EHSAAS ARSHI FF PART 21 pn pg22 updated - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: srahs

Am i dreaming u updated huh???
Update soon
Looking forwards to see hw khushi patch up wid sarun

hey dear, sorry 4 keeping everyone waiting but to be honest after sending 204 pm when u hardely get 6 or 7 comments its makes me very sad and its discourages me alot . my wish to continue my ff breaks and i just shutup myself away but when some one msg me to continue and i feels bad and i start writing it again , sorry 4 keep u waiting dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: adventure_roks

will be waiting for your next update to see whether khushi and arnav are okay...

thankz for the pm...😊

ur welcome dear , they will be k but after fews more twist and turns
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: HK90

finally you updated

so they called Payal to solve the situation and clear the MU with Arnav. Aakash is really funny liked him.
Lovely update
will wait what to know what will happens next thanks for the pm.

thanks dear for liking it well payal is cupid between arshi and she will help them to a new life
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Angel13

read all parts in one go

it's brilliant story
fabulous
well written dear
thanks for pm
continue soon

thanks dear for liking it
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: poornimadevi133

Really good pls keep on updating we r waiting don't make us wait for long

sorry dear and i will make sure u dnt have to wait long
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally you update after long time
Awesome update very interesting story
continue soon please and thank u for pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago

Ehsaas

😊Part 21😊

"I told u the consequences of what were u planning but u were held bending on proving ur self right and others wrong and look where r we all standing on …………..ha ………….standing we r not even standing we have fallen so low in jiju eyes …………..i so ashamed of helping u …………..i wont be able to look in jiju eyes nw…….." says payal holding her head in his hands


"I know guju but I am too late for realizing it but its better late than never na …….u know na me from ……..what I had beared …….." sobbing khushi said


"the life and the god made me like this I never wanted to be like this I also wanted to be loved and to give love but look at me do I like the same di I was in our childhood ………both of them killed me slow and slow ………..but still I lived na I should have died then so every one world have been happy but even death wasn't kind to me and gave me a punishment of a living hell…………..plz guju after having arnav in my life for few days I understood that i can also be lucky for love but I was afraid I didn't wanted to get hurted third time so I did this ………………….plz help me for arnav love I will die with out him plz guju" saying khushi fell on the floor

Payal immediately hugged her sister and consoled her and khushi fell sleep after the whole incident which shook her to the core . she knew only jiju,s love can make her di the same old di .she kept on careesing her di hairs while thinking of how she can help her sister .

Akash was seeing the sister reunioing for the side and he knew that her bhabhi has been terribly betrayed by the life . he was looking at payal who is younger but was playing a role of a guardian to her elder sister and he knew she is only girl best for him who can love him like he is and will nt leave him alone ever .he smiled at his first love and walked toward her and kept a hand at her shoulder but she was in deep thoughts . he fell hard for her and he knew there is no way out of it now and he thanked god for this fall. He kept his lovey thoughts aside and shook her and he looked in her eyes and was just starring at him without blinking .

"payal bhabi has slept let me put him into the bed and then we can think how to help bhabi "says akash smilingly


"ok "says payal with a small smile .akash took khushi in his arms and walked toward bhai room and tuck her in bed and covered with a blanket.😊


Payal looked at the men infront of him how caring was he toward her sister who hurted his brother badly and still he is standing by her di and was trying to fix everything.his features were perfect his beautiful eyes😳 , his strawberry cheeks were waiting for her lips to taste them😳 , his m-shaped would perfectly fit on her small lipsy😳 .she smacked her head and blushed on her shameful thoughts .akash turned at the same time and the look in his eyes guessed what was she thinking .she fumbled for words first time


"wo…..mein ………thanks for helping di and sorry she hurted ur family so much but trust me she was afraid of everyone and……….."she couldn't speak a word more because akash putted his fingers on her lips .😳

"I trust u " says akash .😳

both were standing in silence but that silenced was perfect then words . they don't know how long they stood starring in eah others eyes . akash phone ranged and they came out of their lovey land .

"lets go outside and talk "says akash

"ok"says payal

they came into the sitting room and sat infront of other .

"payal I dnt know what happen in bhabi life that made her do all this but whatever happen it has caused pain to bhai and bhabi too…….the only problem is with bhabi past and the only way is to solve the problem is that we have to have tell bhai everything so he can understand why bhabi did all this "says akash politely

"u r right akashi ji but where is jiju I will explain everything to him and he will understand it "says payal

"wont u ask me what happen in di life ?"says payal tearingly into akash eyes

"I don't need to ………I trust her …………I dnt her from a long time but what time I spent with her I saw how innocent and sweet she is ………some body else has given her the pain "says akash put a hand on her hand making a gesture that he understands them

"where is jiju"says payal

"he is nt at home he might have went on a drive…….when ever he is upset he goes on drive it relaxs him……he will be back soon "says akash

"I will wait for him to come and I will tell him everything and I know that he will understand di "says payal

"whats left to understand?"says a voice

Note ; who is this person? How will payal her sister ?

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Posted: 12 years ago
Last to comment on part 20 and now fist to comment on part 21 😆
Awesome update Akash likes Payal and Payal also like Akash so cute 😳
I feel bad for both Arnav AND khushi 😭 i hope everything get well soon between them 😊
continue soon please and thank you for pm me
Edited by ASR6262 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ASR6262

Finally you update after long time
Awesome update very interesting story
continue soon please and thank u for pm me

ur welcome dear😉 and thanks for waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice part love it
I think Arnav was the last persone who entered the scene.
thanks for the pm

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