SwaRon FF- Into You Like A Train- Ch3 Pg15 - 30/1

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@Parvathi12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#41

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L!!!!!!...loved it yaar...love the way u express their feeling...their confusion...i can totally imagine the scene...cant wait for the next update...update soon ...n WHERE IS MY PM????...

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manasi

@manasie23

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Posted: 13 years ago

#42

awesum update nandu dii... But next time i think i will really need a dictionaruy to read the next part...! Haaaye i could feel it those words... Those feelings...!

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Yash Inani

@YashInani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#43

Awesome part, superbly written, simply mindblowing...

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ABI

@ABBY92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#44

OMG,jus loved it...so beautifully written...cant wait for d next part!!!

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purvi

@-dark.horse-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: manasie
awesum update nandu dii... But next time i think i will really need a dictionaruy to read the next part...! Haaaye i could feel it those words... Those feelings...!

i sooo agree wid u mannu..!di yaa abse i will sit wid dictionary..!!

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Varsha Subramanium

@varshasubramani

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Posted: 13 years ago

#46

Ok! I am IN LOVE wid dis FF! The english is FANTASTIC and dis actually shows that u have written dis by your HEART! Please PM me the parts!

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

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Posted: 13 years ago

#47

have u people ever thought of becoming writers i love it please pm me when u update

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musicgal17

@musicgal17

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Posted: 13 years ago

#48

This is BRILLIANT yaar... Please update soon.. And do PM. :) :-D swaron <3

ps. I was watching the same locker room scene 15 minutes ago. I simply love it.. <3

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surbhimathur

@surbhimathur

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Posted: 13 years ago

#49

AMAZINGGG ❤️❤️❤️
hw can anybody write so beautifully??? bt u al hav done itt...jst xtraordinary...👍🏼
i ws hoping to read more and moree😍!!! aahh...bt it ended...eagery waiting fr d nxt part...n plz PM me also 😊