'HUMKO SIRF TUm SE PYAR HAI'(AR-updt 10/3/13 on34) - Page 9

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part-3 ---------------------------------
''''humko sirf tumse pyar hai''''

PART-3

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Riddhima went inside the house , asked servent.

Ri- ma kaha hai.

Servent- wo uper hai , aap jaldi jaiye aapko bula rahi hai.

She reached the room , where she saw suvarna standing at the door and some one was throwing thing out of the room.

Ri- maa kya kya hua.

Su- Dekh na pakhi (pakhi rai singhniya daughter or mihir and suvarna age-13 year, our very own mini , and armaan's chotu. Armaan lover her so much and so riddhima . she calles riddhima simraila(sim). When ever armaan plays a prank on ri she give idea to riddhima to take revenge from him) kisi ki baat nahi sun rahi.

Ri- kyu ma kya hua.

Su- arye wo tujhye raat ko wish karma chati thi but medicines ki wajah se wo so gayi, aura b naraj hai ki kisi ne use jagaya nahi.

Ri- ooh , don't worry ma mai dekhti hu.

Su- ha ye armaan aur pakhi na jab gussa aata hai na to bas kisi ki SUNTYE HI NAHI. BUS TU HI TO ISS PURI DUNIYA ME JO IN DONO KA GUSSA KABU ME KAR LETI HAI.

Riddhima was smiling at her .

Inside the room a cute 13 year old girl (pakhi, pk) sitting on her bed looking realy angry, and talking to her self.( she call riddhima simraila i.e sim)

Pk- no one cares about me. Maine sab ko bola ki mai bhi simraila ko raat 12 baje wish karugi; lekin sub ne bas mujhye dawai de kar sula diya. Our ab dekho koi sorry bhi nahi bolne aa raha hai.

Jab sim aygi to mai use kya bolugi. And bhai (armaan) unko maine bola tha sim ke liye gift lane ko wo to jarur bhool gaye hoge . uff ab mai sim se kya kahugi I didn't wished her and now I have no gift for her.

Just than riddhima enters the room see pakhi who was looking realy frustrated , she smiled seeing her sitting like that.

She sat next to pakhi , very slowly. Pakhi didn't realize coz she was too busy in her thoughts.

Ri- aaw my baby kyu gussa ho.

Pk- simraila tum yaha.( with a very cute face)

Ri- yap sweetheart, aur app itna gusse mai kyu hai.

Pk- (making a baby face) wo dekho na no one woke me up, I wanted 2 wish u 1st. and bhai ne mera gift bhi nahi laya hoga na.

Just then ridzi saw armaan , who was trying to come in the room by balcony.

Ri-(to herself) ohh god ye lav bhi na,

kabhi to darwajye ka use kar liya karo.

Subke room mai bas window se he enter hotye hai.

Now to pakhi.

Ri- o my baby aap abhi bhi hume wish kar sakti. Aur waise bhi

Apne to hume kal sham ko hi wish kar diya tha so u r the 1st one na.

Pk-(now smiling) ha wo to hai. But my gift.

Till now armaan was in the room , and he was talking to ridzi by miming , and she was also ans him in the same way.

Ar- pleading not to tell pakhi that he actually forgotten .

Ri- no baby lav ne hume aap ka gift de diya hai.

NOW armaan got scared that he will be coughed red handed so he just ran and placed a gift pack behind riddhima , and to distract pakhi he banged on ridzi.

Ri- lavvv what dis.

Ar- what , kitni der se tumhe dekha nahi tha mujhse raha nahi ja raha tha.( and signaled her about the gift behind her)

Ri- (gave him ye kabhi nahi sudhrege look), pakhi see I got the gift with me.

Pk- ohh realy ise khol ke dekh tymne.

Pakhi and riddhima talking while armaan playing with the long balk little curly hairs of riddhima.

Ri- lav what u r doing. (when ever his finger touches her body she feels shivers down her spine)

Ar- (with a very naughty smile) fishing.

And she just smiled as she knows him well.

Till now pakhi opened the packet.

Pk- wow super man commix and latest video games.

Ri- (gave armaan o frown look) lavv ye humrye liye hai ya apke liye.

Ar- oye hoye ye tumhre liye hai aur tum mere liye.( wink at ridzi)

Ri- ha ha , u r just imopsible.

Ar- dekho mai aapni sabse pyari chiz tumhe de raha hu aur tumhe koi kadra hi nahi hai.

Aur waise bhi mai bhul gaya tha to 5 minit me ye hi mila mere room mai.

Ri- aap na basss.

Ar- arye yaar tumhe acha nahi laga to kya see pakhi kitane kush hai( she was busy reading commix)

Ridzi smiled seeing pakhi happy.

Just than mushakan and a girl entered in the room and pakhi was still busy in commix.

Armaan - ye kaun hai.

Ri- ooh ye , ye sapna hai . kuch din pahle hi india se aayi hai. Aur humre hi college me hai.

Ar-ooo (naughty smile)

Mu- ha aur pata hai bhai ab ye meri aur ridzi ki bahut achi frnd ban gayi hai. She just came to wish ridzi.

