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Posted: 13 years ago
looks like i really missed a lot..
😭
trying to catch up
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: spvd



u dare wouldnt Reya darl or else me will come and make u pay...me already mad at the man Maan for doing that...😆

don't worry...no killing...or not here at least 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp

looks like i really missed a lot..

😭
trying to catch up


good to have you on board
hopefully you will write a part as well😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bangalores

ok just a doubt...isn't this revenge and payback getting out of hand? i mean they love each other...but now it feels more like an ego clash...like that of our dearly hated Devini...not like i am not enjoying the hot hot updates...but i am thinking abt the emotional side of their relation...who will bend? with so many chances of reconciliation given up for the demand for extending the deed aren't the egos getting inflated like something else in the OS😆😆...any one share my opinion?
PS: no offense meant ...just a thought i wanted to express😃


Maaneet are two halves of a whole and the word ego does not come into...this is teasing and both
of them know they can' stay away from each other for long😉 it...wait and watch the end is nigh...😆
Revenge is sweet!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Almost done

Will re-edit this post for the update😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: leverne

Bindu di not fair u should give it a try na..as it is we are not asking anything of such sort in surrogate relations na..btw wen ur updating..me waiting..have to go for community rosary will be back soon..



sure sure...but i do think some readers r getting a bit agitated with the slow pace in SR...updating😕😕..i'm too busy chakkar katting here...and there is FOrbidden...it's been neglected for more than a fortnight😳😳...
rosary...😳...i missed our family rosary the second day 2day...since the elders went off yesterday😭😭
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh lord ☺️...the latest by simi and aashu...like seriously u two...have some shame 😆..

@aaashu: i thought u said i could handle this...☺️😆

-Reya <3
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

oh lord ☺️...the latest by simi and aashu...like seriously u two...have some shame 😆..


@aaashu: i thought u said i could handle this...☺️😆

-Reya <3


Reya.you shouldn't be here then...
this is only for shameless people😆😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Chapter 36

She comes near Maan...bending down a little before giving a peck on his cheek. "Good night...if you need anything let me know..." she whispers seductively in his ears. She walks to the door before smirking at him as he sat there in a dazed out look...

"This will teach you to mess with me...lets see how you sleep the whole night now..." 😈 Geet said.

Geet went in her room after being satisfied with getting back at Maan. She laid down on bed thinking about Maan. How she wanted him right now. He looked so tempting lying there. She had to control herself to her pounce on him and take him right there. But no she had to control her hormones...she has to win this fight...she gets up to go to the window taking in the cool air.

Maan in the room took him some time to come out of his state. He realized what dirty game Geet has played on him. He gets up off the bed to plan his next move. He sworn vengeance. If he can't go to sleep then he will make sure that she doesn't either...but what to do? He smirks after he thought about a plan. He opens his room door and goes outside.

Geet was about to lie on the bed when she hears a noise coming from outside. Putting on her small silky bathrobe that covered only the areas necessary she goes outside. She saw kitchen light on...wondering who could be at that time..she slowly goes toward the kitchen area and she stops right in her track.

Maan was inside the kitchen wearing no pant or shirt. He had aapron covering his front area so she couldn't tell if he was wearing anything behind that or not. He was covered in chocolate and flour..."Ohh how delicious he looked...she wanted to lick the chocolate that was at the corner of his mouth...she opened her bathrobe getting hot watching him cook like that.

Maan smirked he knew that she was there silently watching him. It took a lot of will power to not look her way. He wanted to smear all the chocolate on her while he licks each and every bit off of her. Purposely, he drops some chocolate on his chest...letting it drip on his sexy abs. He turns around going to the oven area.

Geet held her breath when she saw he was wearing tight Calvin Kline underwear where his butt was visible. She wondered about the view in the front. She leans against the door as she watches him make a chocolate cake. He leans against the counter holding a chocolate frosting bowl. She licks her lips when she saw Maan putting chocolate spoon in his mouth closing his eyes while he relish the taste.

"mmm this is good..." She heard him say.."you sure can say that again..."Gee thought. She slowly walks over him as he still had his eyes closed. She looked at the chocolate that was dripping down his chest...she was about to lean toward him to lick it off when Maan opened his eyes. He licks his lips and looks at Geet...

"Geet? What are you doing here?" He asks innocently...Geet looks at his chest and then at him..

"huh?" she looks lost...Maan takes out his apron..Geet gulps seeing his manhood. He smirks...the cake was ready. He takes out the cake from the oven...and starts putting on chocolate frosting, getting his hand dirty...Geet looks at his every move...

*how was it?*😆😆
Okay guys someone take over...have to finish writing SKG update now😆
Edited by mrs.msk - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk


Reya.you shouldn't be here then...
this is only for shameless people😆😆

ahaha 😆..oh i know that now...
u all are bend on corrupting our innocent minds 😆...aashu madam said it was notthing "heavy duty"- those being her exact words...so i spent catching up...and now...i gotta see what happens next...😉...oh Babaji...have mercy on us..

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