THE UNKNOWN/last part page 278 - Page 39

Originally posted by: sweet~n~simple

i totally with angad.... sucks is not a bad word!!!!!!!!!!! i hate it when people r all like ooooh u said a bad word (sucks)!!!!! but great part cont. sooon 😛

i also hate when ppl say the whole......"u said a bad word "it realy bugs me

Originally posted by: ~tweety~

hi night girl im new here and just read ur fan fic..... it is simply fabulous!!!!!!!!!!! 👏 👏 u hav really good ideas 😊 keep it comin 👍🏼
luv tweety

welcome to IF

gald u liked my fan fic

Originally posted by: sweet honey

plz plz cont fast i cant wait to find out what happens when they both r in detention 😛

in the next part something so great is going to happen

every one will be left shocked

and i dont thing every one is going to be all that happy when angad hugs kripa for more then 4 hours

ok i dont want to give away the big twist so just wait and read to find out 😉

sounds exciting plz post very soon my sister will take my laptop off me!

iam to tried to continue right now i will continue later today

great part 👏 👏 👏
con. soon 😛

part 16

it was after school and every one went home except angad and kripa......angad and kripa were the only ones left in detenshion

as kripa was doing her home work angad looked at the clock....we can hear the clock tick tick tick....each time the clock ticked angad became more and more restless untill angad finily craked

angad stands up and yells

a-(screams)OH GOD WHEN THE HELL WILL DETENSHION END!!!!!!!!!!!

teacher-mr.khanna its only been five mins and before i give u another week of detenshion i suggest u sit down now!!!!!!

angad sits back down and hits his head on the desk

kripa on the other hand just continued to do her home work and passing time by drawing

1 hour and 30 mins in to detenshion the headmaster comes in side the detenshion room and ask angad and kripa both to come in to his offic

headmaster-mr.khanna and mrs.sharma please come in my office(in a worried tone)

a-FINILLY GOD HAS ANSWERED MY PRAYER!!!!!!!

angad and kripa follow the headmaster to his office

inside the headmasters office

headmaster-please have a seat(his voice becomeing more and more weaker)

k-y have u called us

headmaster-i am sorry to mrs. sharma but when u were in detenshion your house caught on fire

k-what is my mom and dad ok

headmaster-iam sorry to say but

k-BUT WHAT!!!!(yelling in stress)

headmaster-iam sorry to say but they were burned in the fire no one surrvied

tears spilled out of kripas eye and angad who was siting beside of kripa didnt belive the headmaster

a-no ur lieing this cant be true(yelling and tears comeing out of his eyes)

headmaster-iam sorry....angad your father will be comeing here and so will kripas uncle and aunt(shauns parents) so we can deside where kripa will stay untill she is old enought to take care of her self

kripa broke down completly hearing about her parents death

k-NO MY PARENTS CANT BE DEAD.....THEY WERE WITH ME JUST THIS MOREING BEFORE I LEFT FOR SCHOOL HOW CAN THEY BE JUST GONE HOW!!!!!!!!(crying her eyes out)

angad hugs kripa as tears pilled out of kripas eyes and his

k-angad y did this happend to me y(tears falling out of kripas eyes)

angad was so in shock and as tears came out of angad and kripas eyes angad huged kripa more and more thinking this is a bad dream and the dream will end any second angad closed his eyes hopeing that when he opend his eye he will relise that all of this was just a bad dream but when angad opend his eyes he still saw kripa in his arms crying

as kripa cried more and more angad huged kripa more and more soon angad was huging kripa so closely that kripa was siting on angads lap crying

after about a few hours dillip and kripas aunt and uncle(ok every one i cant figuer out who will play kripas aunt and uncle so u all will just have to think how kripas aunt and uncle look like....i also cant think of a name for kripas aunt and uncle so i will have every one call kripas aunt and uncle by there last name which is the same as kripas last name, sharma) came in the office shaun was also there

as shuan saw kripa cry so much. shaun grabed kripa by the shoulders and made kripa sit down on a chair insead of angads lap

every one could tell that angad and kripa had been crying alot becuase both there eyes were blood shot red

kripas aunt=au
kripas uncle=u

d-kripa r u ok

kripa didnt listen to dillip and continued to cry the only thing that was run through kripas head was the headmasters words"u r parents r dead"

30mins later we see kripa still crying and every one still at angad and kripas school except the headmaster

kripas aunt+uncle and dillip were haveing a fight as to who will take care of kripa untill she is old enough to take care of her self

d-i think i should take care of kripa + i have know kripa longer then u have

u-i dont care kripa is part of my family now and i will take care of my brothers daugher

d-no i will take care of my best friends daugher plus iam the prim minister kripa will be a lot more safer with me then u

u-we dont care kripa has to stay with us she is part of my family

while all this was happening kripa was siting in a corner crying and angad was holding kripa in his arms cry with kripa


hope u like this part 😊
comeing up who will kripa deside to go with dillip or her uncle
next part comeing soon

yay im the first one to reply! 😆 😆 lolz...awesum job like usual! 😊 lubed it! 😃 do u think tat by any chance u can post 2 parts 2day?? plz...??? 😭 😆

Originally posted by: prakriti

yay im the first one to reply! 😆 😆 lolz...awesum job like usual! 😊 lubed it! 😃 do u think tat by any chance u can post 2 parts 2day?? plz...??? 😭 😆

ya i am going to post two parts today because today is a friday and i dont have school tommrow so i have no homework and so keep checking for part 17 today😃

awwwwwwww that was so sad! I almost cried. i hope she stays at angad's house! Cont. soon!