Ar to ri very slowiy that only she can hear.

Ar- tum apni beautiful frnd ko humesh chupa ke kyu rakhti . ( and gave her his cute dimple flashing smile which she could not help so just smile)

Ar- hye sapna I am armaan rai singhniya nam to suna hi hoga.

Sp- yaa naam bahut suna hai.( she also sheaked hand with him)

Sp- hye ridzi many many happy returns of the day.(thye huged)

Ri- thanku so much sapna and sham ko party me aa rahi ho na.

Sp- ya sure.

Ar- hye tum party me kya pahnogi.

Sp- don't abhi tak decide nahi kiya. Aur tum'.

Ar- jo kuch ye mujhye pahane ko dede.(pointing toward riddhima)

Sp was smiling on that. While ridzi giving armaan a frown look.

Mu- hye why u are smiling like this. ( confused)

Sp- wooo nothing .

Mu ' bataoo na.

Sp- wo wo ye dono , ye dono..

Before she can say any thing pakhi said.

Pk- aise baat kartye hai jase simraila bhai ki bv ho.

Every one was shocked. Accept sapna as pakhi get the correct word.

Mushkan was giggling in her weird laugh, So others.

Armaan saw ev ery one laughing and riddhima's frown face as she was shocked.

Armaan held his arm around riddhima's shoulder and pulled her that she jammed in his chest.

Ar- to h hai na ye meri bv.

Now every one stoped laughing and started seeing both of them with confused look , so was ridzi.

Ar- haa ye hai meri basket virani , my bv.

Every one just bust out laughing and riddhima was giving ammy a deadly look.

Mu- ha aur pata hai spana , ye na bhai ko kya bulati hai'.

Pk- loveee

Sp- realyyy

Ridzi was hell irritated as every one was teasing her.

Ri- arye wo love wala llove nahi hai, ramayan, lav kuch wala lav hai. Aur deeda bhi lav hi kahati hai.

Every one 'ooo

Armaan saw ridzi's irritated face. So he came for rescue or for teasing her more.

Ar ' she is right. Actuly deeda mujhye lav kahti hai aur isse bachpan se deeda ko copy kane ka shaukh hai.

Just than suvarna called them . so they started going downstairs except ammy and riddzi.

Ri- aap ko bahut maja aata hai na hume tung karne mai, dekh sab hum par hash rahe thye.

Ar- awww wais eek baat puchu. (holding ridzi by wrist and puled her that now her hands r on ammy's chest)

Ri- heeem

Ar-(in a realy filmy style ) hum aapke hai kaun.

Ri-(evil smile) dushman aur kaun.

(she pussed him to ran from their but as he was holding her by wrist so both of them fell on bed, and ridzi is on top of armaan)

(they had a cute eye lock session, just than)

Ar- basket ye kya kar rahi ho koi aa jaye ga aur kisi ne dekh liya to.( with avery innocent face)

Ridzi was shocked as this line supposed to be her's.

She just turned her neck to see behind, and she saw sapna smiling at the door.

Now she knows why he said that. She turned towards him.

Ri- nautanki.(very slowly).

And goy up went to sapna while armaan sat on the bed binding his legs.

Ri- lav ki baato par dyan mat dena . he is the biggest nautanki ever. And he love teasing me.

And armaan was nodding his head like a cute baye in no.

Sapna just smiled at both of them.

Sp- chlye, armaan tum nahi aaoge.

Ar- naaa mujhye kuch kam hai.

They reached to the dining area.

Mu- hye ridzi this is ur gift, ye dress maine khud design ki hai.

Ri- awww thanks muski hum isse hi raat ko party me pahnege.

Mu- pahlye theek se dekh to le.

Ri- no muski tune design ki hai, toh isse achha to kuch ho hi nahi sakta.

Mu- awww thanku ridzi.

In evening-

Armaan again enters in riddhima's room by her balcony lender. She was standing in front of mirror. Armaan slowly reached her and stood just behind her.

Ri- lav aap yaha kya kar rahye hai , party ke liye taiyar nahi hona. Gest aana suru ho gaye hai.

Ar-sshhh arye tum na jab bolna suru karti ho to bas, jet speed mai aajati ho poss to liya karo.

Ri- ok ok.

Ar- maine abhi tumhe gift nahi diya na, wahi laya hu.

Ri-(very happily ) sachhi.

Armaan took her hair one side by his finger, and she felt chill wave through her spine, she closed her eyes.

She felt something on her neck so opened her eyes and found a beautiful chain with a heart shaped diamond locket in it..

Ri- lav its beautiful, simle but sooo pretty. She creased it with lots of love.

Ar- liked it naaa. Mujhye pata tha .

Armaan holds her by her shoulders from behind her, there images were visible in the mirror. Both were had a cute smile on their faces

Ar- I know its beautiful but now its looking just perfact.

Ri- okkk go now party mai sab wait kar rahye honge , hum jadi se reeady ho kar aatye hai.

