*Mayur FF Play with Fire*Last part on pg 118 - Page 58

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesom part
beautifully portrayed emotions
loved it
do continue soon
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Awesomettt update
very interesting
waiting for next part
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fabolous update
loved it very much
continue soon with long part
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Posted: 13 years ago
fabolous update
i hope Mayank will find his Nupur
do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

nice update

hope mayank n dig save nupur soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
Just hope that mayank could able to save his nupur...

please do update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
story is now heading towards its end,there is two more parts left to end this story.i hope u ll like them..
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

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Play with Fire

"Tring"

Malik's cell phone rang and he ordered a person who was messaging his feet with the signal of his eyes to received it and he obeyed his ordered.

"Malik sahib,Danish line pe hai?" he told him handling him his cell phone.

"Malik sahib ik buri khabar hai (bad news)"A person who was on line informed Malik, "kaisi khabar,jaldi bata"Malik asked getting impatiently after listening his worried voice.

"Malik sahib ik khas khabar hai,inspector Asghar aur D.IG. ,police force ke saath ap ke saathiyon ko pakrne aa rahi hai..ap ke khilaf (against)bhi arrest warrant jari ho gaye hai..unhain pata chal gaya hai wo Larki ap ke pas hai"

"D.I.G ki itni himmat ke wo hamre khilaf awaz udha raha hai"he groaned in anger clenching his teeth, "Elaqe(area)main elaan(announce)karva do ke Panjait Kal hi baithe gi aur us larki ko kari kiya jaye ga"he ordered him and threw his mobile on floor in anger.

"kal faisla ke bad Larki ko Mar dena..takay ye case yahin khatam ho jaye,jab larki hi nahi zinda rahe gi toh phir ye case bhi band ho jaye ga aur sara ilzaam Panjait pe ho ga"murmuring under his breath he laughed evilly..

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Someone opened the door and Nupur's breath caught in her throat to listen footstep coming towards her,she looked towards the entrance and saw shadow coming towards her,she hugged herself hiding her face in her knee,a person came closed to her and pulled her up holding her wrist and Nupur taken aback at sudden attack, "hamain kaha le ke ja rahe ho?please hamain chor do..hamain yaha se jane do"without paying attention on her continuous begging he dragged her forcefully towards outer door,Nupur struggled more fiercely that she had ever struggled before, her wrist were paining due to raw strong grip on her wrist and her every limb hurt from the constants slaps, kicks and punches he gave her in attempt to make her stop .

But all her efforts went in drain when another person kept a piece of cloth filled with chloroform on her nose and her body got loosed in just few second and she got unconscious again They carried her up and lay her in van.

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"Everyone take your positions, we have to entered in the house through the back door and be careful they have must guns and can attack back,we have to be careful.." Inspector Asghar gave instructions to others and everyone took their positions..

"Mayank you stay here,its not safe to stand infront of this house,its danger for your life"D.I.G uncle swung his head to look at Mayank and he came out of his senses but his eyes still glued on that house,

"uncle My Nupur is in this house,how can I stay here'I have to go in the house, she is waiting for me..Please give me permission to go inside"

His weak voice almost came in whispering tone and Mayank looked at him with pleading eyes and D.I.G uncle's heart melted to see immense love in his eyes for the girl who was in great danger,He kept his hand on his shoulder and patted it, "I can understand your feeling son but I cant let you go in danger"

"She is also in danger and waiting for me"his eyes became teary as Mayank gave glance to that house which was surrounded by thick forest.

"Please uncle..Let me go in"

D.I.G uncle could not stop him to see his love for her and gave him permission to go with Inspector Asghar.

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"sir everyone is on their positions"one of them informed Inspector Asghar almost in whispering tone and he signaled them to came closed to back door..

"Mayank carefully come with me"

Inspector Asgar pointed his gun towards the close door and said Mayank..Mayank nodded his head and followed his instructions,

"Ya Allah Meri Nupur mujhe mil jaye'"Mayank closed his eyes and prayed in his heart.

Inspector Asgar kicked the door and Mayank entered in following him.

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here is next update...i hope u ll like it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww what an update dear
i must say you are amazing,loved the way you showed Mayank love and Nupur helplessness,my heart cried for her
plz continue it thought sad to listen its going end soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank you Maria sis.. that you updated..
That was little bit a scary updated..
Nupur's life is in Danger..
And someone had took Nupur Outside the Room..
Mayank Reached there..
O god..
PLease.. mayank could able to save his nupur..
This malik amd his Men are very cruel..
They beat inncoent Nupur and are now going to kill..Her..
i just hope Mayank couyld able to reach at right time..
else...

He won't be able to save his nupur..
I know you wont let that happen...

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