So Close, Yet So Far!! - Chapter 4 - Pg 61 - 27/05

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Jeeya_Angel

@Jeeya_Angel

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#21

I am getting to read a completely different story of ArSha.

I love the concept and the style you are narrating it. Too much suspense.

I really wanna know what happen on that DAY which changed everything.

Nice start dear

Will wait for the next update.

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Shailja

@---Shailu---

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: lovely7010
another SS aditi dats such an awesome surprise i just luved it...
the update was amazing...but full of suspense y now i really want to dat akhir hua kya hai dat shakti is refusing to meet dem...plzzz update sooon

truellly awesuuum !!!!

totally agree wid twinkle ! :D

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Shivs

@The007Shivani

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Yeah Aditi it was amazing I loved it and sorry for such short comments I m really busy

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shaffy_arsha

@shaffy_arsha

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#24

firstly sorry 4 da late comment sweety
n ye kb likha kch btaya b ni iske bare mai to...unpredictable nikali is baar to tu
n awsumm update tha
n dat saari awww goshhh!!!! i cn imagine shakti in dat, ki kitni hawtt lg ri hogi
n itna suspense ku meri bhen marne ka irada h kya n wo b last tk suspense
thoda sa taras kha le hm par
bt amazing surprise tha
i love it

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Asha

@Zehnaseeb.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

Devil... u r so talented... one more SS... hawww...

BTW... awesome start... hawh... what happened between Arsha?

n if Shaks wears that saree, i m not surprised that kunwar will drool over her☺️

continue soon...

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#26

killer!!!

i must say...i personally love arsha ff s n os s n read them all no matter wt!!thou em bzzy 4 past sme days cx ov term so wont b mkng long cmnts bt then ll b thr all the time

awesome idea

plx contt