiently, using her training and she kicked all the goons out! Good job and even saved the guys.

Rey's worry at seeing her hurt definitely made Kriya to think over. She felt something for him.

Karan and Shilpa were nice to read. Would really want to know what happened between them.

Shilpa is Kriya's dance teacher. That's awesome!

Eagerly waiting for the next part

update asap!

ps- can you help me trace out the reply of my comment? I check about last 15 pages, but couldn't find it. I commented on page 56, do tell me where you replied.

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

Me is super happy...

i am just in love with this update u know... Aww thanks!! Glad you liked it re.

karan rajvir portion was good... shilpa coming okay... so they have a past.. lets see finally karen lands with who.. so she will be partner with them.. awesome.. Yes, she'll be his partner.

but i do have doubts abt karan'rajveer ( kinds of reminds me of abhimanyu rajvir relation ) throw some light on them but not much as mujhe mera KR chahiye... 😃 Abhimanyu-Rajveer from LRL? And whether you want it or not, they'll be in light for some time... It's not about just KR you know...

okay coming to KR...

i just lovd them... adored them... and don't know what... Thanks!!

i always wanted such a fight sequence.. u know kriya taking charge... wud like to see more u know kriya fully in form and dhishum dhishum... plzzz... ... ROFL chinta mat kar.. this was just the first fight.. during missions, there'll be plenty plenty more!!!

loved the flirty ways going a flop... LOL glad to know!!

awesome idea...

kria ka back answer was so good... loved it... I just had to put that comment in 🤣

dil mein kuch kuch hota hai... haaye... aise hi hamesha hote rehna chahiye... Hmm wait and see (read) 😉

NS sacchi i loved this chaprter u know A LOT...

pata nhi kitni baar padh liya hai maine isse... Sachi? I'm so so happy to hear this!! 🤗

kriya ka remark abt the goon.. so lovely.. i like this everytime...

uknow ekdum meri l;iking wala ff banaya hai tune iss baar... Haha thanks... Chalo, at least there's someone who really likes this FF XD


issliye tere liya ekdum bada wala hug.. and a geeli wali badi wali... Same from me 🤗 <3

ab i want to ask... what wud be the equation of kriyansh when the mission gets over... and rey finds out she was to protect him jabki u know it is sort of moral obligation na ki guy protects the gal and not vice-versa... he wud surely feel a guilt ya a feeling i don't know how to descrivbe... I understand what you want to ask but I cannot tell you... That is the whole concept and where the story revolves around... fight between... Mai chup.. Won't tell. Just read and read and you'll understand sooner or later...

the cranial nerve trick my fav trick.. but tujhe uska explanation kaise pata????? mujhe nhi pata tha yaar.. thanks batane ke liye.. did u try opne??? but whenever i imagine a fight sequence in which kriya is fighting effortless this is the trick i always go for... Haha it's just to cool na?? Bas, I knew... Some of it from science class and the rest, I researched in a book... If it's something like this, I like doing research on 😳 try opne? Matlab..? Haha yes..

rey already turning possessive and jealous and everything... i am seriously LOVING it... He is.. aage aage dekho hota kya hai 😉

jo bhi ho update this regularly... No.. Nothings.. haan... I will try my best 😃 Just hope others start liking this ASAP and then I'll be more encouraged to keep this updated on weekly basis 😃

plzz... plzz...