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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb yaar loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
just a feeling .. if geets starts working and she is able to support herself, will she leave Maan's home?
i like how maan is always helpful towards her but he cant express them in words, geet's mind is so occupied in hating him that she cant feel his quite expression, and he cant show her with his eyes as well...may be some times he has to use words as well
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Posted: 13 years ago
safi, you said you will update "seduction", when on next year ????

glad that i find this update ... loved it like always ... you started to pics, huh ... loved it really ... she should atleast happy that her hubby is a smart enough guy to be just a another blind man ... he is indeed trying to make her comfortable & happy ... for the zillionth time, i will say that it's not his fault either & that's not a way to deal with the situation

do cont soon & do PM me
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Posted: 13 years ago
hay here you go.. morning updates :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
WAITING😍
btw did u update seduction???
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cant wait longer.
exam dene college jana hai. pls fast
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Posted: 13 years ago

Mahsoos Part 18

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He waited one hour, but still no geet, he rang home and she also have not arrived and in his stupidity he does not have her number...

Maan felt through his phone, calling out each persons name! He had a specially designed phone by apple that could call out any name, the numbers, it was voice phone... Maybe look for geets family number or maybe ask his mother avantika, she ought to know! But what if they worry? Thinking nearly over week and half and he does not have his wife numbers...

Geet, anjali and armaan sat in the cafe, they were going on and on, talking about everything as possible, maybe after so long she have been this happy... It was a completely a new world...

7... Dinner time at khurana, maan waited for geet outside, he did not want anyone asking where she have been, specially skipping the dinner... A black taxi came and stops, dropping her off, she walks in and maan steps out. She nearly jumped seeing him there, she thought he would be home by now...
"I thought you will be inside!" geet looks at him...
"let's go!"
She flowed him... "I have ate dinner! I don't want to eat!" she let's maan know. Maan didn't speak and showed no expression at all. Whole house was worried about them but soon as they found geet with maan everyone took a sigh relief.
"get change and join us for dinner beta.." avantika smiled at both..
"but I..." geet was about to open her mouth when maan quickly adds "we ate dinner outside!" geet looked at maan with shock. She did not expect this from him...
"n..." rano smiled at both... Kissing geets forehead..
"alright, have a good night!"

Maan did not say another word as he walked upstairs and geet quietly flowed. "ate dinner!" she took it as they both ate dinner with separate people...
Maan was in foul mood, he did not want any of his family Member to go through guilt or regretting about there marriage. It was purely his mistake and due to that they are two separate people! He never understood the concept of love, or attraction like dev have spoken about this girl he loved long time back, but today his heart was deeply heart, if a small thing like this can heart you then he rather not play his biggest card in the world of love!

Maan walks in to the room, taking his watch & wallet, putting them on the table. He quickly had a shower and walked out of the room... When geet eventually walked out of the room he was long gone...



The cool breeze touched his rock hard skin as he placed it on the key of the piano... He traced his hand along softly, gently over the Brail music node, a beautiful melody came out yet the hinder of pain hidden in it...

"maan..." anni walked out of the shadow, Usually it's always her who forces him to come along and play the music but for the first time it was him, with his own will came along and plaid the beautiful music...
"doesn't that sound beautiful?"
Maan forcefully displayed a smile while pari with surprise starts to clap her hand, making few notes in her diary.
"that was beautiful sir. Oh I love this." she felt over joy with the skill...
"oh I really wish I knew how to play piano. I always had passion for it!"
Maan & anni faced her voice with a smile..


."It's not hard..." maan replied
"that's because sir you know how to play!"
Maan laughed at her childish and pleading manor voice...
"call me maan."
"no sir! Per.." pari mumbled, fearing how can she? It's not just maan, it's maan khurana. The eldest son of the khurana family, how possibly can she? She drank her saliva and carefully listens to his words again. Making clear to her thumping heart that's what exactly she hard.
"just call me maan."

Anni came by and sat by the tool near her bro, laughing with maan.




Geet sat in her room silently. it was 12 midnight and there was still no presences of maan. She laid on the bed with her usual twist and turn, cursing the big bed. Why? Her annoying frustration did let her to close the eyes. She gazed upon maans door, wondering, last night she fell sleep on the floor, now where she will sleep now!
Geet took her body and steeped out of the room, one end to another corridor was dimly light, just enough to see, she walked for a while, wondering around then peaked over to the swirly stair. A vague music caught the sensitive part of her ears. Her small foot slowly took it's step, the payel started to dance around in rhythm. Echoing as she took each step. She slowly peaks through the open door only to find her husband playing piano. A grand black glossy wooden piano. Anni stood by while pari stood opposite admiring, gazing upon her husband...
She felt shocked and surprised how much surprise this man will give it to her? This! Then...
Well she have to disturb there sweet little moment which her self did not approve at all.
Maan stopped instantly hearing her payel before the cough. He faced towards the door, "geet?"
"really sorry to bother you but it's 1:30!" she looks at everyone with a gloomy face! Her mind couldn't sleep with some odd reason and here they enjoying a nice music. She crossed her arm with another frustration glare and snaps out of the room...
Pari looked worriedly here and there while maan made a confusing face. Anni just wanted to laugh but she controlled.
"I think I should go and sleep.! Umm mrs khurana did not look that happy." she looked up, god help maan... She hurriedly walked off while anni walked way with a big yoane...

Maan staid little longer analyzing some different music! He was hungry to, eating nothing from lunch was enough & the limit! He ignored the burning stomach as well...

2:30, maan steps in, geet slowly opens one of her eyes looks at him then clock... She sits up, the noise made maan to spin his head.
"it's 2:30!" she angrily suggest.
"umm..." geet stands up on the bed, frustration was only increasing... "what do you mean by umm? You wake up at 6 everyday, book say human needs to sleep at-least 8 hours!"
"book complains, not my body!"


"what do you mean your body? Like it's all different to others!"
Maan was standing near the bed & geet jumps on the floor, standing in front of him. He was 10 inch taller then her, first day she truly was petrified but now... Hmm... Nothing...
"isn't that what you think?"
His few simple word was enough for her to realize what exactly he meant, she looked up at his blank face, emotionless eyes, then everywhere els then him. She drank her saliva, worriedly suppressed her self...
"good night geet. You have collage less then 6 hours, you need to sleep...

He walked off, leaving geet wonder, she sadly smiled.. Even a smile seems to be annoying.. Geet took her self to the sofa and feel sleep there...


part 17-prev- next-part 19
next- confused maan with mrs khuaran
ok... here you go.. little free this morning so...😳
pls say how it is me all worried...
thank you for all the love and supprot... it means allot

Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yupieee me first 👍🏼
thank u thank u for the update.
aaww my maan is hungry.😒
wow loved the piano scene.👏
maaneet coundown was good. yaha maan aur waha geet both are confused.😕
Edited by tinu.jindal - 13 years ago
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wowww awesome luved ittt
n wt does d precap suggest
nt understood
soo update sooonnn

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