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Posted: 14 years ago

FF:MADLY IN LOVE WITH YOU

Part 6


Adi called his father for telling him about the meeting.Bajaj told him that maan's parents came to their home.

Bajaj:Mujhe aisa laga ka woh geet ka liye proposal le kar aaye hain.Isse pehle ka woh koi baat karte maine inhe geet aur dev ke shadi ka bare main bata diya.

Adi(Confused):Geet ka liye porposal maan ka??

Bajaj:Haan!

Adi:Acha mujhe koi kaam hai main aap se baad main baat karta hoon.

After the call,Adi started to think.

Adi(Thinking):Maan geet ko kyu propose kare ga woh tu kisse ladke se pyaar karta tha na??Tu kya woh ladke geet hai?

Adi remembered how maan's eyes twinkled with happiness when he told him that geet was also in the party.The way he was not paying attention to his questions and looking at somewhere else and adi also remembered that geet told him that maan saved her.

Adi(Thinking):Tu woh ladke geet thi.Per maan ne mujhe kyu nahi bataya iss bare main?Par ab main kya karoon?Maan dev se har cheez main bhetar (better) hai.Chalo kuch karta hoon.Pehle tu kal subha iss romeo ke khabir leta hoon.Pata nahi kya haal hua hoga maan ka geet ke shadi ka bare main jaan kar agar geet hi woh ladke hai.

Next day,Adi called at maan's home and came to know that maan and his parents went back to america.Adi tried to call maan on the cell but his mobile was switched off.

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1 year later,

At night, A guy was lying on the bed.He was watching the top while his mind was somewhere else.

Maan(His eyes were filled with tears):Kyu main itne koshish karne ka baad bhi tumhi bhool nahi pa raha??Kyu aisa lagta hai tum kisse problem main ho?

Hey kash..
Kash yun hota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota.

He stood up and walked towards the window of his room.He looked at the moon and started to imagine her face in moon.

Chup chap..
Dil na yun rota..
Har shaam..
Sath tu hota..

Maan:Agar aaj tum mere saath hote tu main tumhi batata ka main tumse kitna pyaar karta hoon'.Thauk (Tried) gaya hoon main geet'.Tumhi pata hai geet mama papa mere wajah se kitna pareshan hain.Main inke samne normal rahne ke koshish karta hoon per phir bhi woh mere dil ka haal jan lete hain.Tum hi batao geet main kya karoon??

Guzara ho tere, bin guzara
Ab muskil hai lagta
Nazara ho tera, hi nazara
Ab har din hai lagta'.

He went back to his bed and before closing his eyes.He said:

Maan:Main kal wapis India aa raha hoon.Tumse milna chahta hoon per mil nahi pao ga kyuki main tumhi kisse aur ka saath nahi dekh sakta hoon.


Haal e dil tujhko sunata
Dil agar yeh Bol pata
Bakhuda tujhko hai jata jaan..

Aaha tere sang jo pal bitata
Waqt se main woh mang lata
Yaad karke muskurata haan'


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At Handa Mansion,Meera took geet to the lawn.

Meera:Lets play tennis.

Geet(Seriously):Meera mera dil nahi kar raha.Tum aur yash khel lo.

Yash:Pleaseee na geet khelo na.(Tried to cheer her up) Waise bhi tum bhethe bhethe aur moti ho jao ge.

Geet:Please yash mujhe force na karo mera khelne ka koi mood nahi hai main andar ja rahe hoon.

Geet went inside.Meera and yash looked at eachother sadly.

Meera(Tears in her eyes):Yash mujhe apne aik saal pehle wale friend wapis chahiye!

Yash:Kash main kuch kar sakta.I wish ka koi humare purane wale geet ko wapis le aaye.

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On 11:30 am,Maan's flight landed.He came out of the airport.Meanwhile geet came out in the garden.Suddenly petals of flowers started to fall on her face.She felt like she would get some happiness soon...



PRECAP: Maan and adi's meeting.Maan to confess love for geet

VM on song haal e dil:


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=MH9VKmTPUFI[/YOUTUBE]

(Credit goes to the vm maker)

Edited by pickachu - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
NOTE:
I have updated part 6.
I hope u guys like the part!
I was thinking abt discontinuing this FF!
B/c i think that this ff is boring but due to few readers i have changed my decision!
I'm trying to put maneet scenes but rightnow maneet scenes don't fit in this situation!
Once they will start to come close u will get many maneet scenes!
Pleaseee leave ur comments even if u don't like the part!



Love,
Fatima

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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update...
awww adi knws abt maan's luv..
hmmm leap... cant wait for the next one..
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome
plz dont discontinue ur ff
i loved it
cont soon
waiting for maan confession
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome update...

awww adi knws abt maan's luv..
hmmm leap... cant wait for the next one..
continue soon



Thanxx for liking the part!
Adi will be the person who will bring maneet closer!
I will try to update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved it, hope to see maaneet soon in the next part.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

awesome

plz dont discontinue ur ff
i loved it
cont soon
waiting for maan confession
thanks for pm



Thanxx for liking the part!
Don't worry i will not discontinue this ff Inshaa Allah!
I will try to update soon!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: seemamary

Loved it, hope to see maaneet soon in the next part.



Thanxx for liking it😃!
Don't worry maneet will be there in next or next to next part for sure😳!
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Posted: 14 years ago


Nice update ⭐️

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon

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