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Bhumika

@MAAHIMIKA

Inactive

Posted: 13 years ago

#121

Omg this was wow ... Awesum Start to the new FF ... Will be looking forward to another addition to ur Collection !!!
And as always u will bring the best of it and beat everyone else ... :)
Keep up the great job ... :D and Keep writing !!!!

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crazydream

@crazydream

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#122

Wow

Fabulous update

Beautiful

Maan's character is superb..

He has a charming personality...

Luved it...

thanks for pm.

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sonu4ever

@sonu4ever

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Brilliant start Marvee.
Interesting concept.
Get the hands on criminals through women. What an
Idea sir ji lol.
All crazy about Maan. Lets see how Geet react in front of him ;)
Cant wait for the next part.

All the very best for ur exam dear. :D

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craziekudi

@craziekudi

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#124

wow taht was a awesome start marvee..

hey all the best for exams...

whats with this guy.. so much attitude... and so much self confidence...

precap looks interesting please update as soon as u are free

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JanakiSatish

@JanakiSatish

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#125

Casanova

Part 1
marveee...tht was one awsome entry...attitude+arrogance at its best. its so easy to bed a girl.hmmm. and he is an expert in that. so as per you...a lady is also a reason for destruction...so maan is treading towards it. i think geet will also play with him and in turn he would get smitten and bitten ...dangerously.

marvee classic...waiting for more...

jaans

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Tabassum013

@Tabassum013

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#126

Wow...interesting... waiting 4 next update.

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#127

interesting start hope geet doesn't give in demand easily

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Sonali92

@Sonali92

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#128

ohh my god awesome...but i know Geet won't be an easy task and defenitly different from the other women...oh love it already...

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GeeMaa

@GeeMaa

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#129

All the best for your test, Marvee

Awesome once again. My God! where do you get these ideas from,no no, I am not complaining as long as we get to read your beautiful descriptions of Maan and Geet. Keep up the good work and thanks so much for writing so beautifully.