About Last Night THREAD 4**Part 38-48**

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Posted: 13 years ago

#621

Such a beautiful update! Very touching. I love this FF.

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#622

oh wow.. congrats .. FF of the week,,..wow wow wow! totally deserving..

i love little khushi.. she is healing anji with her innocence... ohhh yash has something for anji hun! and things are getting better... loved it!

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Surya.Ravi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#623

very good going..really nice...😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#624

Awww!! I loved the conversation when Khushi was feeding Arnav... Especially their flashbacks about how they met )

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Posted: 13 years ago

#625

awesome update

loved it

little kushi was so cute

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Posted: 13 years ago

#626

Congratulations Maya!!!

About Last Night is the FF of the week!! It is THE best FF I've read so far :):)

Seems like there's a big happy light at the end of the tunnel for Anjali...Totally love little Khushi's and Anji's relationship :):)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#627

Very touching update. Little children should behave like Little Kushi and not definitely like Bubbli in the show.

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Krani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#628

Oh my god!

At the end, I actually kept a hand over my chest, aww-ed and said, a tiny bit teary-eyed, "Oh my god!!!"

I am...absolutely..completely...totally out of words on how to express how amazing this part was. I don't think there are enough words to explain how spot-on and beautifully written this update was!

while the main focus of the part was Anjali, a bit of Yash and Little Khushi, you still managed to make this into such a well-written part that you felt for Anjali. You felt every bit of pain she might feel, and it made you mentally cheer for Little Khushi for being there for anjali.

One thing that had me laughing out loud:

"Don't be angry, Chotte," she prefaced her statement, "but I want to see him."

"Absolutely not!"

"No!"

Khushi looked between the two men, not quite certain who had said what, but certain that they had both spoken at the same time.

Love, love, LOVED IT!!!

And what I loved even more was that you still hinted at the ArHi, the chemistry adn the bond they had through these few sentences:

It was this attractive scene that Arnav and Khushi found themselves intruding upon. The pleasure in seeing his sister laugh was so significant that Arnav failed to see that other something that Khushi immediately saw. And, as was often the case with Khushi, one slight inkling led to an infinite understanding, and within a few minutes, she had an exact picture of how this disastrous story would have its own very happy ending.

You identified how both Arnav and Khushi came to see how their sister was fairing in the light of recent events. But at the same time you emphasised the differences in these two characters in how they perceive a situation. Arnav being a person who doesn't look too much into feelings, except where Anjali and Khushi are concerned, did not think twice about the picture Anjali, Yash and Little Khushi painted. However Khushi, who sees love around her, who gives love to everyone, immediately, naturally noticed what could happen of this budding friendship.

I loved reading it.

You build the complexities in the characters so well, and you explain them so well, that you can't help but love every, single character. Yes, this even includes the Prakash's 😉😆

Edited by Krani - 13 years ago