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Posted: 13 years ago
ALRIGHT! So my list of my "Most Favorite FFs" has now been upgraded as I add Tainted Wings to it! :D

DUDE THIS WAS EFFING AMAZING! HOW DO YOU DO IT?! I'm still in shock!

I literally had goose bumps when you described Nate's accident, it was sooo sad and tragic! :( Jamie liked the poor guy and he was instantly dead! I can't wait too read more of it cuz I'm sure there's more to Nate's story than that!

And that weird thing that happened to Jamie. She seems like a very interesting character! This story is amazing Shreya! I can't wait for you to write more of it! :D Great job as always!

Love youuu! <3

OH BTW! LOVEEE your siggy! <3 SRK&Kajol are the love of my lifee and KKHH is one of my most favorite movies in this wholeee world. <3
Edited by -Garima- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
^ Okay WOAH. Wait, she felt it all? Like imagined it just a few minutes back that Nate was going to die, like that?! That is shyt scary obviously, and AMAZING for you to pen something down like this.
Absolutely LOVED it! Theres more, right? There HAS to be. Wonder how Jamie's life continues, and does this only happen with a person she likes, or just random, or anyone? Intriguing indeed.
I WANT MORE 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reyabear


I think update might be late, because I wanted to get the basic plot and outline of Tainted Wings jotted down so I start it this summer. But after a week, I will update! Pakka! :D

a WEEK?😲 ...maar daala, seriously!! 😆
But, I understand lol. Take your time, and I wont be around much, well I shouldnt be around here...have exams...Sigh.
Gluck with tainted wings then😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nyxx

...and the wait finally comes to an end... (Im referring to me un-ressing this😆)

"Why would I tell you, when I can show you"..."Show me what?"..."How to really dance"
butterflies butterflies butterflies...*thud...oh gawd, DANCE ALREADY!!!*

HAHAHAHA! ☺️
DING DONG..Okay, woah...what was that Reee (thats your new name btw! LOL)?! I felt MORE than just BUTTERFLIES, if I were Khushi. Ive already told you most of what I felt after reading this scintallating chapter, but phenomenal, really!! Whatever they are doing, or whoever they are with, they can literally FEEL each other...the gaze on the other, those eyes...gahhh they speak volumes...and that is what defines LOVE. Its like all their cells, including every possible neurons in the body stimulates every damn hormones, along with sensors, and motors alerting the presence of the other. Thats crazy, Im tellin' you! And, you have managed to do just that and beyond. Marvelous!! It has been 5 threads, 19 chapters, and yet with no kiss of such, they have managed to come far, on a mental, emotional, and physical front...and thats whats remarkable, because it doesnt matter if they have kissed or not...they share soo much already be it in presence of every other character in the story, especially their respective forced or fake partners😉. In particula I enjoyed the insight you gave into Khushi, and how she differentiating the touch of Arnav, Aman, and Sid...awwwhh, this girl has fallen in louveee..I await to see the realization, from Arnav as well😆...but before that, lets get them dancing! 😉

Haila. Neurons, cells, sensors, motors.
Dee, you know these words go past my head right?
Bwahahah kidding. But yeah, I felt it needed to be shown how much Arnav affects her compared to other men. Not that it isn't obvious already. 😆

Okay thats it, I rambled way too much already. But I am curious to know what Sid and La are upto, they are definnitely upto something...and something tells me they know whats cooking between Arnav and Khushi...i like! Oh and I was also thinking about something else, you know how Khushi obviously responds and cant resists Arnavs touch or moves, I wonder what he thinks of her since she in front of the world is commited obviously to Aman, well is he going to think she is two-timing of some sort? But this also applied to Arnav, as he is with Anna, but Aman and Khushi are engaged to be married, so that puts a bigger stress on the differences of the relationship...I wonder I wonder...and another thing, where is Anjali and her baby, I was always curious as to why Khushi always noticed the baby's eyes...she found them familiar, no? Hmmm...theres no snake is this right? Please say NO. 😃
Sid is definitely wayyy too smart and I think some people underestimate him. And that's all I'm saying :P Mwahahahah!
I'm glad someone mentioned that, because obvs. Arnav thinks Khushi is taken, and that too by his best friend, and she's letting him rile her up like that, so there's bound to be some intense scenes coming up soon.

*who just said that? wasn't me. Pakka.* 🤣

And no, no snake and his nose twitches! :P

^^ I need to stop. Ciao!😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nyxx

^ Okay WOAH. Wait, she felt it all? Like imagined it just a few minutes back that Nate was going to die, like that?! That is shyt scary obviously, and AMAZING for you to pen something down like this.

Absolutely LOVED it! Theres more, right? There HAS to be. Wonder how Jamie's life continues, and does this only happen with a person she likes, or just random, or anyone? Intriguing indeed.
I WANT MORE 😃


Basically, she gets dreams of people before they die. And that one just happened to be the only one she witnessed and included someone she knew on a personal level. ya know? 😃
Thank youuu! 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: reyabear


Basically, she gets dreams of people before they die. And that one just happened to be the only one she witnessed and included someone she knew on a personal level. ya know? 😃
Thank youuu! 🤗

Ohh I see. This one just also happened to be while she was awake, and in school. Im giving you a BIG GO-GREEN signal to pen it all down!😃🤗
and I await for the intensity to start, girl...(and I was thinking it had already begun, but I guess not just Sid, we shouldnt underestimate you😉)
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Posted: 13 years ago
that was so amazing update. arhi dancing together just bcoz arnav was jealous when she danced with aman. well his way to ask for a dance was the best way ever ever.
god!!!!!! i love ur updates. i just cant resist myself. even though m having my biology final exam in two days time, i read ur update as if its very casual and natural.
continue soon now cant wait.
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Posted: 13 years ago
Btw, Dee, good luck for your exams! :)
Garima-using my phone right now so will reply to your comment tomortow! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Spine chilling Shreya!!! I literally had goose bumps while reading it...

One question... Nate wasn't Alex Pettyfer right??????????? 😕 Please please please tell me you didn't kill him!!!!! 😭


Other than that... WOW!!!! You just keep getting better girl!!! 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Both were burning in jealousy...

Khushi saw Arnav dancing with Anna..n she felt anger fill up...!!

Well looks like it was the same with Arnav as he saw her dancing with Aman...!!

Loved the last part where he pulled her...n both were lost in each others touch...but someone has to come n disturb them..!!

Update was descriptive...n awesome..!!

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