Nivren ff:Mujhe Haq Hai/chapter8 updated pg9 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow one more ff...glad you started ur ff achu...good title...waiting for ur updates...good luck😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nivren123

Great can't wait for the first update please continue. 😊

Hi nivren123 sorry dont know ur name will update ASAP.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Butifuleyes

Achu when will you start ur ff sweetie.

Hi butifuleyes (if am not mistaken ur name is sunayana)will start soon dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_nivren

wow one more ff...glad you started ur ff achu...good title...waiting for ur updates...good luck😊

thank u ash.will update soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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loved ur intro achu😃!!!
continue soon dear😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please update soon can't wait for to read your FF.😊
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Chapter-1

A bright sunny day in shimla.At Sharma's house dadi calls yash'yash beta zara tu idhar aana'.yash as usual was in front of the mirror getting ready for college. Suddenly he hears his dadi calling'ji dadi'.'dheere beta meine tumse bhagke thodi na aane ko kaha tha'.'wo dadi aap achanak se aise bhulaya isliye.acha kya hua dadi kuch chahiye'.dadi asks him'woh tumhare didi ka phone aaya tha'.yash tells her that she had called and said she will be coming day after tomorrow. Dadi becomes very happy.nivi was coming back home after her studies. She asks yash to get ready so that she can prepare his breakfast.

When she was about to leave to kitchen keshav comes and tells 'maa mein jaa raha hoon'.'Keshav mein nashta lagwaati hoon'.keshav tells he has to reach the bank early so he will take breakfast from canteen.keshav was about to leave when pratap comes there and both of them collide with each other.both of them look at each other and laughs.pratap also says bye to dadi.dadi asks pratap if he has taken breakfast or not.pratap also tells no.dadi scolds both of them and tells 'tum dono bhayiyon kabhi nahi sudroge.'just then hemlatha and divya comes their.

Keshav and pratap both was working in same bank. Both brothers had so much love for each other. They go together in their car.keshav had always insisted pratap to buy his own car because he has his own family so that after some time there should not be any fight between them saying this is mine. But pratap always said no. He always said that there is no two families there is only one family.hemlatha also supported him happily. She also didn't want to live separately from them.she loved dadi and considers nivi and yash as her children.

Both of them says bye and leaves from their.dadi and hemlatha looks them leaving.dadi say kitna pyar hai in dono ke beech kisi ke nazar na lage.hemlatha also tells sach mein maa kisi ke nazar na lage.just then divya interferes between them and says hmm.. Agar aap log aise kahke dekhthe rahenge tho aap logon ki nazar hi lagegi.dadi hits her at her shoulder and all three laughs.

Yash comes and asks dadi 'dadi kya aap apke beton ko hi dekthi rahegi ya phir apne pothe ko bhi.'hemlatha tells 'arre baba tu chal mein tumhara nastha lagwathi hoon.'yash also takes his breakfast and says bye and leave.hemlatha and divya also go upstairs saying they will come after sometime.dadi stands at the door looking yash going.


friends if u all didnt like it please tell me i will stop right here.i dont want to bore u all.if u all liked then please dont forget to hit the like button.😊

Edited by achuniviren - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice achu dear, continue soon😊
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nice one dear...please continue very soon😃...love the sharma family 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice chapter dear...update soon😊

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