ArSha FF-Pehele Pyar ka Ehsaas#3 **The End**

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

first of all congrats for ur 50 update
it was amazing i just loved it when amar shy y u didnt went to ny and shakti answer was i got a good opurtunity over her is you was mindblong so romantic u rocked and ya dont makes us to wait for long time for your nxt update plz update fast

Edited by anniemathias - 13 years ago

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ekiholo

@ekiholo

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#222

tish...kya kahun,,tussi gr8 ho!!🥳loved this update!!❤️ pata nehi kitne waqt se aisahi kuch dekhna chahti thi main!!luv u ya!😃

i m in luv with this words...

Amar- you're not going to New York?... why?
Shakti- I got a better offer here.
Amar- oh?... what?
Shakti- you!

plz update soon!!cant wait anymore 4 da nxt update!!

Edited by ekiholo - 13 years ago

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sukanya

@sukanyaa

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#223

awesome as alwaz...finally all the MUs r over now...

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nityaa02

@nityaa02

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Awww... that was amazing... congratulations for the 50th update... hope you do many many more updates... 🤗

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#225

A big CONGRATS to u for completing Golden Jubliee of updates. 🥳 👏
KEEP WRITING N DOING SUCH BRILLIANT WORK 👍🏼 🤗

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

firstly a congooo shongo to u darl fr ur 50th chap !!!!

mwaaahhh !!!!

keep writing this FF nd let us drown completely in it !!!!

i luved ur update dear...so heart touching...inescapable !!!!

beautiful lines...

Keep it up nd well done !!!!

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Kritika Julka

@kritzzz_ArSha

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#227

Loved it!!!

Congrats on completing a century!!!

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#228

Really loved this part awesome. 👏
She was thinking that she was dreaming of him but thanks to Neeti who cleared her doubt when she said that yes it was Kunwar there.😉
Wow before Kunwar could have been made ne excuse Shaks did it for him n he chuckled dat y is every body still behaving so nicely with him n yeah he was right dat Shakti didn't tell anyone abt it.
Finally this dumb headed man came 2 know that she was nt leaving n he was cursing himself that y didn't he listend whole. 😛
Gud that Shaks showed some fake anger to him, even scolded him when he searched her car which she was unable to do after two rounds, kaise karegi saara dhayan to Kunwar pe tha na. 😆
But Kunwar know very well that how he could make her listen to him n thank god finally he explained his foolish act dat y he did that.🤔
U cleared my doubt that she has already knew that n thanks to Dharmesh n Kirti who made that possible n cleared all confusions of Shakti.😊
Kunwar's one move was enough to make her loose her senses. 😳
Kunwar was dumbstruck with her reactions of boldness, obviously he didn't expect it for her but when she told dat Dharmesh has told her he was in awe 😍
Kunwar's reason was so geniune so as Shaks temper dat how could he decide at his own without thinking for her once, n yeah Kunwar is a better option.😃
loved ur writing in dis part update soon.

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vaishali

@Vaish24

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#229

Loved it...

Okay the romantic reaction i was expecting that. But itni asaani se sach nikla i wasn't expecting that but makes sense as she already knew the truth lekin i was still clinging to the possibility that a hot argument would still follow..

Loved how she told that there was a better opportunity in the form of him waiting for hher here and it was worth everything . correctly said.

And the way he told her the truth was so sweet...

The twist u brought ki neeti going was so unexpected tabhi it was a twist..

The starting was superb. The aftr effect of temporary pull-off was evident for both. Loved the way how she was suggesting a psychiatrist. Shows how much she missed him the past days.

It was so romantic like how she wanted to enjoy the moment and amar cud never be happier that his love was back with him...

Ab yeh batao when did u update. Was sitting till 3 but tab tak update hi nhi aaya tha. Pata i was so desperately waiting for it..

U write so well. U may felt like climbing Himalayas but it was pure bliss to read such writing. Am sure of it... ki aise hi likhte rho and then aap toh Mt. Everest pe permanent dera daalke vahan bhangra kar rhe hoge.