Now in the party.- armaan soon changed , and reached to party in a black jacket and blue jeans looking really handsome a his killing dimples were making him hearthacker.

Ar- hye muski, sapna kya chal raha hai.

Mu- kuch nahi bro ridzi ka wait kar rahye hai..

Sp- hye armaan looking really handsome.

Ar- girl tell me something new.

Both mu sp- yaaa

Just then mihir and aditya caaled them.

mi- aao bacho , inse milo ye hai. Mr. ashok modi (as). Modi ampayers ke owner .

every one hello sir.

Ad- ye hai armaan , humara future , mai to bas wait kar raha hu ki issi studies khatam ho jaye and I can handover our business to him, phir hum dono dost mil kar aram karege. Kyo mihir.

mi- haa wo to hai.

As- helo armaan . waise mai bhi apne bete sid ki studies puri hone ka wait kar raha hu.

My son siddhant he is just brilliant. No one can match up with him. Waise sid se yaad aaya riddhima najar nahi aa rahi.

Armaan's ears alarmed- sid se riddhima kyo yaad aa rahi hai inhe.

Ad- wo bas aati he hogi.

As- ooo riddhima is such a nice girl, as preety as elegant, mai to bas uski jasi hi ek larki dekh raha hu apne sid ke liye.

Ar- dusari larki dekh ligiye warna durara beta dekhna parega.

As- kuch kaha tumne.

Ar- maine nahi to, aapne kuch suna kya..

Sapna heard that as she was standing next to armaan.

Now every one became busy in party.

Sp- so armaan whats ur status with ridzi.

Ar- whaaat.

Sp- yaa r u in a relationship with her.

Ar- nooo we r just best frnds.

Sp- oooh to wo tumhari gf nahi hai, and u doesn't love her.

Ar- of course I love her she is my best frnd naaa.

Sp- ufff , okkk what is the difference b/w love for her and other fnds.

Ar- likeee.

Sp- ok like muski is ur frnd.

Ar- oye wo meri behan hai.

Sp- ammm mai bhi to tumhari frnd hu na.

Ar- yaaa aur mai tumse aaj subah hi mila hu.

Sp- okkk what about rahul.

Ar- oyeee I am not like that haaa.

Sp- uff kaise samjhu.

Sp- okk what is most beautifull in her.

Ar- her eyes.

Sp- so tumne kabhi uski ankho mai khonye nahi.

Ar- no ans as he was now indeep thinking.

Sp- kabhi ye nahi laga ki wo iss duniya ki sabse khobsurat laki hai..

Just than he saw ridzi coming down by stairs and seeing her he was not able to blink his eyes. She was wearing a black gown, looking just wooow.

WEARING SOMTHING LIKE THIS
Seeing her armaan felt his heart racing fast.

Sp- use na dekhne par bechani nahi hoti.

Armaan got remembered how he get in her room in nights when he didn't seen her in day.

Sp- uske pass ane par kuch bhi feel nahi hota, uske sath khare hone par perfect feel nahi hota.

Armaan got flashes of some minuts ago when he was stading with her.

Sp- agar tumhe kuch bhi feel nahi hota to mr. modi ki baat

Ka itna bura kyo lag raha tha.

Ar- aaammm wo

Sp- ab koi na koi to use le hi jaye ga apne sath ab wo modi ho ya singhniya. Waise raha saktye wo uske bina.

Armaan was now lost, in her questions.

Ar- waise agar ye sab ho to kya pryar ho jata hai.

Sp- oye sab hone par pyar nahi hota.

Ar-(taking a rilif sight) oohh

Sp- ishka hota hai.

Just then muski called sapna

Sp- coming.

She went leaving armaan lost in himself.

Ar- (in his mind ) kya mujhye sach mai basket se ishka ho gaya hai.

So frnd this was it. Plz tell me do u like it or not I will be glad by ur views.

U can freely comment if didn't like it.

And don't write 'awesome' in comment. If u write then I will know u ppl didn't read the ff just commented .

Edited by ishkavirani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
hye its just wow i was a silent reader but want to tell u that who much i love ur ff so i made this id.
add me in ur buddies and do pm me.
when u update next.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: jalebi_bai007

hye its just wow i was a silent reader but want to tell u that who much i love ur ff so i made this id.

add me in ur buddies and do pm me.
when u update next.

OOO THANKS HOTI LIKE UR PIC. DID U REALY LOOK THE SAME.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84

hey...

it was awsome(oops i know i am not supposed to say awsome...as you'll feel like i haven't read it... but couldn't find a better word thaan this...lolz...)

and what abt ur other fic?? i love that too girl...

so update both of them pretty soon...

love

aditi

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Posted: 14 years ago
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read or not still thanks for commenting.
http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a386/kani89/Armaania.jpg
Edited by ishkavirani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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got u.
Edited by ishkavirani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks hope u really like it
Posted: 14 years ago
#88
superb update ishika.continue soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
hey i write @wesome part nt juz awesome😉
vaise i read d part😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
mind blowing update.
so armaan is going to realize his love ha can't wait. plz ctnu soon.

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